11-21-2016, 10:05 PM | #1 |
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Slechtn 0-1 vs Legion 1-0 - Slechtn WINS
NBL Season 10 Week 2 Due SUNDAY 11/27/16 Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines - NO BITING - NO FEEDING - NO SWAYING - AGREE ON LINE LIMIT Don't edit after your opponent has posted. 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in. Don't be an idiot. Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle. May God have mercy on your souls! @Slechtn @Legion |
11-21-2016, 10:12 PM | #2 |
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believes he had a classic match in the summer but it was shitty gutter, Oneduh played him with a keystyle 'n it was butter like a Stevie Cover. squad full of a killers that'll cause damage to his walk, They're Road Warriors that'll tag Legion...that's Animal & Hawk. To run over him straight with a set, it'll just take a me sec; everyone knows I'll do great, either way I'm breakin' a leg. Fam full of dumb fucks but I feel no pity, shoot his pops.. leave him fatherless, that's the closest he'll be to being witty. don't believe in me? i'll have shawty martyred, prolly slaughtered; got military tactics & a chest rig, ...more than enough to body armor. find him dead in the lobby when I beam up the shottie, call this a Batmobile type homi,...he's leavin' with wings on his body.
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11-24-2016, 07:20 PM | #5 |
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Multiple styles. You need AT LEAST two to even come searching for me.
But you don't have a Secondary, and that's why you're the worst in the League. I'll knock you the fuck out and won't ever reach for the heater. Damage his bones. the way you'll Drop from these Hands of Stone, you could be an Eagles Receiver. One hook'll send you on a permanent vacay. Get robbed for his Segway. Cause if this battle shit don't Workout, Im in your driveway Squattin with the Metal, Leg Day. 0-1 isn't a good start to the season. Face the facts. Your Lines are gonna lose the battle every Week, and only the browns can relate to that. Making threads, PMing dio. Legion will smack this punk clown so Don't start acting tough now. Those are Cardinal sins, so I'll take the Louisville to him, that's a Lamar Jackson touchdown. Fuck with me. Gloves leaving no prints on the nose grip. Voters know this. I'm Dressed for the occasion. And you're lying Under Armour in a Cold Ditch Body.
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11-26-2016, 07:11 AM | #6 |
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11-26-2016, 02:52 PM | #7 |
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i dunno fellas but i wasnt feel both verses tbh, some ok conxepts poorly executed and some were just so so, i got slechn with the win tho with that fatherless witty line and the other body armour line was decent, legion only bar i liked was ur last one but it wasn't enuff..
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11-26-2016, 10:22 PM | #8 |
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Lackluster matchup here, I've read better verses from Slechtn, I liked the concepts, but your wording hurt the impact of the punches. Never heard of Legion, first time reading your material, not terrible, but you need to polish up that wording, to make the punchline come across smotther & harsher. The reason I went w/ Slechtn's because his concepts were a bit more creative, even if he didn't correctly execute. Legion's concepts were cool, just somewhat standard, for lack of a better word.
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11-27-2016, 10:18 AM | #9 |
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Slecht, I liked the road warriors jawn
Legion too many bad sports bars, leg day was cool but if worded better it'd be dope I got sclect
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11-27-2016, 08:12 PM | #10 |
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Legion had a lot of what I call soft punches. Nothing impressive or thought provoking, but a decent verse.
I've seen better from Slecht but "Fam full of dumb fucks but I feel no pity, shoot his pops.. leave him fatherless, that's the closest he'll be to being witty." was nice even though we're about a month or so beyond that event (RIP papa Witty) Anyways.. I've got Slecht in this one just for a more polished verse
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11-27-2016, 09:39 PM | #11 |
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squad full of a killers that'll cause damage to his walk,
They're Road Warriors that'll tag Legion...that's Animal & Hawk. shoot his pops.. leave him fatherless, that's the closest he'll be to being witty. don't believe in me? i'll have shawty martyred, prolly slaughtered; got military tactics & a chest rig, ...more than enough to body armor. vs One hook'll send you on a permanent vacay. Get robbed for his Segway. Cause if this battle shit don't Workout, Im in your driveway Squattin with the Metal, Leg Day. Fuck with me. Gloves leaving no prints on the nose grip. Voters know this. I'm Dressed for the occasion. And you're lying Under Armour in a Cold Ditch seeen way better from slecht but the animal and hawk line was fire rest was decent leg day was cool cool ditch line slecht taking this with a more complex approach than leg legion can be nice , just gotta work on his set ups
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