11-30-2013, 06:23 PM | #2 |
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How bout 24, Cash? G/l
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11-30-2013, 06:28 PM | #3 |
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Those wins aren’t just shallow, they’re miles above sea level & getting dizzy from altitude You’re boring as fuck. Don’t have what it takes to topple a great’s lines Your personality’s Behr & you’re bout as much fun as watching that Paint dry Srs, who is this faggot?!?! He’s got NO charisma, pure & simple Cash Character's so fucking foreign it could replace the Pound Sign & Euro Symbol In clubs I’m macking the choicest queens, while this fag is prancing flamboyantly Far as sex and what floats his boat … I guarantee that it’s having a Buoyancy & when my verse is critiqued, the “creative” “& dope”s are substantial to view Cash breakdowns have “Standard” & “Poor”s so much they read like financial reviews He’s an insufferable homo, with hormones that’s badly proportioned Really, I can’t bear this fruit. His mom should’ve said the same & had the abortion My wallet’s hefty. Ur pockets empty cuz u lack career connections My bank Balance is healthy… urs looks like it’s drunk and got an inner ear infection & yo I killed it trading Exotic Stocks - all of the Futures I bought climbed While your Call Options consist of either your mom or the suicide hotline I write hours of flames... then a little filler… OK, it’s a downer but hey Ur verses have such a Liberal dose of it they’re turning vegan & won’t shower for days & if u Show Up here I’ll go ape shit - prolly do time for the scrape kid I’ll gladly take the years off your appearance… & I ain’t talking no face lift Put the fear in you & you’ll Change Inside… get nullified if u want it U’ll eat slugs from the gat… & next time u see me there’ll be butterflies in ur stomach
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You're that faggot teacher kids make fun of. Really, dude...I'll dent your eyes
You fucking NERD. Prolly got enough pocket protectors to field a full offensive line You can't even get females to stay on the phone. You should purposely die, creature Once ya'll starch ya collar first reaction is to hang up...s'like she works at a dry cleaner I had planned on bullying this nerd...you should maybe shut your mouth, son Cause I was gonna get domineering, but this faggot looks gay enough without one My lady loves expensive things. But it's cool...I'm making scratch, and quick The only thing YOU'D blow on a material girl...is air to inflate that plastic bitch Please tell me you wrote your Neigh verse in 10 mins...I certainly grimaced, cuz I hope that's what you colicky, cause it SCREAMS quick...worse than an infant does Your life sucks...I'd tell you log off from Netcees but you probably never can Spends so much time in front of the green screen you'd think Dom was a weather man A girl takes one look and that pussy is leaving...They clearly laugh at you This loser would be seeing pouch bounce even if he DIDN'T live near the kangaroos Dom in the HOF? LOLOLOLOL...You've got no clout and you know it, queer In one year you got more Hall passes than you've given out in your whole career You stalked your ex girl. She spent the last 2 years telling you you're trash That bitch finally had to come to you foreclosure so you'd stop dwelling on the past I got maids on the payroll, loser...We're not slightly thinking you're rich Closest you came to getting a household cleaner is a night of drinking with Strik Bro, one look at you and I knew you were a homo...It's blatantly the facts I'll label him a fag. Cause anyone who sodomy knew right away he takes it in the ass
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Nice accomplishments chump. Top tiers weren’t sticking around for you
Those wins aren’t just shallow, they’re miles above sea level & getting dizzy from altitude You’re boring as fuck. Don’t have what it takes to topple a great’s lines Your personality’s Behr & you’re bout as much fun as watching that Paint dry Srs, who is this faggot?!?! He’s got NO charisma, pure & simple Cash Character's so fucking foreign it could replace the Pound Sign & Euro Symbol In clubs I’m macking the choicest queens, while this fag is prancing flamboyantly Far as sex and what floats his boat … I guarantee that it’s having a Buoyancy ^that wordplay was dope 'Boy In C/Buoyancy ' .. think a lot of people will miss it .. unless i point it out .. & yo I killed it trading Exotic Stocks - all of the Futures I bought climbed While your Call Options consist of either your mom or the suicide hotline I write hours of flames... then a little filler… OK, it’s a downer but hey Ur verses have such a Liberal dose of it they’re turning vegan & won’t shower for days Overall --- Pretty dope all around verse there was def. some misses and played concept but that will happen .. Your wordplay execution makes your verse's very fun to read w/ creativity & direction ... you had a couple bars with decent concept but bad execution or wording .. you had 2 Behr/Bear flips... Vs You're that faggot teacher kids make fun of. Really, dude...I'll dent your eyes You fucking NERD. Prolly got enough pocket protectors to field a full offensive line I had planned on bullying this nerd...you should maybe shut your mouth, son Cause I was gonna get domineering, but this faggot looks gay enough without one ^dom an ear ring ? like a knock out? if so dope bar My lady loves expensive things. But it's cool...I'm making scratch, and quick The only thing YOU'D blow on a material girl...is air to inflate that plastic bitch Dom in the HOF? LOLOLOLOL...You've got no clout and you know it, queer In one year you got more Hall passes than you've given out in your whole career You stalked your ex girl. She spent the last 2 years telling you you're trash That bitch finally had to come to you foreclosure so you'd stop dwelling on the past Bro, one look at you and I knew you were a homo...It's blatantly the facts I'll label him a fag. Cause anyone who sodomy knew right away he takes it in the ass Overall --- Cash, you came w/ some dope wordplay ... had a couple misses that werent complete misses they still had a nice concept.. the flow was there .. the connection was there ... the direction was there .. i believe you had 2 more lines quoted then Dom even though i think Dom had the Bar of the Battle ... Vote- got to give it to Cash for more consistency this battle could def. go either way though .. i think Doms Bouyancy bar was the best of the battle & didnt think he would lose after that .. but he sizzled out ... |
12-11-2013, 10:44 AM | #8 |
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Been a while since I read a battle, mostly due to a majority of battle verses sounding like what Dominate posted. It was bland, and oddly enough, like watching paint dry. Wordplay was largely reaches, and grasping at creative straws. The wording, flow wise, was decent, but basically every thing else was eh, or worse. When I started reading Cash's, I was prepared for more of the same, and figured I wouldn't be bothering to vote. I was rather impressed, though. The wordplay was cleverly used and directly worded. There were only a few missteps (colicky), and I felt compelled to drop an opinion due to the one sided beating that was handed out.
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12-11-2013, 03:49 PM | #9 |
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You’re boring as fuck. Don’t have what it takes to topple a great’s lines
Your personality’s Behr & you’re bout as much fun as watching that Paint dry Srs, who is this faggot?!?! He’s got NO charisma, pure & simple Cash Character's so fucking foreign it could replace the Pound Sign & Euro Symbol & when my verse is critiqued, the “creative” “& dope”s are substantial to view Cash breakdowns have “Standard” & “Poor”s so much they read like financial reviews I write hours of flames... then a little filler… OK, it’s a downer but hey Ur verses have such a Liberal dose of it they’re turning vegan & won’t shower for days v You're that faggot teacher kids make fun of. Really, dude...I'll dent your eyes You fucking NERD. Prolly got enough pocket protectors to field a full offensive line Your life sucks...I'd tell you log off from Netcees but you probably never can Spends so much time in front of the green screen you'd think Dom was a weather man A girl takes one look and that pussy is leaving...They clearly laugh at you This loser would be seeing pouch bounce even if he DIDN'T live near the kangaroos Dom in the HOF? LOLOLOLOL...You've got no clout and you know it, queer In one year you got more Hall passes than you've given out in your whole career just quoted the best from both. not necessarily all that was good. more than 8 lines each obv was good. probably every line was good from a technical standpoint. i just didn't feel the blandness in alotta the lines. the delivery was the same so it got repetitive to me. what i quoted was dope tho. i think cash was more direct w. the teacher stuff and more personal. more humour in his to so i resonated more towards him cuz i rate humour highly. nice shit, props for showing. vote cashius |
12-11-2013, 05:49 PM | #10 | |
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Behr,buoyancy,bear fruit,closer vs opener,domineering,green screen,hall passes, housecleaning Nice battle here, dominate does have some bad wordplay at times and I'm not sure if it's the Aussie accent or something else, but it does hold him back. In this verse I felt everything was on point though. This time you just lacked consistency. Two bear lines didn't affect the verse cuz I was feeling both. Solid verse. Cash had some misses but overall he was consistent. Green screen LOTB and fire. In addition, he also had the more stand out lines. It wasn't a blow out but I do feel Cash took this. V/cash Last edited by Alvin Karpis; 12-16-2013 at 07:14 PM. |
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12-15-2013, 08:38 PM | #11 |
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12-15-2013, 08:45 PM | #12 |
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You’re boring as fuck. Don’t have what it takes to topple a great’s lines
Your personality’s Behr & you’re bout as much fun as watching that Paint dry Srs, who is this faggot?!?! He’s got NO charisma, pure & simple Cash Character's so fucking foreign it could replace the Pound Sign & Euro Symbol In clubs I’m macking the choicest queens, while this fag is prancing flamboyantly Far as sex and what floats his boat … I guarantee that it’s having a Buoyancy & yo I killed it trading Exotic Stocks - all of the Futures I bought climbed While your Call Options consist of either your mom or the suicide hotline Put the fear in you & you’ll Change Inside… get nullified if u want it U’ll eat slugs from the gat… & next time u see me there’ll be butterflies in ur stomach vs. You're that faggot teacher kids make fun of. Really, dude...I'll dent your eyes You fucking NERD. Prolly got enough pocket protectors to field a full offensive line I had planned on bullying this nerd...you should maybe shut your mouth, son Cause I was gonna get domineering, but this faggot looks gay enough without one My lady loves expensive things. But it's cool...I'm making scratch, and quick The only thing YOU'D blow on a material girl...is air to inflate that plastic bitch Your life sucks...I'd tell you log off from Netcees but you probably never can Spends so much time in front of the green screen you'd think Dom was a weather man Dom in the HOF? LOLOLOLOL...You've got no clout and you know it, queer In one year you got more Hall passes than you've given out in your whole career I got maids on the payroll, loser...We're not slightly thinking you're rich Closest you came to getting a household cleaner is a night of drinking with Strik Damn this was a dope solid battle a bunch of wp and nice nameplay shit was a tough call on my 1st read but I think one had a couple extra bars that were stronger both dudes is dope though good I got to catch a read. Props on all the dope bars fav bars from each is bolded v/Cash Last edited by Unfukwitable; 12-15-2013 at 09:02 PM. |
12-16-2013, 06:51 PM | #13 |
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Nice accomplishments chump. Top tiers weren’t sticking around for you Those wins aren’t just shallow, they’re miles above sea level & getting dizzy from altitude not bad could've been worded better You’re boring as fuck. Don’t have what it takes to topple a great’s lines Your personality’s Behr & you’re bout as much fun as watching that Paint dry lol word Srs, who is this faggot?!?! He’s got NO charisma, pure & simple Cash Character's so fucking foreign it could replace the Pound Sign & Euro Symbol dope In clubs I’m macking the choicest queens, while this fag is prancing flamboyantly Far as sex and what floats his boat … I guarantee that it’s having a Buoyancy ehh & when my verse is critiqued, the “creative” “& dope”s are substantial to view Cash breakdowns have “Standard” & “Poor”s so much they read like financial reviews lol good shit He’s an insufferable homo, with hormones that’s badly proportioned Really, I can’t bear this fruit. His mom should’ve said the same & had the abortion nahh My wallet’s hefty. Ur pockets empty cuz u lack career connections My bank Balance is healthy… urs looks like it’s drunk and got an inner ear infection nah & yo I killed it trading Exotic Stocks - all of the Futures I bought climbed While your Call Options consist of either your mom or the suicide hotline lol I write hours of flames... then a little filler… OK, it’s a downer but hey Ur verses have such a Liberal dose of it they’re turning vegan & won’t shower for days not bad & if u Show Up here I’ll go ape shit - prolly do time for the scrape kid I’ll gladly take the years off your appearance… & I ain’t talking no face lift nahh Put the fear in you & you’ll Change Inside… get nullified if u want it U’ll eat slugs from the gat… & next time u see me there’ll be butterflies in ur stomach lol deece closer Cashius You're that faggot teacher kids make fun of. Really, dude...I'll dent your eyes You fucking NERD. Prolly got enough pocket protectors to field a full offensive line setup was dumb but landed hard. You can't even get females to stay on the phone. You should purposely die, creature Once ya'll starch ya collar first reaction is to hang up...s'like she works at a dry cleaner lol word I had planned on bullying this nerd...you should maybe shut your mouth, son Cause I was gonna get domineering, but this faggot looks gay enough without one word My lady loves expensive things. But it's cool...I'm making scratch, and quick The only thing YOU'D blow on a material girl...is air to inflate that plastic bitch lol Please tell me you wrote your Neigh verse in 10 mins...I certainly grimaced, cuz I hope that's what you colicky, cause it SCREAMS quick...worse than an infant does nahh Your life sucks...I'd tell you log off from Netcees but you probably never can Spends so much time in front of the green screen you'd think Dom was a weather man nahh A girl takes one look and that pussy is leaving...They clearly laugh at you This loser would be seeing pouch bounce even if he DIDN'T live near the kangaroos lol Dom in the HOF? LOLOLOLOL...You've got no clout and you know it, queer In one year you got more Hall passes than you've given out in your whole career good shit You stalked your ex girl. She spent the last 2 years telling you you're trash That bitch finally had to come to you foreclosure so you'd stop dwelling on the past nahh I got maids on the payroll, loser...We're not slightly thinking you're rich Closest you came to getting a household cleaner is a night of drinking with Strik dunno Bro, one look at you and I knew you were a homo...It's blatantly the facts I'll label him a fag. Cause anyone who sodomy knew right away he takes it in the ass lol I gotta go with cash on this one. prtty close battle here, nothing really serious went down but it wasn't bad. vote - cash |
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12-18-2013, 08:02 AM | #15 |
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Nice accomplishments chump. Top tiers weren’t sticking around for you
Those wins aren’t just shallow, they’re miles above sea level & getting dizzy from altitude ^kinda weird. shouldn't they be below sea level if they're more than shallow? You’re boring as fuck. Don’t have what it takes to topple a great’s lines Your personality’s Behr & you’re bout as much fun as watching that Paint dry ^not bad Srs, who is this faggot?!?! He’s got NO charisma, pure & simple Cash Character's so fucking foreign it could replace the Pound Sign & Euro Symbol ^nice In clubs I’m macking the choicest queens, while this fag is prancing flamboyantly Far as sex and what floats his boat … I guarantee that it’s having a Buoyancy ^liked it & when my verse is critiqued, the “creative” “& dope”s are substantial to view Cash breakdowns have “Standard” & “Poor”s so much they read like financial reviews ^could be played, i've never seen it, so aite He’s an insufferable homo, with hormones that’s badly proportioned Really, I can’t bear this fruit. His mom should’ve said the same & had the abortion ^dece. kinda obv My wallet’s hefty. Ur pockets empty cuz u lack career connections My bank Balance is healthy… urs looks like it’s drunk and got an inner ear infection ^seen like almost the exact line before. think it was by kung. sth like "i eat a balanced diet. urs got a peg leg and an inner ear infection". so yea, this didn't hit for me, unfortunately, cuz it's dope concept & yo I killed it trading Exotic Stocks - all of the Futures I bought climbed While your Call Options consist of either your mom or the suicide hotline ^dece I write hours of flames... then a little filler… OK, it’s a downer but hey Ur verses have such a Liberal dose of it they’re turning vegan & won’t shower for days ^hmm. worded kinda weirdly. concept was aite, but i didn't like the setup and the beginning of the punchline. & if u Show Up here I’ll go ape shit - prolly do time for the scrape kid I’ll gladly take the years off your appearance… & I ain’t talking no face lift ^nice. liked this Put the fear in you & you’ll Change Inside… get nullified if u want it U’ll eat slugs from the gat… & next time u see me there’ll be butterflies in ur stomach ^hah, not bad. vs. You're that faggot teacher kids make fun of. Really, dude...I'll dent your eyes You fucking NERD. Prolly got enough pocket protectors to field a full offensive line ^aite You can't even get females to stay on the phone. You should purposely die, creature Once ya'll starch ya collar first reaction is to hang up...s'like she works at a dry cleaner ^not bad I had planned on bullying this nerd...you should maybe shut your mouth, son Cause I was gonna get domineering, but this faggot looks gay enough without one ^lol nice My lady loves expensive things. But it's cool...I'm making scratch, and quick The only thing YOU'D blow on a material girl...is air to inflate that plastic bitch ^never seen this angle before. so, good Please tell me you wrote your Neigh verse in 10 mins...I certainly grimaced, cuz I hope that's what you colicky, cause it SCREAMS quick...worse than an infant does ^hm aite Your life sucks...I'd tell you log off from Netcees but you probably never can Spends so much time in front of the green screen you'd think Dom was a weather man ^fresh concept A girl takes one look and that pussy is leaving...They clearly laugh at you This loser would be seeing pouch bounce even if he DIDN'T live near the kangaroos ^nice Dom in the HOF? LOLOLOLOL...You've got no clout and you know it, queer In one year you got more Hall passes than you've given out in your whole career ^again, good You stalked your ex girl. She spent the last 2 years telling you you're trash That bitch finally had to come to you foreclosure so you'd stop dwelling on the past ^aite I got maids on the payroll, loser...We're not slightly thinking you're rich Closest you came to getting a household cleaner is a night of drinking with Strik ^aite Bro, one look at you and I knew you were a homo...It's blatantly the facts I'll label him a fag. Cause anyone who sodomy knew right away he takes it in the ass ^pretty dope so after reading dom's verse, i was pretty sure he was gonna get my vote. but cash dropped dope here. lotta fresh concepts from both, but more from cash. not to take anything from dom. this was a really good battle and i def enjoyed the read. y'all both dropped fire, cash had a cpl more hits. gd shit, y'all. forreal. v/cash |
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