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Old 10-22-2014, 02:07 PM   #81
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Old 10-22-2014, 02:24 PM   #82
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Had a lil BBQ at the crib today right, nothing big, chicken, two types of ASADA, which unless you been to cali you probably have no clue what that really is, hot links ya know?


Well, the neighbor was BBQing too, just one of them days. I offered him some meat and he did the same. He's straight mexican mind you. GAve me a chili too, I eat mad spicey food right? Anyways. I cooked that bitch on the grill and took a little bite.

For about 15 minutes I was in tears, I don't know what that asshole gave me but safe to say, I'll be the asshole in pain later. I didn't even get to eat the damn food cause I filled up on milk and bread trying to cut the spice.

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Old 10-23-2014, 08:37 AM   #85
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Old 10-23-2014, 05:07 PM   #86
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Would anyone be interested in a comedy week? Topics would be based on photos and/or quotes but verses must be comedic in some way shape or form... would be kind of a breath of fresh air.
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Old 10-23-2014, 05:19 PM   #87
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I don't like the idea of forcing people to approach a topic in a specific style. Couldn't the topics be themed on comedy somehow, with everyone free to interpret as they want?
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Old 10-23-2014, 05:29 PM   #89
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I find the idea funny and funny within a funny isn't funny...its hilarious
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Old 10-23-2014, 05:35 PM   #91
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is it just me...or do I not have a topic?
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keep my fucking name out your bitch mouth, frodo donis.
Have you seen your av lately??

Your life is based off of providing LOLZ on a bandwagon you dumb mother fucker

I will put your name where I damn well please and you can't do shit about it because I'm not a soft and emotional person you can attack and I won't back down. You want to go dosey doo again?

No bitch, you don't. I will follow you around and simply post after you, or have you forgotten that your posts are dumb?

No. Oh, how cute, maybe I should point that out again

Fuckin lame ass queer.


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You need to work on all of the above bitch

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that pic on vulgar v mrj is sick. lookin forward to those verses.
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im down. would be way out of my comfort zone.
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Comedy week would be weir. Although I love to challenge myself and I'd like to think i can write about anything on any topic, being forced to be humorous just sounds weird to me.



On a somewhat similar topic...

Would anyone be interested in having a short verse week? everyone must write, say, 16 lines or less?

I enjoyed that tourney and look forward to part two. I know certain didn't participate so I assume he wouldn't mind taking a crack at it
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"Would anyone be interested in having a short verse week? everyone must write, say, 16 lines or less?

I enjoyed that tourney and look forward to part two. I know certain didn't participate so I assume he wouldn't mind taking a crack at it " -

Being a bit of an aficionado I've formed some clear preferences on what I think are good topics. Certain does it best, you have a big theme that connects all the weekly topics and then each individual match-up is a slight variation on that big theme. (E.g., The dead presidents week - had all the different quotes. The graffiti week produced a lot of surprisingly varied and excellent submissions as well. Even MikeWrecka's infamous 'colored square' week was alright in that sense!) With this method of stimulus allocation you give an option for the writer to focus in on their individual topic or to expand more onto the larger theme.

Also, specifically for picture topics. I'm sure it can be great fun to grab all these fantasy-like pictures from whatever art-school emo with autism and suicidal tendencies deviant-art page you can find, but consider using more normal pictures perhaps? Even if it's just as a change of pace. I mean when you have a picture of a unicorn ridden by some knight atop a castle with a rainbow skull for a face, it kind of limits your options in a way. It's easier to write fantasy stuff if you want to about a normal picture, but it's pretty difficult to write normal stuff about a fantasy picture.
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fuck!!! me too, Certain.
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Just finished a 15-hour work day. Right now:



Can't even think straight enough to pay attention to lyrics.
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I think it's impossible to pick a favorite song. 'Gimme Shelter' is usually my default if asked. Usually gives the person asking a frame of reference of some sort.

But if someone pointed a gun to my head and told me to be honest, it'd be 'Zurich is Stained'.

It's just perfect. Sad, short, literate, the guitar, the melody. Perfect.
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