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Old 04-18-2019, 12:38 PM   #1
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"We are like children building a sand castle. We embellish it with beautiful shells, bits of driftwood, and pieces of colored glass. The castle is ours, off limits to others. We’re willing to attack if others threaten to hurt it. Yet despite all our attachment, we know that the tide will inevitably come in and sweep the sand castle away." - Pema Chodron

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I earned that ask don't tell rep, if there's a map you've found X
You're the loll in the action like a laugh out loud text
Passed all field tests, my ass trapped in steel mesh
Like lab rats that feel threats you just lack mice kill set
My skill set; I rhyme in sterile environments
I admit I'm high as shit so every stair I'll climb is slick
Feel the climate shift, I'm an astrologer on a diet bitch
Y'all spoiled beef so I'm avoiding the meteor side of this...
Move the needle like lie detectors, y'all repeat the process
So If I'm being honest it seems I'm not seeing progress
I mean you dropped this foreign concept I just couldn't honor
So don't speak in Arabic like lighters up at concerts
Don't speak n' air-a-bic? lighter? Whatever kid
I'd rather be a has-been (laden?) than a never is
If y'all the shit then I'm the hunger in your stomach, listen...
Cuz if you winnin' a tournament it's only because I wasn't in it
Everyone's a critic, but only a few reply
If I blew your mind I've proven why your stupid guys
A new hybrid computer virus couldn't reboot my drive
Nukes collide, bet it's roaches and netcees who survive...
The truest lie states a guy in the sky can save us
But this wreck-creation like an undeniable science equation
Before I-sonned you came a heightened sense of danger
Strange ice won't ever age ya like a cryogenic chamber
To stay in form I brainstorm but I'm payin' for it
Cuz when it rains it's porn, that's why I stay indoors
Nah, when it rains it pores that's why my face is sore
Shit, I'm agent orange inside the rainforest
I'm staining doors, painting floors, renovate my droors
Watch apocalypse now eighty four times just to say "the whore"
Like a dirty bathroom door, I get ya "flew" off the handle...
But you too numb to channel emotion so you shut the panel
I'll jump you randoms, causing heart attacks like inducting Anvil
Then kill everything you held dear like a hunter's mantle
Come with meta-force, you're just another dumb white soldier
Luke warm like Skywalker on some island boulder
I use my art-to-detour, students fill some blind quota...
But if you my final pupil then I don't care one iota
(One eye Yoda) I'm dying to show the hole I cleared
Still appears I can't kill your whole career? Hold my beer
It's cold in here, as if I found cracked lips abound
Massive word of mouth wouldn't make ya chaps stick around
Must be dreamin' pal, cuz everything I'm reading now...
Got me catching Z's like zombies left to feed when bound
Take the scenic route, a recent drought left sleep in doubt
So I seek rest out like Ryan when he leaves his house
No easy passage, harder on myself then a teen's Cialis
I'll take a leave of absence when I take Aleve with absinthe
Throw T3's in the mattress, teeth freeze then extract it
Plus Ativan (add-a-van) to complete my kid nap kit
Nothing's sacred it's tragic, they even remaking Aladdin
Put all my eggs in one basket like when a pregnant slut cashed in
You ain't dump that bitch bro, yes men are the last to know...
You lads just go pen and tell her like a magic show
How apropos, an app proposed I interact with hoes...
Then ads just opened that were shown too fast to close (shit)
Most have a little spat hence, their spit is past tense
Grass is greener on the other side but who positioned that fence?
I'm skippin' ahead, I won't once try to run
Night has come, mourning ya death like a vampires son
So if I'm stuck up like biters trying to hide the gum...
It's cuz the guys who bit me are the guys you biting from (boom)
Brides adore rich grooms but time divorces too
So why abort her womb, I can't afford to lose
She wore my heart on her sleeve so I'm guarding her needs
I hope she lets me go steady like Charlie Murphy
Pardon me, run it back, I think they hardly heard me
I said I hope she lets me ghost-eddie like Charlie Murphy
Plus ya girl seems turnt like those white drunk teen nerds
But hey, I hershey squirts so I'm undie-turd...
I meant I heard she squirts so I'm undeterred
But not having to sugar coat words is much preferred
I'm army reserves, went to Paris to cope with a death
Of a sub-marine, and that doesn't mean at periscope depth
With labored breath, takin' bets a baby's in the future
It's like a real estate listing viewer the way I give it to her
Give a tour; I stalk your art though
The still at large clone of Paul Bernardo in the malls of Scarborough
Follow bar codes: keep short and sweet or it all seems rote
Might not be over until you hear a swan song's key note
But I'll Be Gone In The Dark watching most a y'all erode
Like Michelle McNamara's novel... so that's all she wrote.
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Old 05-18-2019, 02:19 AM   #2
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You're the loll in the action like a laugh out loud text
Passed all field tests, my ass trapped in steel mesh
this was weirdly worded and made me actually do the action
once that time has passed I will return with serious pander about this piece
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Old 05-18-2019, 03:58 AM   #3
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Enjoyed meteor side of this, when it rains it’s porn, and Aleve with absinthe
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