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#2861 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Mar 2016
Posts: 269
Battle Record: 17-9
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as words escape, evading strokes of the key
i thought that my thoughts would be more open to me a wrong turn in the lock & i've broken the key ironically the curse will live on & my ghost won't be free out of time, i find i only grow with the weeds returned the present... its future ain't what I hoped it'd be in my own time I learned to know misery for writer's block's the only kind of thought that's spoken to me |
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#2862 |
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Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 3,934
Battle Record: 3-3
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Ayo,
Longin' for acceptance, Belongin' - Never felt it Voices tell me what I'm wantin' is really not to be expected I don't ask for much & when I do, I'm told I should forget it "Doc...I'm over the rejections, The emotions, & my mental state's a loco bloody mess man! I had a seizure at the mall, my son was there all stressed as fuck He seen the way I fall, it's like my equilibrium just up & left for lunch" "Sorry Jeff, don't mean to cut you off But speakin' of a bite to eat That time's for me & our session's done" See this is the reason I never keep appointments Every second's just a freak who's coins Keep these bitch ass shrinks employed I'm sick of needin' sumthin' boy, just to numb the pain Meds made me trip, the green ain't do shit Tried drownin' my sorrows, now I'm sick from rum today |
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#2863 |
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Join Date: Feb 2015
Posts: 1,632
Battle Record: 3-5
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i'd redact it all. it's hard to resist
painting it black with a chisel tip. slashed into little bits, sheet after sheet discarded in bins, future me's archaeological dig. buried so deep in memory's ephemera, it'd escape the attention of any unsavory questioners. i'm plainly defensive. i've learned the consequence of rejecting your past. you forget you forgot, and... that's that.
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#2864 |
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Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 3,934
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Ayo,
The clouds come over your rover Hopin' you'll choke by the roper Fuck a dojo, you shouldn't temper mojo Strapped a quatro clapper under the bandana Huntin' deers, I've even hunted Mister Santa Surrender like them weaklings on cancer I'm the commandin' precense Thru out the murder process Make you suffer losses, a hazard Tactics with bazookas do matter Shatter your next man up, batter man batter Toss up your liquids like salad, No holograms but real battin' practice Ripped with a diamond, I command Simon Interfere streets like police sirens Set on fire like nylons, not lyin' Slide like Bison, hustlin' from Cali to Thailand This your last lap on the track, The last clown act before you on your back I'll kill with my hood on, licensed to kill coupons Son get your troops on, we'll discover a Treu Don. |
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#2865 |
Banned
Join Date: Aug 2014
Posts: 2,956
Battle Record: 6 - 14
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So write 100 lines. Or 500. None of them memorable or substantive. Paint me a picture. Use metaphor and other literary concepts. Iambic pentameter? Rhyme internally. Speak upon the details of the silencer on your "gat", or your "stick". Tell me how you raw-dogged my bitch. Employ corny wordplay. Make pop culture references that I might have to google. Write a good piece and then do it again and again in the same fucking style. Thanks for playing.
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#2866 |
low tide in serotonin bay
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 2,752
Battle Record: 37-28
Champed - GWL Picture Challenge
- Guerrilla Writing League
- Black August II
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Yo it's the god of war, Ferrari floorin'
Destroying bitches careers like a Holly Holm kick The most known unknown prospect since Wale Folarin Withstood the test of time standing alone in a crumbling fortress If i rapped about bitches, money and drugs, would it define me? Would "one dimensional" be printed across my ID? Nah i can't rap about bitches money and drugs that ain't inside of me I rap about twisted, demented thoughts and hyper anxiety! Whooooo...Mr. low Self Esteem, my Offspring gonna hate it When he ends up stuck with the same traits that made me cave in Listening to The Wonder Years wishing i was talented as Soupy But if i tried to sing I'd get the whole crowd chuckling like Snoopy Soooo...i'll refrain, restrain to scratch the itch Throwing fists is hella backwards to the brain of a pacifist |
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#2867 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Jul 2014
Posts: 1,008
Battle Record: 23-10
Champed - Art of Writing League
- AOWL Season 5
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Telling you I love you as a compulsive liar
Sweet words lighting your groin on fire. The moment prior to my arrival, Your heart beat but your pulse was idle With barely enough force to hide it. I'm bat crazy, a by-product of my distorted diet Though you chose to reproduce with a foreign virus Spiraling out of control like an impulsive child. Would of swayed me if it wasn't for that repulsive smile. I'm the plastic surgeon altering your aesthetics of life. An architect with an eye for impressive design, Off-label sociopath as I'm the sensitive kind. I told you since the beginning not to trust me, Now the game in the 9th inning and its ugly. But here we are, living a karmic event Tachycardic ascent every time I get a whiff of your heartless scent. I've managed to make a mess of things, But everytime I try to fix them, infection begins. I'm a balance of intoxicated neurons A cancerous process made of nuance Writing in my death note a complicated message, To finally asphyxiate you with dominating presence. Last edited by UnbornBuddha; 05-21-2020 at 02:29 AM. |
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#2868 | |
Banned
Join Date: Aug 2014
Posts: 2,956
Battle Record: 6 - 14
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Be sure to keep the lines short & choppy As I writhe from demon spells with a contorted body Lie to me more, as I would hate if you were too solemn Tell me more about your woman problems In return I'll give you a snippet of my newspaper columns I heard you represent the shaken & fallen Pills, weed, & shrooms-- I'll be taking all of 'em So you ask, what my true mission be? Observing serendipity; everything your vision sees Then ask me about the meaning of my apparently random thoughts Use your credit card for these inherently plastic costs I've just taken another sporadic loss I'm not sure if I prefer the red or white sauce Not one to floss-- I keep my accomplishments secret Boredom during the week, then astonishment on weekends |
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#2869 |
Storyteller
Join Date: May 2020
Posts: 446
Battle Record: 8-4
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Opening 6 feet's tomb gets your curiosity deepened
Search for artefacts among the traps 'Hey! That's a sweet pen!' Those attempting to wield it screech to a false start One line, their faces melt like 'Raiders of the Lost Ark' Expeditions to find my vision, lounging in pyramids Waiting for the apocalypse, so i can kill this shit Grip the world with rotten lips, rally cries of Semper Fi Burning hearts will always spark, what is dead may never die |
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#2870 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 2013
Posts: 522
Battle Record: 12-12=4
Champed - AOWL Season IX
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The gold behind a full moon, manipulates the flame
demolished billfold slamming saint,feeling faint,it's a trend not a way ten thousand acre maze, paper champs this a way with words play my urge, enabled blade with the fatal curve Last edited by brokenhal0; 06-25-2020 at 06:21 AM. |
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#2871 | |
Senior Member
Join Date: Jul 2014
Posts: 1,008
Battle Record: 23-10
Champed - Art of Writing League
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Chilling psychopathic phrasing. it follows such a classic model Of cliches and imagined sorrows, Emptier soul than a plastic bottle. Opening asylum so madness follows Our life as the overarching shadow. Even the deep end started shallow. Preach to neophytes art is gospel, Paint a picture crucifying Aristole. Leave the past to charm tomorrow. I saw her in the heart of brothels. She lid a cigar that scarred my tonsils. Drank Chiliean wine, experience time And then into the oblivion blind. Last edited by UnbornBuddha; 05-23-2020 at 07:01 AM. |
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#2872 | |
Banned
Join Date: Aug 2014
Posts: 2,956
Battle Record: 6 - 14
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Don't speak of a soul until you've seen my training. I do your bidding. Here, an Aristotle painting. My time I fear is waning. Nothing advancing; nothing gaining. My sloth: I fear there's nothing to stop it. I can't even think of a verse for my next picture topic. At least with You I'm being honest. Netcees has missed your sonnets. A snake-oil salesman told me to empty all my pockets. I obliged, and also asked him if he wanted the shirt off my back. He said yes, took off his hat, and then insulted me. He lacked tact. Just about everything I've written is whack. This is because I only write about things I lack. I'm a poor man too. I'll never see a money stack. I have a hard time because I only work part time. I guess I could go work in the salt mine. At least with my enemies I draw a hard line. I should put this as a piece because it flows fine. |
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#2873 | |
Senior Member
Join Date: Jul 2014
Posts: 1,008
Battle Record: 23-10
Champed - Art of Writing League
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A haunting cursed laugh Bellowing as thunder claps. Winter in a summer dance. Sun and moon contrast, Roses blooming black. The all-father is back, No buffoon will last. Wounds amass As vacuous gas We’re soon to gasp. The vacuum is vast Yet neurosis eats us; A claustrophobic fetus Panics in the womb. Flashes of planetary doom. We’re all in imaginary moods Turning pages of solipsist fables; Fantasies with solid liquid labels. Flux of amnesia and dementia, yet Superior to creatures with dyslexia. Memories are the first to pass Forget how to mourn the past, Who I made love to first detaches. Fuck off was her last words before passing. The curse of falling for whores and manics. Having orgies with sheep in wolf’s clothing. Climaxing just when it looked hopeless. Alcohol makes everyone a smooth poet. Puzzle piece together amor from fragments. Exquisite experience nothing more than facets. Undulate as we explore tantra’s pattern. Desecrating the sacred, Spitting on your corpse and laughing. I can feel your aura blacken. Last edited by UnbornBuddha; 05-25-2020 at 06:12 AM. |
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#2874 |
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Join Date: Jul 2013
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What an awkward bastard, went from awesome as to a luke warm ass,
In a second flat Blunt trauma asks can he make a entrance Well if shit can break ya dentures Your made to enter Come on & step up in this hot spot of an epicenter Throw some infection around, lock every sceptical down Straight jacket every muther fucker 'til they learn how to social distance themselves... |
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#2875 |
Mad fucking dangerous.
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 12,066
Battle Record: 40-19
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It's a matter of physical health:
The man in the mask hiding intentions, within the line at reception standing in last, handling flasks while time is suspended. Nervous, surprised at the test kit, a fly needle supplying the red drip and nasal swab to scrape your snot, then another wait in line for the exit.
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#2876 | |
Banned
Join Date: Aug 2014
Posts: 2,956
Battle Record: 6 - 14
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My defenses are prickled as though you were an arch enemy 5 of 6 of my Russian Roulette bullets I will start emptying I have some concerns about your verse, but I'm not questioning I've taken photos of your death poses I've clipped the thorns from your black roses Give me a "sweet something" in verse form that doesn't involve sheep fucking! My apologies, as I'm highly literal It's just my nightly ritual Diagnose your frightening physical Eminem said "careful what you wish for" I say our music fades in discord Caving to the demands, of This horde Tell me what you wrote your list for I wish to observe your God complex You can compare it to my "for old time's sake" nonsense I need more exercise before early health problem onsets One day I'll tie together your words Just as one day I will provide you, with a medical verse |
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#2877 |
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Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 3,934
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I'm better with words, you're what a herb is mate
Get of the curb talk 'fore you literally kiss the pavement I'll kick your face in, walk over the bridge of your nose Rip thru every inch of your dome In an instant, basic Your base is basically bashable on a daily basis You's a epic fail, I break shit without YouTube hits You're who? Who's this? Fuck the commentary bitch The comedy trollin' & how you hop on everybodies dick Just give a thumbs up or two down & move onwards with it & I don't bite dog, just fuck 'em remember? From January 'til the month of December I've no beef with Hush son, if he remains silent Should use that poxy alias more & fuckin' stay quiet. |
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#2878 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 2013
Posts: 522
Battle Record: 12-12=4
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Born conception immortal resurrection
lord of reflection I cured the infection accidents happen at the intersection destine for love sent from above step in the dust respect or get touched accomplished nothing for the famine is flood the salmon has swum on a mountain of slugs your mouth is the guts even if you get it or not you bound to get it in blood exorcist sus the heckler spun protection is must fall into temptation but the devil is us believe me or not no seeds in the pot its steaming its hot its demons its rot graffiti and rock feed em the botch the season for shocks they fiending even the thots... Last edited by brokenhal0; 07-10-2020 at 05:48 PM. |
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#2879 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Mar 2016
Posts: 269
Battle Record: 17-9
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I sit starin' at a blank page, preparin' to paint rage
spaced & arranged for clever turns of quaint phrase flames flay, skin burns disperse in strange ways the joint finishes knowin' the listener's brain's blazed scattered patterns of thought are captured & caught straight to the pad they get brought to establish a plot doesn't matter if you happen to be savage or not don't speak on the key to success unless you have it on lock wrestle w/ thoughts to blow off steam... pots & kettles meditate 'til i'm full of patience like a doctor's schedule |
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#2880 |
low tide in serotonin bay
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 2,752
Battle Record: 37-28
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Always in a predicament where i have to pick up shards
Liquor shots and porn stars only ones who never broke my heart Out my fucking noodle, boiling like a pack of stroganoff Let's start a fucking riot I'm in the front row fucking choking cops Paint the sidewalk with chalk, and POP POP red colored polka dots It ain't my rotator cuff, man when that thing on my shoulder pop Red River rum man i make them floors wet... Straight up lyrical killer more abstract than Alanis Morisette |
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