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Old 08-18-2015, 01:27 AM   #1
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REBUTTAL OPTION - agreement on rebuttal battle + first bars due wednesday. Check the new rule thread for specifics

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Old 08-18-2015, 03:20 AM   #2
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Old 08-18-2015, 03:41 PM   #3
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Cool preview lol


Rebuttal er wat @iSpaz?


Oh I guess u sayin yes.....

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Old 08-20-2015, 02:57 AM   #4
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crap my bad g, quick

you a fat mofo. i read ur lines in slo mo and your face is chunky.
so keep thinkin you the big dog on site.. we all know you just really husky.
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Old 08-20-2015, 09:19 PM   #5
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U nutty as an acorn shell thinkin u won't take this L
must be out ya tree trynna hang on this board get u aired like a play fort fell
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Old 08-22-2015, 05:13 PM   #6
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isapz didnt really hit hard but compared to "must be out ya tree trynna hang on this board get u aired like a play fort fell" wtf was that? ?

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Old 08-23-2015, 06:45 AM   #7
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I really tried to get Bags bar. Feel it's probably really creative but I've read it a number of ways an I just can't see what he was going for other then maybe it's most literal meaning...

Love to know what I was missing but I'll have to vote spaz for this though it wasbt great it least made sense to me.

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Old 08-23-2015, 11:23 AM   #8
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Spaz was too simple.

V. Bags
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Old 08-23-2015, 10:37 PM   #9
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wasnt really a fan of both bars but one was better to me v/Bags
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Old 08-24-2015, 06:45 AM   #10
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didnt get Bags shit though it prob went over my head.

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Old 08-24-2015, 12:16 PM   #11
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got bags here
that was a clever play with like three wordplays
the other was a played husky wp

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Old 08-24-2015, 08:07 PM   #12
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spaz had much better delivery but a done concept.

Bags had a cooler scheme (hang on this board/playfort) but it took me a second read to actually get it. Just cause I seen so many battles like this before I tend to go concepts over wording so my edge is bags. close af but

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Old 08-24-2015, 08:15 PM   #13
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Spaz

The fuck bags taking. Out out ur tree?


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Old 08-24-2015, 08:26 PM   #14
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this is okish but very corny.
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must be out ya tree trynna hang on this board get u aired like a play fort fell
this concept is decent but i don't think you worded the punch well
didn't really love either of these but iSpaz had a slightly better fip. Bags had the better concept but slipped on the execution.

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Old 08-24-2015, 09:27 PM   #15
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I mean you tied it in bags. The setup flow was smooth but the punchline was clumsy. Spaz was hella corny and straightforward but made his point

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Old 08-24-2015, 11:21 PM   #16
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I didn't follow what Bags was putting out there, at all. Feel bad voting with that in mind. But MVGT iSpaz.
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