04-16-2019, 07:51 AM | #1 |
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I made a little song called Blood In that Water
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04-21-2019, 02:13 AM | #2 |
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sucked thx
try going on tempo to the beat next time. it's terrible |
04-21-2019, 09:19 AM | #3 |
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Hey, you got better at staying on beat. Aside from a few hiccups this was pretty on beat
Next for you is pitch, imo. The sung hooks sound like you're approximating what you want (high to low, etc) but just like being on the beat, you need to know and work within the context of the beat to get your message across If you want a rundown on how to find the 'key' of the song, let me know |
04-21-2019, 09:49 AM | #4 |
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04-22-2019, 06:53 PM | #5 |
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SMH. There is an audio section.
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04-22-2019, 07:10 PM | #6 |
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