Schadenfreude vs Unfukwitable - UNF WINS

Orc · 12-27-2017, 06:10 AM

Netcees Battle League: The Legends Edition

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday Jan 4th and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!

@Schadenfreude @Unfukwitable

Unfukwitable · 12-27-2017, 12:20 PM

12

Schadenfreude · 12-27-2017, 03:32 PM

S'getit.

Unfukwitable · 12-28-2017, 11:48 PM

Ext

Unfukwitable · 12-30-2017, 02:11 AM

Just me, a Bayonet w/ a Sharp blade wedged in the front,
his HEAD START eRase'n off after get'n the Edge from the Gun..
bullets in em turn his army to Armory & his sights gettin worse,
Shells living inside him He'll live a Turtles life in reverse
U Pissed Off...? well before u get a Psst Off, a Pump pound ya,
Hotheads get Under ya skin til ya Blood boils in Gun powder.
^Basically ima kill u no matter the vibe,
U gave Hush Puppie eye's he left u Battered and fried
It's A price on Schads head and Al couldn't get the bands,
Lemme work my Magic Karp.. I'm Splashing every time I get the chance!
Gunbar'd him to death... its a gritty sentence,
But I had to Cred it, Karma's here to settle scores w/ a 357

Schadenfreude · 01-03-2018, 10:00 PM

aka Noquear, look..

Few uppers w/ Red Bull s’got Me in an unstable rage,
‘nuff to cut him in half, leave furniture crashed next to ‘table legs.
Beaten nobodies, one good match to every 40 u’re in
even horrid in wins, can’t call u a pro, Choice was like aborting a kid.
Barely motivated, so whothefuck said this bum is fire,
I’ll have the .4 clear Noquear, even his own murder’s Un inspired.
Chick’s rated 1 short of 6, still you support the bitch..
fucked er’body, whole team’s smacked ‘5’..wasn’t for sportsmanship.
Insane how the Tomahawk’ll turn ya mid into pork rib,
like New Year’s, hospice’ll nurse the hangover longer than Orc did.
His homies’ll witness the homi, leave this punk bloody
hazardous tec having casual sex, throw pussy all over Fuk buddies.

..BODY.

classickERBL · 01-04-2018, 01:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Unfukwitable

Just me, a Bayonet w/ a Sharp blade wedged in the front,
his HEAD START eRase'n off after get'n the Edge from the Gun..
AHHH!!
bullets in em turn his army to Armory & his sights gettin worse,
Shells living inside him He'll live a Turtles life in reverse
FIREEEE !!!
U Pissed Off...? well before u get a Psst Off, a Pump pound ya,
Hotheads get Under ya skin til ya Blood boils in Gun powder.
MEAN !!
^Basically ima kill u no matter the vibe,
U gave Hush Puppie eye's he left u Battered and fried
It's A price on Schads head and Al couldn't get the bands,
Lemme work my Magic Karp.. I'm Splashing every time I get the chance!
Gunbar'd him to death... its a gritty sentence,
But I had to Cred it, Karma's here to settle scores w/ a 357

DOPE

Quote:

Originally Posted by Schadenfreude

aka Noquear, look..

Few uppers w/ Red Bull s’got Me in an unstable rage,
‘nuff to cut him in half, leave furniture crashed next to ‘table legs.
COOL
Beaten nobodies, one good match to every 40 u’re in
even horrid in wins, can’t call u a pro, Choice was like aborting a kid.
Barely motivated, so whothefuck said this bum is fire,
I’ll have the .4 clear Noquear, even his own murder’s Un inspired.
Chick’s rated 1 short of 6, still you support the bitch..
fucked er’body, whole team’s smacked ‘5’..wasn’t for sportsmanship.
FIRE
Insane how the Tomahawk’ll turn ya mid into pork rib,
like New Year’s, hospice’ll nurse the hangover longer than Orc did.
His homies’ll witness the homi, leave this punk bloody
hazardous tec having casual sex, throw pussy all over Fuk buddies.
DOPE

..BODY.

good battle , i got FUK winning , i like his aggressive style and gun bars
v - unfukwitable

BROKE LESNAR · 01-04-2018, 05:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Unfukwitable

Just me, a Bayonet w/ a Sharp blade wedged in the front,
his HEAD START eRase'n off after get'n the Edge from the Gun..

☆☆☆

bullets in em turn his army to Armory & his sights gettin worse,
Shells living inside him He'll live a Turtles life in reverse

☆☆☆☆☆ lmao

U Pissed Off...? well before u get a Psst Off, a Pump pound ya,
Hotheads get Under ya skin til ya Blood boils in Gun powder.

☆☆☆☆☆

^Basically ima kill u no matter the vibe,
U gave Hush Puppie eye's he left u Battered and fried

☆☆☆☆☆ dope

It's A price on Schads head and Al couldn't get the bands,
Lemme work my Magic Karp.. I'm Splashing every time I get the chance!

☆

Gunbar'd him to death... its a gritty sentence,
But I had to Cred it, Karma's here to settle scores w/ a 357

☆

Quote:

Originally Posted by Schadenfreude

aka Noquear, look..

Few uppers w/ Red Bull s’got Me in an unstable rage,
‘nuff to cut him in half, leave furniture crashed next to ‘table legs.

☆ using "table" from unfukwitable was desperate

Beaten nobodies, one good match to every 40 u’re in
even horrid in wins, can’t call u a pro, Choice was like aborting a kid.

☆the multis here didn't do much to disguise the ineffectiveness of the punch, use them to accentuate the punch, not overdress them to distract from quality

Barely motivated, so whothefuck said this bum is fire,
I’ll have the .4 clear Noquear, even his own murder’s Un inspired.

☆☆☆☆☆

Chick’s rated 1 short of 6, still you support the bitch..
fucked er’body, whole team’s smacked ‘5’..wasn’t for sportsmanship.

☆

Insane how the Tomahawk’ll turn ya mid into pork rib,
like New Year’s, hospice’ll nurse the hangover longer than Orc did.

☆

His homies’ll witness the homi, leave this punk bloody
hazardous tec having casual sex, throw pussy all over Fuk buddies.

☆ lmao @ hazardous tec having casual sex wtf yo

..BODY.

Fuk takes it rather easily. He didn't have to drop flawless to win, but he did have some fire. Schad, look bro. Everybody lets you slide because of your multi usage. They're pretty decent, but you allow yourself to get caught up in sacrificing the punch for them. Try using them exclusively at the end of each line instead of cramming them into the bar. Doing this will allow for greater creativity and emphasis on the punch.

setup/multi
closer/multi

not

setup/multi
multi/closer/multi

You actually did what I'm suggesting you do in your last several bars, but you come across as uncomfortable when doing that. Stay with THAT style, build on it, perfect it, own it.

v-Fuk

For Battling · 01-04-2018, 09:09 PM

Just me, a Bayonet w/ a Sharp blade wedged in the front,
his HEAD START eRase'n off after get'n the Edge from the Gun..
wordy, made it hard to read, decent line
bullets in em turn his army to Armory & his sights gettin worse,
Shells living inside him He'll live a Turtles life in reverse
ooo I liked this
U Pissed Off...? well before u get a Psst Off, a Pump pound ya,
Hotheads get Under ya skin til ya Blood boils in Gun powder.
wasnt feelin it
^Basically ima kill u no matter the vibe,
U gave Hush Puppie eye's he left u Battered and fried
nice
It's A price on Schads head and Al couldn't get the bands,
Lemme work my Magic Karp.. I'm Splashing every time I get the chance!
played
Gunbar'd him to death... its a gritty sentence,
But I had to Cred it, Karma's here to settle scores w/ a 357
had potential but only turned out decent

Vs

Few uppers w/ Red Bull s’got Me in an unstable rage,
‘nuff to cut him in half, leave furniture crashed next to ‘table legs.
nah this doesn’t work
Beaten nobodies, one good match to every 40 u’re in
even horrid in wins, can’t call u a pro, Choice was like aborting a kid.
fuckin dope
Barely motivated, so whothefuck said this bum is fire,
I’ll have the .4 clear Noquear, even his own murder’s Un inspired.
hmm ok
Chick’s rated 1 short of 6, still you support the bitch..
fucked er’body, whole team’s smacked ‘5’..wasn’t for sportsmanship.
lol alright
Insane how the Tomahawk’ll turn ya mid into pork rib,
like New Year’s, hospice’ll nurse the hangover longer than Orc did.
decent at best
His homies’ll witness the homi, leave this punk bloody
hazardous tec having casual sex, throw pussy all over Fuk buddies
LOLLL...this is such a reach & you know this

Unfuk: 2 good, 2 decent
Scad: 3 good, 1 decent

Damn this is close, scab had LOTB with pro choice, that shit was fire. This will definitely be a back and forth battle

Vote scab

Alvin Karpis · 01-04-2018, 09:36 PM

Names mentioned but for once i agree with broke

Schads - multis are not needed as much, you got that j fresh style but lack the swag
Un got the consistency, misses were less bad

No real standouts but Un got it

Profit · 01-05-2018, 01:24 AM

Just me, a Bayonet w/ a Sharp blade wedged in the front,
his HEAD START eRase'n off after get'n the Edge from the Gun..

Ok

bullets in em turn his army to Armory & his sights gettin worse,
Shells living inside him He'll live a Turtles life in reverse

Nice

U Pissed Off...? well before u get a Psst Off, a Pump pound ya,
Hotheads get Under ya skin til ya Blood boils in Gun powder.

Nice

^Basically ima kill u no matter the vibe,
U gave Hush Puppie eye's he left u Battered and fried

Dope

It's A price on Schads head and Al couldn't get the bands,
Lemme work my Magic Karp.. I'm Splashing every time I get the chance!

Nice

Gunbar'd him to death... its a gritty sentence,
But I had to Cred it, Karma's here to settle scores w/ a 357

I fuck with this

Few uppers w/ Red Bull s’got Me in an unstable rage,
‘nuff to cut him in half, leave furniture crashed next to ‘table legs.

Toooo forced

Beaten nobodies, one good match to every 40 u’re in
even horrid in wins, can’t call u a pro, Choice was like aborting a kid.

Cool

Barely motivated, so whothefuck said this bum is fire,
I’ll have the .4 clear Noquear, even his own murder’s Un inspired.

Fire!

Chick’s rated 1 short of 6, still you support the bitch..
fucked er’body, whole team’s smacked ‘5’..wasn’t for sportsmanship.

Dope

Insane how the Tomahawk’ll turn ya mid into pork rib,
like New Year’s, hospice’ll nurse the hangover longer than Orc did.

Cool

His homies’ll witness the homi, leave this punk bloody
hazardous tec having casual sex, throw pussy all over Fuk buddies.

Ehhh

I liked this match, thought both had some pretty dope shit. Felt schade had two misses that cost um here as to 1 from Un. Woulda been tuff if u lanes 1 of those cos u had sum hot shit but I got UN winning this..
________

Habitat · 01-05-2018, 05:57 PM

unfuk

liked turtle life in reverse
hot heads / blood boil was dope i thought
hush puppie was dope too
magic carp was cool

vs

shad

pro choice was ok

wasn't really feeling anything else man.

I got unfuk here

v/unfuk

Pinot Grij · 01-05-2018, 07:08 PM

Unfuk -- turtles line is funny af. Hush puppies is deece. Closer is really cool too.

Schad -- table legs is a good attempt to get around played out personals, not sure it hit the hardest though but appreciate the originality. Fuk buddies is good. There was a lot of serious reaches in the middle... you admitted lacking inspiration in this one and it kinda showed -- the smack 5 was a good punch line, but the set up was reaching. Anyways, know this is far from your best showing.

Vote -- Unfukwitable

12-27-2017, 06:10 AM	#1
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,165 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899390	Schadenfreude vs Unfukwitable - UNF WINS Netcees Battle League: The Legends Edition Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday Jan 4th and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! @Schadenfreude @Unfukwitable

12-27-2017, 12:20 PM	#2
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,628 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460385	12 __________________ WICKeD

12-27-2017, 03:32 PM	#3
Schadenfreude Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!! Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 1,408 Battle Record: 42-22 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Tag Team Titles - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 21049081	S'getit. __________________ Aali hupatikana kwa ghali.

12-28-2017, 11:48 PM	#4
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,628 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460385	Ext __________________ WICKeD

12-30-2017, 02:11 AM	#5
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,628 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460385	Just me, a Bayonet w/ a Sharp blade wedged in the front, his HEAD START eRase'n off after get'n the Edge from the Gun.. bullets in em turn his army to Armory & his sights gettin worse, Shells living inside him He'll live a Turtles life in reverse U Pissed Off...? well before u get a Psst Off, a Pump pound ya, Hotheads get Under ya skin til ya Blood boils in Gun powder. ^Basically ima kill u no matter the vibe, U gave Hush Puppie eye's he left u Battered and fried It's A price on Schads head and Al couldn't get the bands, Lemme work my Magic Karp.. I'm Splashing every time I get the chance! Gunbar'd him to death... its a gritty sentence, But I had to Cred it, Karma's here to settle scores w/ a 357 __________________ WICKeD Last edited by Unfukwitable; 12-30-2017 at 02:19 AM.

01-03-2018, 10:00 PM	#6
Schadenfreude Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!! Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 1,408 Battle Record: 42-22 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Tag Team Titles - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 21049081	aka Noquear, look.. Few uppers w/ Red Bull s’got Me in an unstable rage, ‘nuff to cut him in half, leave furniture crashed next to ‘table legs. Beaten nobodies, one good match to every 40 u’re in even horrid in wins, can’t call u a pro, Choice was like aborting a kid. Barely motivated, so whothefuck said this bum is fire, I’ll have the .4 clear Noquear, even his own murder’s Un inspired. Chick’s rated 1 short of 6, still you support the bitch.. fucked er’body, whole team’s smacked ‘5’..wasn’t for sportsmanship. Insane how the Tomahawk’ll turn ya mid into pork rib, like New Year’s, hospice’ll nurse the hangover longer than Orc did. His homies’ll witness the homi, leave this punk bloody hazardous tec having casual sex, throw pussy all over Fuk buddies. ..BODY. Last edited by Schadenfreude; 01-04-2018 at 05:30 AM.

01-04-2018, 09:09 PM	#9
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633912	Just me, a Bayonet w/ a Sharp blade wedged in the front, his HEAD START eRase'n off after get'n the Edge from the Gun.. wordy, made it hard to read, decent line bullets in em turn his army to Armory & his sights gettin worse, Shells living inside him He'll live a Turtles life in reverse ooo I liked this U Pissed Off...? well before u get a Psst Off, a Pump pound ya, Hotheads get Under ya skin til ya Blood boils in Gun powder. wasnt feelin it ^Basically ima kill u no matter the vibe, U gave Hush Puppie eye's he left u Battered and fried nice It's A price on Schads head and Al couldn't get the bands, Lemme work my Magic Karp.. I'm Splashing every time I get the chance! played Gunbar'd him to death... its a gritty sentence, But I had to Cred it, Karma's here to settle scores w/ a 357 had potential but only turned out decent Vs Few uppers w/ Red Bull s’got Me in an unstable rage, ‘nuff to cut him in half, leave furniture crashed next to ‘table legs. nah this doesn’t work Beaten nobodies, one good match to every 40 u’re in even horrid in wins, can’t call u a pro, Choice was like aborting a kid. fuckin dope Barely motivated, so whothefuck said this bum is fire, I’ll have the .4 clear Noquear, even his own murder’s Un inspired. hmm ok Chick’s rated 1 short of 6, still you support the bitch.. fucked er’body, whole team’s smacked ‘5’..wasn’t for sportsmanship. lol alright Insane how the Tomahawk’ll turn ya mid into pork rib, like New Year’s, hospice’ll nurse the hangover longer than Orc did. decent at best His homies’ll witness the homi, leave this punk bloody hazardous tec having casual sex, throw pussy all over Fuk buddies LOLLL...this is such a reach & you know this Unfuk: 2 good, 2 decent Scad: 3 good, 1 decent Damn this is close, scab had LOTB with pro choice, that shit was fire. This will definitely be a back and forth battle Vote scab

01-04-2018, 09:36 PM	#10
Alvin Karpis 2020 Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 647 Battle Record: 34-12 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Summer Classic V - Summer Classic IV - NBL Season 7 - BA Swag and Flow - BA Swag & Flow Tournament II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV Rep Power: 4052844	Names mentioned but for once i agree with broke Schads - multis are not needed as much, you got that j fresh style but lack the swag Un got the consistency, misses were less bad No real standouts but Un got it

01-05-2018, 01:24 AM	#11
Profit Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2017 Posts: 106 Battle Record: 10-8 Rep Power: 53065	Just me, a Bayonet w/ a Sharp blade wedged in the front, his HEAD START eRase'n off after get'n the Edge from the Gun.. Ok bullets in em turn his army to Armory & his sights gettin worse, Shells living inside him He'll live a Turtles life in reverse Nice U Pissed Off...? well before u get a Psst Off, a Pump pound ya, Hotheads get Under ya skin til ya Blood boils in Gun powder. Nice ^Basically ima kill u no matter the vibe, U gave Hush Puppie eye's he left u Battered and fried Dope It's A price on Schads head and Al couldn't get the bands, Lemme work my Magic Karp.. I'm Splashing every time I get the chance! Nice Gunbar'd him to death... its a gritty sentence, But I had to Cred it, Karma's here to settle scores w/ a 357 I fuck with this Few uppers w/ Red Bull s’got Me in an unstable rage, ‘nuff to cut him in half, leave furniture crashed next to ‘table legs. Toooo forced Beaten nobodies, one good match to every 40 u’re in even horrid in wins, can’t call u a pro, Choice was like aborting a kid. Cool Barely motivated, so whothefuck said this bum is fire, I’ll have the .4 clear Noquear, even his own murder’s Un inspired. Fire! Chick’s rated 1 short of 6, still you support the bitch.. fucked er’body, whole team’s smacked ‘5’..wasn’t for sportsmanship. Dope Insane how the Tomahawk’ll turn ya mid into pork rib, like New Year’s, hospice’ll nurse the hangover longer than Orc did. Cool His homies’ll witness the homi, leave this punk bloody hazardous tec having casual sex, throw pussy all over Fuk buddies. Ehhh I liked this match, thought both had some pretty dope shit. Felt schade had two misses that cost um here as to 1 from Un. Woulda been tuff if u lanes 1 of those cos u had sum hot shit but I got UN winning this.. ________

01-05-2018, 05:57 PM	#12
Habitat Make my day Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 742 Battle Record: 8-6 Champed - 1-2 LR Tournament Rep Power: 7519558	unfuk liked turtle life in reverse hot heads / blood boil was dope i thought hush puppie was dope too magic carp was cool vs shad pro choice was ok wasn't really feeling anything else man. I got unfuk here v/unfuk __________________

01-05-2018, 07:08 PM	#13
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195060	Unfuk -- turtles line is funny af. Hush puppies is deece. Closer is really cool too. Schad -- table legs is a good attempt to get around played out personals, not sure it hit the hardest though but appreciate the originality. Fuk buddies is good. There was a lot of serious reaches in the middle... you admitted lacking inspiration in this one and it kinda showed -- the smack 5 was a good punch line, but the set up was reaching. Anyways, know this is far from your best showing. Vote -- Unfukwitable __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.