Wear Shhh 3-3 vs Toil 2-1 (GIMMICK) - TOIL WINS

[Orc]

NBL Season 9


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[Toil]

You gonna drop 8 concepts for us @Orc?

[SHECK WES]

I could really use some concepts right about now

[Toil]

Or @Useless?

[Orc]

Hoover
The Moon
Corkscrew
Chris Jericho
Bedsheet
Compass
Simon Cowell
Church Bell

[Toil]

Thanks. 16 lines good?

[SHECK WES]

Uh well yeah lol

[Toil]

Originally Posted by Wear Shhh

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nah didn't like this either

^Wtf u critiquing? Next ull rate the tone of my signature..
..such an embarrassing Breakdown, ya got Chris Jericho disowning his finisher
Already beat ya once and I was only part trying
Facing T’s like church bells at funerals: time to say your prayers and start crying
Put a taser to ya knees and squeeze, make ya feel the love
Proof the moon landing weren’t real? Just watch this ‘fake Neil and Buzz’..
I play footsie with ladies when I’m out on the prowl..
..this fag couldn’t get ‘Randy sat next to some girl’, if he was Simon Cowell
How do u have a hoe? Can’t imagine any chick with this loser
She must be straight Fucking Dirt, like when ya put ya dick in that hoover
Give u a lead treat, when my shotgun and ya head meet
Two holes’ll make ya a ghost real quick...need a name change to Bedsheet
“Hey Orc, can I get an award?” ya the biggest gay on the board
Like the compass on a map: ur never far from a Legend, but always ignored
Ya sex technique’s the Corkscrew, chicks barely feel ya dick..
..ya method’s just: little prick enters, twists about...then pulls out real quick

[SHECK WES]

Ext plz

[Toil]

Fine by me

[SHECK WES]

Ur old ass won last time, this time I'm gettin the point. And 1
You've been dying for free concepts. Boy u been washed up under the Hoover.....DAAAAAAMN son (wet)
U take walks on the beach wit ya girl that's cute, but it's gon end real soon
Cuz I'll astronomically fuck ur girl in a trans. Above & Beyond - Sun & Moon
Then I'll take ur other girl, she gets mad cuz I fuck for hours (ours)
Soon as I'm poppin cork, screw the Winey whore under champagne showers
Save it buddy I'm taking allllll the towns hens & girl
See that mushroom cloud? They call me Jericho, U'll be in the dark when I end ur whirl (world)
I fucked your mom and made her twerk, now I feel like dirt
Had her squirtin for hours over the bed, sheeeeeeet now I'm late for work!
Enough wit the gay shit fagit, don't show me affection
knife like a compass, cuz it's pointing ur way no matter the direction
Ur fat and ugly, even a Cowell be surely afraid
Simon sayssssssssssssssssss get off the stage
She could hear those church bells ringing, ringing
And up in the loft, that whole choir singing, singinG

[Kenny the OG]

I'm going to vote based on who did each individual concept better.

Hoover... toil got it with an all around better punch. Effectiveness, wording and creativity.

The Moon... didn't really like the execution of either bar but toil had the better punch. The fake kneel angle was nice.

Corkscrew... in this case toil had the cleaner wording but the punch itself was flat. Wear had shoddy wording but the punch just hit harder to me so I'll give him this one.

Chris Jericho... toil. In all aspects

Bedsheet... gawddamn toil hit him with that fire. Bar was hard af. I respect wears attempt here, alitttle outside of the box and kinda humorous but the execution just isn't hittin.

Compass... wears cleanest bar but toil still outdid him. One of the more closer concept vs concept matchups of this battle.

Simon cowell... toil. In all aspects

Church bells... toils bar was basic but what THE fuck at wears church bell bar. Bruh. That shit, please. Don't do that in any battle in any format whether online or in real life again. I'm appalled.


Vote- toil with the near ko

[SHECK WES]

Can I redo this shit

[Schadenfreude]

No u can not, TOIL, was mean & clean w/ usage of concepts. Effective wording & executed w/ impeccable harshness - 'bedsheet' was crazy lotb. Yea so he pretty much bodied u Zelph, sorry bruh..lol.

[SHECK WES]

Damn son that bed sheet line was crazy good shit

[sral]

yeah that bedsheet bar dope as fuck hahaha

[Barcotic]

embarrassing breakdown was nice
fake kneel & buzz was cool
randy sat next to some girl was corny af but creative enough to get a mention
fucking dirt was decent
bedsheet was easily lotb

vs

zelph's bed sheet line hit as well but nowhere near as good as toil's

tbr I'm never really down w/ these "gimmick" battles but toil was slick w/ this one, he wins convincingly

v/toil

[jilti]

Toil had Facing T's & bedsheet which were fire. Simon cowell & fake neil & buzz were good.
Zelph started out slow but ended well with bedsheet, compass, and simon says


Toil was too consistent throughout

V/ toil

[MFtastick]

Toll killed shit. Just too consistent throughout. Dude zelph had flames but took a bit to pick up. Good shit y'all

W toil

[Saint]

Toil got it, did well on the concepts he had.
Wear went for humor but almost like he trolled..

I liked breakdown, bed sheet, and Simon cowell the best

vote toil