2. Sn00p vs 10. iSpaz - SN00P WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

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Due Dates:

• Verses are due Monday , August 17th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

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• Minimum of 12, maximum of 18
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

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First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Sn00p @iSpaz

[iSpaz]

Yea 16

[Sn00p]

Aight.

[iSpaz]

Lets make it another upset...

Ayy..

I'm Picture perfect. Cold Blooded when i hurt vets I'll have this man killed.
When I take these Head Shots like a photographer.. it's only cuz I hold that cam still.
You just a Baby. You been realll lazy so you'll end up in a cemetary.
Means if u Kickin Back u gettin killed. . like I shoulda done to u in ur mom's pregnant belly.
You signed out of 1-2. You run when my Punches come thru ur dome kid..
..That Couple have your whole body Leannin, further than some Styrofoam sips.
I will murder you. Got the blades to shank slice and stab ur very own.
But I'll have all that pointed straight at your throat.. Nd I ain't talkin Herringbone.
Shittt I'm ruthless. Just here to rip thru vests and tear limbs like I'm Anakin.
I'll leave your body featureless. . For everyone to see. . like a fuckin mannequin.
Annddd I'm a mean pimp. I be at the gym lifting hos and ur girl a whore.
So when i say I'm going Outsider, pussy.. I'ma pull and pray them bullets make her a corpse.

[Sn00p]

yo.

u're a bitch, so i only use bitch slaps to deck u, wigger
i don't respect ya. u'll never get a closed fist like a Lego figure
bitch/female dog concepts?! that doesn't work great
ironic: fraze had u looking ancient and THEN u dropped that fucking wordplay
claimin fame off of 1 upset is retarded. nothing decent in YOUR stuff
& i've seen a better spaz/tic battle in the struggle for the top seats at the short bus
so stop running ur mouth unless u hope to die, son
i'd say stop digging ur own grave. but then again, u're probably too broke to buy one
u're average all over. maybe come w/ a fresh or different plan
cuz the only time i've seen i sticking out, it was wesley snipes in demolition man
2nd seed vs 10th?! but who knows? if ur disses are tough...
this cud end w/ a turn around. maybe just sticking my knife in isn't enough

[fraze]

Originally Posted by iSpaz

Lets make it another upset...

Ayy..

I'm Picture perfect. Cold Blooded when i hurt vets I'll have this man killed.
When I take these Head Shots like a photographer.. it's only cuz I hold that cam still.
wording is a little off but ok.
You just a Baby. You been realll lazy so you'll end up in a cemetary.
Means if u Kickin Back u gettin killed. . like I shoulda done to u in ur mom's pregnant belly.
harsh but theres no real wit here.
You signed out of 1-2. You run when my Punches come thru ur dome kid..
..That Couple have your whole body Leannin, further than some Styrofoam sips.
liked the concept but not the wording
I will murder you. Got the blades to shank slice and stab ur very own.
But I'll have all that pointed straight at your throat.. Nd I ain't talkin Herringbone.
not feeling this
Shittt I'm ruthless. Just here to rip thru vests and tear limbs like I'm Anakin.
I'll leave your body featureless. . For everyone to see. . like a fuckin mannequin.
didn't like this one either really. everyone to see wasn't set up
Annddd I'm a mean pimp. I be at the gym lifting hos and ur girl a whore.
So when i say I'm going Outsider, pussy.. I'ma pull and pray them bullets make her a corpse.
doesn't quite hit. harsh but the wp misses.

Originally Posted by Sn00p

u're a bitch, so i only use bitch slaps to deck u, wigger
i don't respect ya. u'll never get a closed fist like a Lego figure
clever. cool.
bitch/female dog concepts?! that doesn't work great
ironic: fraze had u looking ancient and THEN u dropped that fucking wordplay
ok i guess
claimin fame off of 1 upset is retarded. nothing decent in YOUR stuff
& i've seen a better spaz/tic battle in the struggle for the top seats at the short bus
this is alright.
so stop running ur mouth unless u hope to die, son
i'd say stop digging ur own grave. but then again, u're probably too broke to buy one
nice concept. liked ths
u're average all over. maybe come w/ a fresh or different plan
cuz the only time i've seen i sticking out, it was wesley snipes in demolition man
this is just ok. a little dated.
2nd seed vs 10th?! but who knows? if ur disses are tough...
this cud end w/ a turn around. maybe just sticking my knife in isn't enough
didn't really like this but it wasn't bad either

Pretty onesided for sn00p. Spaz had a few bars but sn00p is just to polished to have that many misses against. You had some harsh bars, but you still need add something to them to make them more than statements that rhyme. you had some cool concepts in general tho, so if you can improve your wording i can see you with a better shot in the rematch.

sn00p had a pretty nice verse in general but trailed off slightly at the end. other than that not too much to comment about. enjoyed the read.

Vote: sn00p

[Saint]

Hmm. Pretty cool battle yall.

Being generous w/ quotes.. Spazes kickn back, herringbone.. were decent to me.

I liked Snoops Lego & spaz/tic.. Although that latter concept I toyed w/ and figured someone might've used it.

Overall.. Snoop had a more fresher approach to me. More creativity, originality.

Vote Snoop.

[Cred]

Spaz had the mannequin line which was dope n the pregnant belly shit cuda been fire but u messed it up wit the way u worded it. Cemetary/belly? Nah bro

vs

Lego line, spaz/tic was heat, i out/wesley

Yeah, sn00p bodied sum shit here. Spaz/tic was lotb . Snoop took this one pretty comfortably imo

Vote - Snoop dog

[Greed]

I'm Picture perfect. Cold Blooded when i hurt vets I'll have this man killed.
When I take these Head Shots like a photographer.. it's only cuz I hold that cam still.
Eh

You just a Baby. You been realll lazy so you'll end up in a cemetary.
Means if u Kickin Back u gettin killed. . like I shoulda done to u in ur mom's pregnant belly.
This was cool

You signed out of 1-2. You run when my Punches come thru ur dome kid..
..That Couple have your whole body Leannin, further than some Styrofoam sips.
Interesting

I will murder you. Got the blades to shank slice and stab ur very own.
But I'll have all that pointed straight at your throat.. Nd I ain't talkin Herringbone.
Solid

Shittt I'm ruthless. Just here to rip thru vests and tear limbs like I'm Anakin.
I'll leave your body featureless. . For everyone to see. . like a fuckin mannequin.
Ha nice

Annddd I'm a mean pimp. I be at the gym lifting hos and ur girl a whore.
So when i say I'm going Outsider, pussy.. I'ma pull and pray them bullets make her a corpse.
Okay

u're a bitch, so i only use bitch slaps to deck u, wigger
i don't respect ya. u'll never get a closed fist like a Lego figure
Sick

bitch/female dog concepts?! that doesn't work great
ironic: fraze had u looking ancient and THEN u dropped that fucking wordplay
Lol

claimin fame off of 1 upset is retarded. nothing decent in YOUR stuff
& i've seen a better spaz/tic battle in the struggle for the top seats at the short bus
Lol haha

so stop running ur mouth unless u hope to die, son
i'd say stop digging ur own grave. but then again, u're probably too broke to buy one
Solid

u're average all over. maybe come w/ a fresh or different plan
cuz the only time i've seen i sticking out, it was wesley snipes in demolition man
Okay

2nd seed vs 10th?! but who knows? if ur disses are tough...
this cud end w/ a turn around. maybe just sticking my knife in isn't enough
Solid

This was cool. I got soop

V snoop

[ill nik-A]

Ispaz...

Wasn't feeling this man, the first three concepts have been done... Herringbone was simple u just named the bone in the neck? Mannequin was ok ender was aight

Snoop...

Lego was nice, spastic was ok, demolition was ok too... Grave was simple, didn't like the closer


Vote snoop

[Sharp]

I'm Picture perfect. Cold Blooded when i hurt vets I'll have this man killed.
When I take these Head Shots like a photographer.. it's only cuz I hold that cam still.
pretty predictable but well worded
You just a Baby. You been realll lazy so you'll end up in a cemetary.
Means if u Kickin Back u gettin killed. . like I shoulda done to u in ur mom's pregnant belly.
nahh. Not much a flip thb
You signed out of 1-2. You run when my Punches come thru ur dome kid..
..That Couple have your whole body Leannin, further than some Styrofoam sips.
Been awhile seen I seen a lean concept but they are pretty done. Couple is a nice touch though
I will murder you. Got the blades to shank slice and stab ur very own.
But I'll have all that pointed straight at your throat.. Nd I ain't talkin Herringbone.
ok
Shittt I'm ruthless. Just here to rip thru vests and tear limbs like I'm Anakin.
I'll leave your body featureless. . For everyone to see. . like a fuckin mannequin.
dig it
Annddd I'm a mean pimp. I be at the gym lifting hos and ur girl a whore.
So when i say I'm going Outsider, pussy.. I'ma pull and pray them bullets make her a corpse.
ok



u're a bitch, so i only use bitch slaps to deck u, wigger
i don't respect ya. u'll never get a closed fist like a Lego figure
cool
bitch/female dog concepts?! that doesn't work great
ironic: fraze had u looking ancient and THEN u dropped that fucking wordplay
cool
claimin fame off of 1 upset is retarded. nothing decent in YOUR stuff
& i've seen a better spaz/tic battle in the struggle for the top seats at the short bus
oddly enough seen spaz-tic done after the two battled
so stop running ur mouth unless u hope to die, son
i'd say stop digging ur own grave. but then again, u're probably too broke to buy one
kinda funny
u're average all over. maybe come w/ a fresh or different plan
cuz the only time i've seen i sticking out, it was wesley snipes in demolition man
nice
2nd seed vs 10th?! but who knows? if ur disses are tough...
this cud end w/ a turn around. maybe just sticking my knife in isn't enough
cold



Sn00p edged this for me. Fresher concepts and more personal hits. spaz has alright delivery but I think he's gotta get a sense for what is and isn't played out

v/sn00p