Week 4: MMLP vs Maximus - MAX WINS

Flow · 04-08-2019, 08:23 PM

1-2 Week Four

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.

DUE FRIDAY (due to lateness closing everything today)
@MMLP
@Maximus

Extensions need to be agreed by both parties

Maximus · 04-09-2019, 03:05 PM

i'll leave this clown's remains on a trapeze.. then buried deep in a site
bitch, you'll go from 'the swing to the grave' like work-shift from evening to night

MMLP · 04-10-2019, 05:03 AM

Loneliness got u home on ur own, no need to go for the throat
Maximus executioner, ur fake friends carried out this body like the Solider of Rome

Ryno · 04-13-2019, 07:57 AM

V/Maximus... thought he had the better concept & execution. MMLP worded it ok but it wasn’t impactful

~RustyGunZ~ · 04-13-2019, 09:04 AM

Eh. Got Max. Neither was stand out but his was a little more put together.

joog · 04-13-2019, 09:23 AM

Vote maximus. Didnt like the tie ins used to the swing to grave angle. Still got ur point across well imo.

Mmlp idk whats going on here. Good nameplay attempt tho.

Vote maximus

Sharp · 04-13-2019, 09:40 AM

I really wanna like MMLP's bar more. It's a solid gladiator reference, but it's kind of lacking a punch that stings. End of bar is trying to be a ittle too elaborate for its own good imo, like the fake friends comes out of nowhere

Max was basic, but alright. Cool concept but really simple execution, still enough here

V/max

Flow · 04-14-2019, 09:22 AM

Work shift concept was dope, execution wasnt top draw but tbh i cant think of a better way that fit the concept in as well as you did, mmlp my man an the rome move was ok but going to edge this to max here, think mmlp had something but needed to work on a different way to approach the concept for directness.

anyways vote max

Allen Knight · 04-14-2019, 10:45 AM

Got max here also his was cleaner, mmlp had a good concept but wording hurt him this week.

Zaddy · 04-14-2019, 06:47 PM

MMLP col concept but wording hurt you in this one. Maximus had a cleaner well put bar, got him in this one

Vote maximus

Chyeahhh!!! · 04-14-2019, 07:18 PM

I was fucking with MMLP's. I like his shit but this one seems it could have been worded a bit better.

Max setup was worded a bit weird though effective. I like the follow through and execution

vote Max

Pharaohs Army · 04-14-2019, 09:43 PM

i got MMLP cuz I don't get Maximus's

Saint · 04-14-2019, 10:15 PM

MMLP - liked the idea. the way you executed the line coukd gave made the difference...

Max - Lol trapeze was odd but the bar wasnt bad here. swing to the grave was different, could have been changed to be better too tbh

V- Max

Kill Spree · 04-14-2019, 10:19 PM

I got max here... thought the wit he dropped was dope. Wasn’t a fan of mmlp’s bar the was he executed it. Felt it lacked something. Max had a dope twist and edged this for me

Cred · 04-15-2019, 01:38 PM

Can someone fill me in on Max’s diss?

I liked mmlps bar forsure, thought it had enough to carry itself for the fun here

Vote mmlp

Flow · 04-15-2019, 02:32 PM

Max wins 10 2

04-09-2019, 03:05 PM	#2
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169469	i'll leave this clown's remains on a trapeze.. then buried deep in a site bitch, you'll go from 'the swing to the grave' like work-shift from evening to night Last edited by Maximus; 04-09-2019 at 04:00 PM.

04-14-2019, 10:45 AM	#9
Allen Knight The Bad Guys. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,166 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899398	Got max here also his was cleaner, mmlp had a good concept but wording hurt him this week. __________________ C.O.B

04-14-2019, 07:18 PM	#11
Chyeahhh!!! Saul Paul Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: remote location with a remote weapon station Posts: 6,397 Battle Record: 16-26 Rep Power: 1663348	I was fucking with MMLP's. I like his shit but this one seems it could have been worded a bit better. Max setup was worded a bit weird though effective. I like the follow through and execution vote Max __________________ KNOW YOUR MAKER BEFORE YOU'RE MADE TO I know the ledge, his sister's a jumpoff

04-10-2019, 05:03 AM	#3
MMLP Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 600 Battle Record: 15-16 Champed - Write Week 9 Rep Power: 9768087	Loneliness got u home on ur own, no need to go for the throat Maximus executioner, ur fake friends carried out this body like the Solider of Rome

04-13-2019, 07:57 AM	#4
Ryno Retired Join Date: Jul 2018 Posts: 646 Battle Record: 12-10 Rep Power: 1601590	V/Maximus... thought he had the better concept & execution. MMLP worded it ok but it wasn’t impactful

04-13-2019, 09:04 AM	#5
~RustyGunZ~ (ง'̀-'́)ง Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 15,852 Battle Record: 52-28 Accomplishments -50+ wins Champed -Summer Classic VIII -Netcees Battle League -BA Picture -BA TagTeam -Fight Night Cypher I -Fight Night XXXV -Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 Rep Power: 85899402	Eh. Got Max. Neither was stand out but his was a little more put together.

04-13-2019, 09:23 AM	#6
joog Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 244 Battle Record: 3-1 Rep Power: 1432582	Vote maximus. Didnt like the tie ins used to the swing to grave angle. Still got ur point across well imo. Mmlp idk whats going on here. Good nameplay attempt tho. Vote maximus

04-13-2019, 09:40 AM	#7
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	I really wanna like MMLP's bar more. It's a solid gladiator reference, but it's kind of lacking a punch that stings. End of bar is trying to be a ittle too elaborate for its own good imo, like the fake friends comes out of nowhere Max was basic, but alright. Cool concept but really simple execution, still enough here V/max

04-14-2019, 09:43 PM	#12
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,962 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	i got MMLP cuz I don't get Maximus's

04-14-2019, 10:15 PM	#13
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,183 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535864	MMLP - liked the idea. the way you executed the line coukd gave made the difference... Max - Lol trapeze was odd but the bar wasnt bad here. swing to the grave was different, could have been changed to be better too tbh V- Max

04-14-2019, 10:19 PM	#14
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,439 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645695	I got max here... thought the wit he dropped was dope. Wasn’t a fan of mmlp’s bar the was he executed it. Felt it lacked something. Max had a dope twist and edged this for me

04-15-2019, 01:38 PM	#15
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899380	Can someone fill me in on Max’s diss? I liked mmlps bar forsure, thought it had enough to carry itself for the fun here Vote mmlp