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Old 03-20-2019, 05:23 PM   #1
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SOL Champ Match: Jabari Black vs Resin M-I-C


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I’m a student of battle rap and a student of the site. I’m feel like I’m really getting a grasp of what lands and has an impact with voters. I’m also starting to get a grasp on what angles the nigga I’m battling might take and writing for that.
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I’m THAT fuckin dude.
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Jabari Black’s biggest advantage is easily his intelligence... a dope writer with solid wording, good head for wordplay, and consistently able to find good angles…
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Semi-Finals Resin reads like a crazed beast…The question is really ‘who can hang with him?’

Jabari Black

A battler with quality wordplay and the stick clique member with the most success. He seems to find the right combination of concepts for every battle he’s in.

Strengths
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A text legend. Has upped his game as of late (and it was already dope). Brings the kind of concepts you almost always get, but didn’t think of first, with the meanest wording. There’s a reason why he’s in 2/3 of the main events.


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This the End of the Road. I’m letting the four sing like Boys II Men/
Or a K to ya ribcage...‘I gotta stick by ya side’ like a loyal friend/
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Ay I got 2 blades for ya.. like a relationship it’s gonna be a bitch for this guy..
cuz the old knife gonna make u need Closure.. while the new knife will always stick by ya side.


My whole squad lightin cowards. 30 in the clip when we fire ours/
I gotta ladder, boy - think power chords...this extension’ll lead you to a high power/
Welcome back Res! Ya return was a big hit. U’ll needa longer break when ya wig split/
Cus now it’s game over! Soon as the ‘40 points down’, he ain’t coming back from this shit/
Inf said I’m hungrier, but u winnin? That’s silly to me. For that I’ll get the semi to speak/
This 9’ll restore ya faith in humanity...cus I’m hungrier, but Steel gone give you plenty to eat/
Ya gun bars all lies - cappin. You ain’t been in the streets 9 clappin/
I really live this gun talk...Everything I’m ‘saiyan get acted out’ - DBZ live action/
Nigga we all strapped! Either fall back or I’m lickin the 380/
Even my bitch carrying...tummy to the side of ya face...let you listen to the baby/
U battled me with my style. Even flipped my bar - that’s shit was wack and desperate/
You shadow boxing...them punches ain’t landing, we just see Black reflection/
You known to pull some lame shit. All these years and you ain’t changed, bitch/
Like how you tried to convince us you was Black...and now you doing the same shit/
Ya tough talk? Stoppin’s ya best move. Flap ya gums n the choppa gon stretch you/
So watch ya mouth! Let the wrong word slip and the autocorrect you/
I’ll be all in ya crib tweakin. 30 in a banana clip squeezing/
Or the pump’ll have this bitch sleepin. Bucket under ya roof...now ya shit leakin’/
One strap - nah....I had to double that to get this bitch sprayed quicka/
2 9s to his side...Adam and eve....I’m taking a rib soon as I see a bitchmade, nigga/
Catch you at a red light! You’ll see it smoking out the whip like the shit stalled/
With metal rounds bouncin off ya bumper...but this machine ain’t for pinball/
Transport you to the spiritual, son. Get ya mind steel when I’m killing you, bum/
Wit a silencer! That piece and quiet gon put you in a different state...the critical one/



Resin M-I-C


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Catch him slipping at a red light! Soon as I creep up this wimp fucked/
Revolver lift up...you’ll see a barrel spinning in traffic like a cement truck/
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B's was kind of a reach. The barrel doesn't spin on a revolver. The cylinder does.
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Aiyyo
You spin & fuck up URL concepts. You & ur weak clique resort to lies..
yeah his ideas are concrete.. & it has someone else’s hand in it before it dries.
In here it’s gutter rules.. bars got called out & he did a stutter move..
repetitive fuck.. you’re stuck on those Rings while i come off butter smooth.
I’m cookinnn: and the gore may kill em before I let the 4 spray..
puttin lead to this kid’s head.. u’d think i just marked his height on the doorway.
You were my 1st battle in yearss.. yet u the one that blundered dude..
gave u a such a welcome mat look.. shiittt i just hid my spare key up under you.
u holdin the gauge? pleeasse, u the top panhandler & that order remains..
quit the bucket noise.. if this bum drummin it’s just on street corners for change.
I’m over ur game.. pussssy, i easily surpass this newbie’s talent..
You a bitch at heart. It’s stated across ur chest like a beauty pageant.
I’m killin u and ur ugly ass chick.. now watch the plastic spark..
it’s a tragic start.. when u see a round fly in ur honey like jurassic park.
when i show the swing.. teeth poppin everywherrree: the rows will spring..
big uppercut. watch as a ‘crown leaves’ ur head like a roman king.
Aint no numbing it now.. step to me & u’ll be coming with doubt..
it’s mr perfect.. u’ll need a towel when i smack ya fuckn gums out ur mouth.
Jab’s a reported faker.. rhyme vs rhyme what I record is greater..
my lines Jump Off.. urs? barely legible & got talked down by negotiators.
The whole team with Louisvilles.. They gonna smack u & vex it..
we crackin ur sets in.. & u aint seein nothin but bats: that’s a dracula exit.
U got bullied here.. ur defense will be that ur gun lines arent whack..
yeahh the stick longgg.. it took u foreva to realize u had a kick me sign on ur back.
Mahfucka.
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Jabari Black is on the loose & ready to dump truck loads of ammo baby. Lets get it.

My whole squad lightin cowards. 30 in the clip when we fire ours/
I gotta ladder, boy - think power chords...this extension’ll lead you to a high power/

Fire. Nothing more to say here. I thought this was dope. Perfect way to open my guy.

Welcome back Res! Ya return was a big hit. U’ll needa longer break when ya wig split/
Cus now it’s game over! Soon as the ‘40 points down’, he ain’t coming back from this shit/

This is cool, i like the wording here. Will the shot clock expire? or will he come back...creative stuff

Inf said I’m hungrier, but u winnin? That’s silly to me. For that I’ll get the semi to speak/
This 9’ll restore ya faith in humanity...cus I’m hungrier, but Steel gone give you plenty to eat/

This one was lighter than the other two, but a good jab.

Ya gun bars all lies - cappin. You ain’t been in the streets 9 clappin/
I really live this gun talk...Everything I’m ‘saiyan get acted out’ - DBZ live action/

Saiyan/DBZ concept is really old man, this aint doing it chief

Nigga we all strapped! Either fall back or I’m lickin the 380/
Even my bitch carrying...tummy to the side of ya face...let you listen to the baby/

Tummy/tommy alright my accent is cool with that. Its pretty light tho

U battled me with my style. Even flipped my bar - that’s shit was wack and desperate/
You shadow boxing...them punches ain’t landing, we just see Black reflection/

Nah,

You known to pull some lame shit. All these years and you ain’t changed, bitch/
Like how you tried to convince us you was Black...and now you doing the same shit/

this is a very over done angle on resin. Its literally a verse filled of these in the archive vs Calefaction. You gotta bring something strong & super creative to get this to hit for me. This comes off statement like to me.

Ya tough talk? Stoppin’s ya best move. Flap ya gums n the choppa gon stretch you/
So watch ya mouth! Let the wrong word slip and the autocorrect you/

Nice, this is dope.

I’ll be all in ya crib tweakin. 30 in a banana clip squeezing/
Or the pump’ll have this bitch sleepin. Bucket under ya roof...now ya shit leakin’/

Smooth flow, i liked where you went with this. It's a good shot but nothing that's taking his head off.

One strap - nah....I had to double that to get this bitch sprayed quicka/
2 9s to his side...Adam and eve....I’m taking a rib soon as I see a bitchmade, nigga/

Meh not feelin this one.

Catch you at a red light! You’ll see it smoking out the whip like the shit stalled/
With metal rounds bouncin off ya bumper...but this machine ain’t for pinball/

This is ok.

Transport you to the spiritual, son. Get ya mind steel when I’m killing you, bum/
Wit a silencer! That piece and quiet gon put you in a different state...the critical one/

Nah to the first line, the punch was cool though.


Resin is Ready to step up & face the Man Whose bars are more monstrous than the creature from the Black lagoon





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Aiyyo
You spin & fuck up URL concepts. You & ur weak clique resort to lies..
yeah his ideas are concrete.. & it has someone else’s hand in it before it dries.

Nice, ok we have a battle folks.

In here it’s gutter rules.. bars got called out & he did a stutter move..
repetitive fuck.. you’re stuck on those Rings while i come off butter smooth.

Not digging this one, came off too light for me. I think its how you ended the bar made it a nah for me.

I’m cookinnn: and the gore may kill em before I let the 4 spray..
puttin lead to this kid’s head.. u’d think i just marked his height on the doorway.

Fire. Wasn't expecting the direction you went with this one tbh. Nicely done

You were my 1st battle in yearss.. yet u the one that blundered dude..
gave u a such a welcome mat look.. shiittt i just hid my spare key up under you.

Lol this is ok, some might like it & some might hate it

u holdin the gauge? pleeasse, u the top panhandler & that order remains..
quit the bucket noise.. if this bum drummin it’s just on street corners for change.

nice, see you going for more humor this time around.

I’m over ur game.. pussssy, i easily surpass this newbie’s talent..
You a bitch at heart. It’s stated across ur chest like a beauty pageant.

Slick, its solid not a haymaker tho

I’m killin u and ur ugly ass chick.. now watch the plastic spark..
it’s a tragic start.. when u see a round fly in ur honey like jurassic park.

Good little jab here

when i show the swing.. teeth poppin everywherrree: the rows will spring..
big uppercut. watch as a ‘crown leaves’ ur head like a roman king.

Fire, good set up into a well worded punch

Aint no numbing it now.. step to me & u’ll be coming with doubt..
it’s mr perfect.. u’ll need a towel when i smack ya fuckn gums out ur mouth.

Lol, Kurt henning baby. A cool one here

Jab’s a reported faker.. rhyme vs rhyme what I record is greater..
my lines Jump Off.. urs? barely legible & got talked down by negotiators.

this was dope

The whole team with Louisvilles.. They gonna smack u & vex it..
we crackin ur sets in.. & u aint seein nothin but bats: that’s a dracula exit.

Cool, thought this was gonna be meh b/c of louisville sluggers but i like the way you wrote the punch. Reminds me of my revolving door line

U got bullied here.. ur defense will be that ur gun lines arent whack..
yeahh the stick longgg.. it took u foreva to realize u had a kick me sign on ur back.

Funny but eh not as bad as DBZ/saiyan flip but still pretty old.
Mahfucka.
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Solid battle, depending on peoples preference is how the voting will go. I for one have resin getting this one. It wasn't a landslide. Resin just had the more creative angles & better attempts when he missed. Jabari had a dope opener tho really dug it and solid 2nd bar. Listen to the baby line wasn't really a harsh diss to me, DBZ saying/saiyan should've been a no from the jump. I just think resin honestly hit harder/harsher. That off the jump bar & height on door frame were bangers by resin. They're competing with one another for LOTB to me. Yes, dissing Resin about the fake race stuff is over done to death. You have to pull What dominate did to beyond about his bad eye. Come with a crazy unheard pf concept about it. The James Bond flip still sticks with me after reading it months ago. Resin had more lands & misses weren't as bad. Thanks for dropping guys enjoyed it. Keep it classy yall

/V Resin.
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My whole squad lightin cowards. 30 in the clip when we fire ours/
I gotta ladder, boy - think power chords...this extension’ll lead you to a high power/

okay/solid

Welcome back Res! Ya return was a big hit. U’ll needa longer break when ya wig split/
Cus now it’s game over! Soon as the ‘40 points down’, he ain’t coming back from this shit/

cool

Inf said I’m hungrier, but u winnin? That’s silly to me. For that I’ll get the semi to speak/
This 9’ll restore ya faith in humanity...cus I’m hungrier, but Steel gone give you plenty to eat/

ehhhh

Ya gun bars all lies - cappin. You ain’t been in the streets 9 clappin/
I really live this gun talk...Everything I’m ‘saiyan get acted out’ - DBZ live action/

lol i liked it

Nigga we all strapped! Either fall back or I’m lickin the 380/
Even my bitch carrying...tummy to the side of ya face...let you listen to the baby/

LOL i didnt like tummy/Tommy too much, seemed a bit of a stretch but i love the idea. i'll give it you

U battled me with my style. Even flipped my bar - that’s shit was wack and desperate/
You shadow boxing...them punches ain’t landing, we just see Black reflection/

cool

You known to pull some lame shit. All these years and you ain’t changed, bitch/
Like how you tried to convince us you was Black...and now you doing the same shit/

lol this was better

Ya tough talk? Stoppin’s ya best move. Flap ya gums n the choppa gon stretch you/
So watch ya mouth! Let the wrong word slip and the autocorrect you/

okay

I’ll be all in ya crib tweakin. 30 in a banana clip squeezing/
Or the pump’ll have this bitch sleepin. Bucket under ya roof...now ya shit leakin’/

dope

One strap - nah....I had to double that to get this bitch sprayed quicka/
2 9s to his side...Adam and eve....I’m taking a rib soon as I see a bitchmade, nigga/

seen similar done tbh but okay

Catch you at a red light! You’ll see it smoking out the whip like the shit stalled/
With metal rounds bouncin off ya bumper...but this machine ain’t for pinball/

hmmmm not so keen on this one for some reason

Transport you to the spiritual, son. Get ya mind steel when I’m killing you, bum/
Wit a silencer! That piece and quiet gon put you in a different state...the critical one/

good/solid
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Aiyyo
You spin & fuck up URL concepts. You & ur weak clique resort to lies..
yeah his ideas are concrete.. & it has someone else’s hand in it before it dries.

nice

In here it’s gutter rules.. bars got called out & he did a stutter move..
repetitive fuck.. you’re stuck on those Rings while i come off butter smooth.

okay

I’m cookinnn: and the gore may kill em before I let the 4 spray..
puttin lead to this kid’s head.. u’d think i just marked his height on the doorway.

lol nice idea

You were my 1st battle in yearss.. yet u the one that blundered dude..
gave u a such a welcome mat look.. shiittt i just hid my spare key up under you.

lol

u holdin the gauge? pleeasse, u the top panhandler & that order remains..
quit the bucket noise.. if this bum drummin it’s just on street corners for change.

ehhhh kinda old idea i think this one, too similar to the previous lines execution also imo

I’m over ur game.. pussssy, i easily surpass this newbie’s talent..
You a bitch at heart. It’s stated across ur chest like a beauty pageant.

nice concept

I’m killin u and ur ugly ass chick.. now watch the plastic spark..
it’s a tragic start.. when u see a round fly in ur honey like jurassic park.

good

when i show the swing.. teeth poppin everywherrree: the rows will spring..
big uppercut. watch as a ‘crown leaves’ ur head like a roman king.

i fuck with this heavy

Aint no numbing it now.. step to me & u’ll be coming with doubt..
it’s mr perfect.. u’ll need a towel when i smack ya fuckn gums out ur mouth.

okay

Jab’s a reported faker.. rhyme vs rhyme what I record is greater..
my lines Jump Off.. urs? barely legible & got talked down by negotiators.

lol

The whole team with Louisvilles.. They gonna smack u & vex it..
we crackin ur sets in.. & u aint seein nothin but bats: that’s a dracula exit.

lol

U got bullied here.. ur defense will be that ur gun lines arent whack..
yeahh the stick longgg.. it took u foreva to realize u had a kick me sign on ur back.

okay

both real consistent here, which is dope. i felt like Resin was putting back to back dope or at least VERY GOOD punches together on the home stretch though and that led to my decision

vote - Res
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My whole squad lightin cowards. 30 in the clip when we fire ours/
I gotta ladder, boy - think power chords...this extension’ll lead you to a high power/

Good opener.

Welcome back Res! Ya return was a big hit. U’ll needa longer break when ya wig split/
Cus now it’s game over! Soon as the ‘40 points down’, he ain’t coming back from this shit/

Ok

Inf said I’m hungrier, but u winnin? That’s silly to me. For that I’ll get the semi to speak/
This 9’ll restore ya faith in humanity...cus I’m hungrier, but Steel gone give you plenty to eat/

weak for a flipping a statement said.. it's just ok for a steel flip. I get the faith in humanity but the followup wasn't strong enough...

Ya gun bars all lies - cappin. You ain’t been in the streets 9 clappin/
I really live this gun talk...Everything I’m ‘saiyan get acted out’ - DBZ live action/

miss here. Saiyan/saying too basic

Nigga we all strapped! Either fall back or I’m lickin the 380/
Even my bitch carrying...tummy to the side of ya face...let you listen to the baby/

Cool hit more visually to me, it's aite..

U battled me with my style. Even flipped my bar - that’s shit was wack and desperate/
You shadow boxing...them punches ain’t landing, we just see Black reflection/

liked the angle but the execution needed sonethijg different here. U said punches ain't landing then he's a black reflection. Needed a revision of some sort & maybebdeveloped the black reflection idea which was better imo

You known to pull some lame shit. All these years and you ain’t changed, bitch/
Like how you tried to convince us you was Black...and now you doing the same shit/

Lol. Hit more bc of relevancy. People will say its overused but for you i say it hit better

Ya tough talk? Stoppin’s ya best move. Flap ya gums n the choppa gon stretch you/
So watch ya mouth! Let the wrong word slip and the autocorrect you/

Cool. Another attk line around 'Auto' but it's cool

I’ll be all in ya crib tweakin. 30 in a banana clip squeezing/
Or the pump’ll have this bitch sleepin. Bucket under ya roof...now ya shit leakin’/

Points for creativity but ehh b@ bucket lines & the roof tie in wasnt enough here imo..

One strap - nah....I had to double that to get this bitch sprayed quicka/
2 9s to his side...Adam and eve....I’m taking a rib soon as I see a bitchmade, nigga/

soso here, see plenty rib/adam & eve lines..

Catch you at a red light! You’ll see it smoking out the whip like the shit stalled/
With metal rounds bouncin off ya bumper...but this machine ain’t for pinball/

Cool. I liked this actually original here. Nothing heavy just a dece jab..

Transport you to the spiritual, son. Get ya mind steel when I’m killing you, bum/
Wit a silencer! That piece and quiet gon put you in a different state...the critical one

Critical state line? 2003 ish.. weak ender


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Aiyyo
You spin & fuck up URL concepts. You & ur weak clique resort to lies..
yeah his ideas are concrete.. & it has someone else’s hand in it before it dries.

creative, different.. off the bat taking concrete & mis directing it to hand in it.. shows experience

In here it’s gutter rules.. bars got called out & he did a stutter move..
repetitive fuck.. you’re stuck on those Rings while i come off butter smooth.

ok nothing heavy, smooth line

I’m cookinnn: and the gore may kill em before I let the 4 spray..
puttin lead to this kid’s head.. u’d think i just marked his height on the doorway.

cool idea.. seen it tho in variations.. still ok

You were my 1st battle in yearss.. yet u the one that blundered dude..
gave u a such a welcome mat look.. shiittt i just hid my spare key up under you.

ok lol

u holdin the gauge? pleeasse, u the top panhandler & that order remains..
quit the bucket noise.. if this bum drummin it’s just on street corners for change.

like the doorway line seen a variation of this... drum/bum etc.. just ok as is.

I’m over ur game.. pussssy, i easily surpass this newbie’s talent..
You a bitch at heart. It’s stated across ur chest like a beauty pageant.

cool concept felt like it needed more

I’m killin u and ur ugly ass chick.. now watch the plastic spark..
it’s a tragic start.. when u see a round fly in ur honey like jurassic park.

good here

when i show the swing.. teeth poppin everywherrree: the rows will spring..
big uppercut. watch as a ‘crown leaves’ ur head like a roman king.

this more like it... dope

Aint no numbing it now.. step to me & u’ll be coming with doubt..
it’s mr perfect.. u’ll need a towel when i smack ya fuckn gums out ur mouth.

ok. original here

Jab’s a reported faker.. rhyme vs rhyme what I record is greater..
my lines Jump Off.. urs? barely legible & got talked down by negotiators.

lol ok feels done but not played or anything.. still solid line

The whole team with Louisvilles.. They gonna smack u & vex it..
we crackin ur sets in.. & u aint seein nothin but bats: that’s a dracula exit.

cool.. bats/dracula ok but execution saved it

U got bullied here.. ur defense will be that ur gun lines arent whack..
yeahh the stick longgg.. it took u foreva to realize u had a kick me sign on ur back.

alright ender

Vote - Resin.. more consistent & heated up towards the end.. not really much misses.. oks where JB missed big in a couple spots.. had some good attk gunbars but overall expected new angles.. like the black reflection idea coulda been built on
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My whole squad lightin cowards. 30 in the clip when we fire ours/
I gotta ladder, boy - think power chords...this extension’ll lead you to a high power/
Nigga we all strapped! Either fall back or I’m lickin the 380/
Even my bitch carrying...tummy to the side of ya face...let you listen to the baby/

U battled me with my style. Even flipped my bar - that’s shit was wack and desperate/
You shadow boxing...them punches ain’t landing, we just see Black reflection/

You known to pull some lame shit. All these years and you ain’t changed, bitch/
Like how you tried to convince us you was Black...and now you doing the same shit/

I’ll be all in ya crib tweakin. 30 in a banana clip squeezing/
Or the pump’ll have this bitch sleepin. Bucket under ya roof...now ya shit leakin’/
One strap - nah....I had to double that to get this bitch sprayed quicka/
2 9s to his side...Adam and eve....I’m taking a rib soon as I see a bitchmade, nigga/

sheesh. this was a dope verse. bolded is fire. underlined is super hot lava fire scorch the earth heat. idc about the tummy/tommy pronunciation if that shit got said in a battle the crowd would absolutely lose it. got me doing the sour face. i think your wording carried some bars like the opener i.e the connections/concept has been done but how you put it all together was too slick to ignore. the personal about him pretending to be black was fire. superbad scene PEOPLE DONT FORGET.


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Aiyyo
You spin & fuck up URL concepts. You & ur weak clique resort to lies..
yeah his ideas are concrete.. & it has someone else’s hand in it before it dries.
I’m cookinnn: and the gore may kill em before I let the 4 spray..
puttin lead to this kid’s head.. u’d think i just marked his height on the doorway.

u holdin the gauge? pleeasse, u the top panhandler & that order remains..
quit the bucket noise.. if this bum drummin it’s just on street corners for change.
I’m over ur game.. pussssy, i easily surpass this newbie’s talent..
You a bitch at heart. It’s stated across ur chest like a beauty pageant.

I’m killin u and ur ugly ass chick.. now watch the plastic spark..
it’s a tragic start.. when u see a round fly in ur honey like jurassic park.

Jab’s a reported faker.. rhyme vs rhyme what I record is greater..
my lines Jump Off.. urs? barely legible & got talked down by negotiators.
The whole team with Louisvilles.. They gonna smack u & vex it..
we crackin ur sets in.. & u aint seein nothin but bats: that’s a dracula exit.


didn't like kick me sign, mr perfect was a dope concept just thought you coulda executed better. whatever else i took out didnt hit for me. bolded was fire. bats/dracula obv been done over the years but the slickness made it hit. Jump Off concepts were around when the league was but the execution was oldschool Res so i'll allow it. measuring height, DON DEMARCO. beauty pageant, DON DEMARCO. really dope verse. well done. you're at your best when you write like this and don't try to experiment. stick to the concise and slick shit and you're hard to beat. sign into the NBL so we can finally battle.

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really dope battle from both. i got Resin here, neither missed too badly, maybe one or two big ''no's'' from both but other than that it was straight heat. i love Jabari's style, he has the best wording in the game right now. if you word your verses like live battles i think they always hit way harder. Res is Res, his generics are hard to beat and once he stays concise he's top 3 on this site easy. this is the kind of battle i enjoy. both verses coated in realism, real concepts, connections are (somewhat) believable -- not ridiculous wordplay and outlandish concepts that we are seeing right now. NC will always be about slick, witty, humorous BARS. anyway, both dudes were cooking and it was a very worthy finals. please sign into the NBL.

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Old 04-16-2019, 08:56 AM   #8
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My whole squad lightin cowards. 30 in the clip when we fire ours/
I gotta ladder, boy - think power chords...this extension’ll lead you to a high power/
ok, my only issue is the rhyming of fire outs and high power - but that can simply be regional
Welcome back Res! Ya return was a big hit. U’ll needa longer break when ya wig split/
Cus now it’s game over! Soon as the ‘40 points down’, he ain’t coming back from this shit/
mmm this one is lacking connection imo
Inf said I’m hungrier, but u winnin? That’s silly to me. For that I’ll get the semi to speak/
This 9’ll restore ya faith in humanity...cus I’m hungrier, but Steel gone give you plenty to eat/
decent here, the steel/still wp is too old to consider tbh. But the flip was decent
Ya gun bars all lies - cappin. You ain’t been in the streets 9 clappin/
I really live this gun talk...Everything I’m ‘saiyan get acted out’ - DBZ live action/
saiyan wp is old but regardless this was an ok flip
Nigga we all strapped! Either fall back or I’m lickin the 380/
Even my bitch carrying...tummy to the side of ya face...let you listen to the baby/
fuckin fire here
U battled me with my style. Even flipped my bar - that’s shit was wack and desperate/
You shadow boxing...them punches ain’t landing, we just see Black reflection/
fire again
You known to pull some lame shit. All these years and you ain’t changed, bitch/
Like how you tried to convince us you was Black...and now you doing the same shit/
good again
Ya tough talk? Stoppin’s ya best move. Flap ya gums n the choppa gon stretch you/
So watch ya mouth! Let the wrong word slip and the autocorrect you/
ok, slight wording issue in the second line
I’ll be all in ya crib tweakin. 30 in a banana clip squeezing/
Or the pump’ll have this bitch sleepin. Bucket under ya roof...now ya shit Leakin’/
lmao dope af
One strap - nah....I had to double that to get this bitch sprayed quicka/
2 9s to his side...Adam and eve....I’m taking a rib soon as I see a bitchmade, nigga/
this one will make you have to think. I liked it, good shit
Catch you at a red light! You’ll see it smoking out the whip like the shit stalled/
With metal rounds bouncin off ya bumper...but this machine ain’t for pinball/
good, woulda been doper with a better ending tho
Transport you to the spiritual, son. Get ya mind steel when I’m killing you, bum/
Wit a silencer! That piece and quiet gon put you in a different state...the critical one/
wasnt feelin this


6 nice
3 ok
1 Decent
2 misses


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You spin & fuck up URL concepts. You & ur weak clique resort to lies..
yeah his ideas are concrete.. & it has someone else’s hand in it before it dries.
wow this was dumb fire, good shit
In here it’s gutter rules.. bars got called out & he did a stutter move..
repetitive fuck.. you’re stuck on those Rings while i come off butter smooth.
wasnt feelin this
I’m cookinnn: and the gore may kill em before I let the 4 spray..
puttin lead to this kid’s head.. u’d think i just marked his height on the doorway.
nice lol
You were my 1st battle in yearss.. yet u the one that blundered dude..
gave u a such a welcome mat look.. shiittt i just hid my spare key up under you.
good again
u holdin the gauge? pleeasse, u the top panhandler & that order remains..
quit the bucket noise.. if this bum drummin it’s just on street corners for change.
lol alright
I’m over ur game.. pussssy, i easily surpass this newbie’s talent..
You a bitch at heart. It’s stated across ur chest like a beauty pageant.
nice
I’m killin u and ur ugly ass chick.. now watch the plastic spark..
it’s a tragic start.. when u see a round fly in ur honey like jurassic park.
damn, good again
when i show the swing.. teeth poppin everywherrree: the rows will spring..
big uppercut. watch as a ‘crown leaves’ ur head like a roman king.
ok, crown concepts are played but I liked the flip
Aint no numbing it now.. step to me & u’ll be coming with doubt..
it’s mr perfect.. u’ll need a towel when i smack ya fuckn gums out ur mouth.
nah
Jab’s a reported faker.. rhyme vs rhyme what I record is greater..
my lines Jump Off.. urs? barely legible & got talked down by negotiators.
ok here
The whole team with Louisvilles.. They gonna smack u & vex it..
we crackin ur sets in.. & u aint seein nothin but bats: that’s a dracula exit.
fire
U got bullied here.. ur defense will be that ur gun lines arent whack..
yeahh the stick longgg.. it took u foreva to realize u had a kick me sign on ur back.
lol ok closer


6 nice
4 ok
2 misses


This battle was fire af. The best battle I’ve read in a very long time or at least since the blue/resin battle in the semis. Kinda mad I slept on this for so long but it’s really discouraging when you open a thread and see tons of bars posted by each guy lol. Except this battle was definitely worth the read, both guys came out swinging and had clever and creative punches. Like orc just said, I love seeing this kinda shit - really hate the quality of bars that have been thrown around recently and forced down our throats by RB heads. I won’t dwell on dissing RB wordplay but that shit isn’t gonna be accepted the same here as it is over there, plain and simple. Aside from that, I feel like resin reeeeeally stepped it up here from his last few verses. Wording, execution, concepts, and bar placement were ALL on point. JB definitely did his thing but had a few bars where the wording hurt a bit. I have this one being very close but the writing from resin in this one was impeccable.


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