07-11-2022, 08:15 PM | #1 |
HE / HIM / FRAC
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Wanderer vs Aero - AERO WINS
Netcees SOL Season II Week 3 Due Thursday, July 14th at Midnight PST Minimum: 8 Lines Maximum: 12 Lines 24hr ext given on request NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You MUST check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @Wanderer @Aero |
07-11-2022, 11:57 PM | #2 |
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07-12-2022, 09:14 AM | #3 |
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Sure thing, 8 it is
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07-14-2022, 11:24 PM | #5 |
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07-14-2022, 11:59 PM | #6 |
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Aero's Verse
You lost with ease, all that fake talk is cheap User saying Pardon at birthdays: another cakewalk for me Shoot your children dead with assaulting burst from matics Head shots. Wanda never see those kids again like the multiverse of madness I get bitches on Tinder, results don't seem to vary for single/married Only your bitch didn't swipe right for me, left my dick with dingleberries :( Let's talk FACTS, he was a house squatter. It's true this guy's broke You haven't had a legal pad since your last suicide note Wanderer's Verse A case of mistaken arrogance never seen before on the lime U said ur word is law.. & when u speak it feels like we’ve served time Yo I get ur unique style of writing. Even tho it’s homo as fuck For u it’s a form of escapism.. from battles u were hoping to duck Even if you got a laugh from me I’d still end u so take stock Tac deployed like an asteroid. When I look thru the scope see the whole space rock Sent me advice in the past, I didn’t ask but hurtful facts man: If ur tips anywhere near fire it’s fingerless gloves over a burning trash can |
07-15-2022, 02:42 AM | #7 | |
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Well, as the saying goes... "Not All Those Who Wander Are Lost"... except in this case, Wander definitely lost. |
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07-15-2022, 09:41 AM | #8 |
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You lost with ease, all that fake talk is cheap User saying Pardon at birthdays: another cakewalk for me ^ LOVE the idea here, made me laugh, may have been able to be worded better Shoot your children dead with assaulting burst from matics Head shots. Wanda never see those kids again like the multiverse of madness ^ damn bro. I’ve seen the ‘Wanda’ wordplay before but this shit was hard I get bitches on Tinder, results don't seem to vary for single/married Only your bitch didn't swipe right for me, left my dick with dingleberries :( ^ lmao same here. Funny bar but could use some restructuring IMO Let's talk FACTS, he was a house squatter. It's true this guy's broke You haven't had a legal pad since your last suicide note ^ I get this but I didn’t really like it Wand: A case of mistaken arrogance never seen before on the lime U said ur word is law.. & when u speak it feels like we’ve served time ^ ehh decent enough, cool idea Yo I get ur unique style of writing. Even tho it’s homo as fuck For u it’s a form of escapism.. from battles u were hoping to duck ^ the idea is cool but I don’t think it hits Even if you got a laugh from me I’d still end u so take stock Tac deployed like an asteroid. When I look thru the scope see the whole space rock ^ this was decent enough Sent me advice in the past, I didn’t ask but hurtful facts man: If ur tips anywhere near fire it’s fingerless gloves over a burning trash can ^ really like this one. Dope concept I think I’ll take Aero off consistency, I think you both missed on some good opportunities but I think Aero had higher low points IMO so going for him. Nice battle though from both V/Aero |
07-15-2022, 10:17 AM | #9 |
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strong vote from the guy who said hed play keep away with macs lungs CTACH YA BREATH lol fucking literal retard
Aero's Verse You lost with ease, all that fake talk is cheap User saying Pardon at birthdays: another cakewalk for me lol told u this sucked yeesterday idiot Shoot your children dead with assaulting burst from matics Head shots. Wanda never see those kids again like the multiverse of madness nice who wrote this, blue? I get bitches on Tinder, results don't seem to vary for single/married Only your bitch didn't swipe right for me, left my dick with dingleberries :( lol wtf such a gross human Let's talk FACTS, he was a house squatter. It's true this guy's broke You haven't had a legal pad since your last suicide note lol this was dope Wanderer's Verse A case of mistaken arrogance never seen before on the lime U said ur word is law.. & when u speak it feels like we’ve served time lol wording off but I like it. it truly is a task to listen to austins nonsense sometimes. Yo I get ur unique style of writing. Even tho it’s homo as fuck For u it’s a form of escapism.. from battles u were hoping to duck hows he escaping from the battles by writing for them Even if you got a laugh from me I’d still end u so take stock Tac deployed like an asteroid. When I look thru the scope see the whole space rock oh cool man yea watch out aero wands gonna fucking watch the moon with his telescope ...hide the children Sent me advice in the past, I didn’t ask but hurtful facts man: If ur tips anywhere near fire it’s fingerless gloves over a burning trash can wording sucks again but the concept is there give it to aero for wanda and legal pad but it was closer than it shouldve been |
07-15-2022, 04:41 PM | #10 |
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Wanda (think it was used on him iirc, but k cool)
Legal Pad Wand had almost opener, tips The difference here was effective wording conceptually close but a good example of how cleaner writing changes it. Vote Aero |
07-16-2022, 11:47 PM | #11 |
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You lost with ease, all that fake talk is cheap
User saying Pardon at birthdays: another cakewalk for me lol @ flip. Not sure about “a cake walk for me” meaning you don’t get any cake. Am I missing something? Shoot your children dead with assaulting burst from matics Head shots. Wanda never see those kids again like the multiverse of madness nice I get bitches on Tinder, results don't seem to vary for single/married Only your bitch didn't swipe right for me, left my dick with dingleberries :( Lol ok. Gross though Let's talk FACTS, he was a house squatter. It's true this guy's broke You haven't had a legal pad since your last suicide note nice A case of mistaken arrogance never seen before on the lime U said ur word is law.. & when u speak it feels like we’ve served time Almost. There’s a good punch concept here but the wp connections are too tenuous for me. A better rhyme might have helped it land better Yo I get ur unique style of writing. Even tho it’s homo as fuck For u it’s a form of escapism.. from battles u were hoping to duck Same as above. His pseudo rhyming erotic fiction and penchant for phoning it in are valid personal angles but the wordplay/punchline just isn’t doing it for me Even if you got a laugh from me I’d still end u so take stock Tac deployed like an asteroid. When I look thru the scope see the whole space rock Thought this one was pretty dope. Swaggy and good rhymes in 2nd line Sent me advice in the past, I didn’t ask but hurtful facts man: If ur tips anywhere near fire it’s fingerless gloves over a burning trash can thought this was pretty good too[/QUOTE] Aero got it 3 bars to 2
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