04-01-2019, 05:41 PM | #1 |
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Week 3: Maximus vs Pharaohs Army - MAXIMUS WINS
Week Three You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.
DUE THURSDAY @Maximus @Pharaohs Army Extensions need to be agreed by both parties
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04-03-2019, 10:01 PM | #2 |
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my attack's too ferocious, get dismembered with mad huge explosives
i'll hit you with an Incredible Blas you won't survive like your last two opponents |
04-04-2019, 02:38 PM | #3 |
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think you're hot? na. you're not that groovy
i'll rape your wife and kill your kid like the Gladiator movie |
04-04-2019, 02:42 PM | #4 |
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Vote max, he was more creative and I just felt had the better bar
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04-04-2019, 02:51 PM | #5 |
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vote max
definitely more creative, pharoahs was too straight forward imo |
04-04-2019, 02:55 PM | #6 |
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max: omg u said my name dope
phar: too simple man v/ max |
04-04-2019, 03:21 PM | #7 |
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Max got this. Good all around. PA was decent...movie is dope but the bar was too simple
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04-04-2019, 03:28 PM | #8 |
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Max multis were almost on point. 4-5-5 count but it was still swagged out. Nice reading pace. Just an all around gd bad tbh.
Pharaoh. No. Mvgt- max |
04-04-2019, 04:01 PM | #9 |
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Maximus- pretty straightforward. Nothing too too special imo. Decent personal. Multies helped.
PA- way too simple, pimp. Not really anything here tbh. No real impact imo Vote Maxine |
04-05-2019, 06:12 AM | #10 |
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Rayge was nice. This sort of bar gets done occasionally but it was done well. Pharoah, you're getting closer to 'battle' bars. What you're missing is wordplay - I think the most basic connection is trying to tell a joke or make a pun. Feel free to reach out if you want some suggestions
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04-05-2019, 06:18 AM | #11 |
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V/Max ... he had all the right elements here. PA was alil too straight forward here
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04-05-2019, 08:58 AM | #12 |
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I got max here... thought he worded his punch nice. Cool concept.
phar was a bit to basic for me |
04-07-2019, 02:19 AM | #13 |
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Yeah Maximus wins here, the nameplays was cool.
Pharaoh needs to come up with a way to flip his concepts. 10 - 0 Last edited by Flow; 04-08-2019 at 06:02 PM. |
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