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Old 03-23-2019, 12:13 AM   #1
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lachrymation and silence

my most cherished possession. holstered like a primary weapon
baseline until i count to 7, quiet like a library session
four
five
six. these moments just help you evolve
which adds truth to my theory that pain is a necessary involvement
in life and in fiction, typecast me as your typical loner
sedentary absolving finding peace as a cynical joker
time caught in a stone. i'd propose if you let it
i could grab you a minute, if you'd hold me a second
slowly regressing
into a caterpillar
hold me. then clench me. visit my calloused winters
(don't) let me go- grab my spring and it's passive whispers
don't catch my depression. but, do catch my kisses
even if it's something to feel
run to the hills. rip out this chapter & section
tourniquet heal. veins indigo, black, and magenta
dab in scented oil to mask the repentance
cloaking valid potential into the aridest deserts
ignoring red flags was only half of the question
half the equation, double the time, a third of the lesson
do clipped wings still make birds as majestic?
hardly.
do my inklings slipped under your door make you regret it?
still hear your laugh interlaced in absentia
if a tree falls in a forest you burn does it matter no more
does the sound it make get engulfed in the roars?
séto masochist, full of control
atom poems in my notepad stayed so reactive
drunk cursive shooting out my pen like the borealis
digitalis in the garden. ketel 1 in my ale
procrastinating out ending, i couldn't have been better prepared
zero plotwists keep character progression derailed
fighting uphill battles with no wind in my sails
i promise you i meant what i said
even if half of it was muttered on the other side of the bed
I'm waiting alone. plagued by a catch-22
you sang me song, but sang it in blue
win, lose or draw. paint pictures of this varying muse
recapturing colors that i barely knew
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If mentioned in a discussion its who'd still use wordy lines and act all dope
Then again hes had this schtick so long he like bb da bb da bb thats all folks
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Old 03-23-2019, 01:59 AM   #2
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This was well-crafted. A draught of a drink you feel passionate about and wanted to bring to light, perhaps? The content evoked a lot of thoughts about where you classify yourself in a relationship, your potential for fulfilling mental support or obligations with your partner? The color of emotions. Sentimental wavelengths.

Looks like you spent some time molding and shaping this.
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Old 03-27-2019, 01:10 AM   #3
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Umm. You're talented but all your pieces sound the same?
And I think you know it.

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Old 03-30-2019, 01:46 PM   #4
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- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
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- related to genghis khan
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Old 04-04-2019, 01:45 PM   #5
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loved it

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Old 04-07-2019, 11:47 AM   #6
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Borealis was a dank visual.
Very felt. Relatable. The catch22sang it in blue was lovely. Thanks.
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Old 04-08-2019, 05:36 AM   #7
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digitalis in the garden. ketel 1 in my ale
procrastinating out ending, i couldn't have been better prepared
zero plotwists keep character progression derailed
fighting uphill battles with no wind in my sails
i promise you i meant what i said
even if half of it was muttered on the other side of the bed
this was sick

i couldn't really piece the parts together, but it was written pretty. very lyrical throughout, but in a way that is different than i'm used to with your writing. more purposeful dissonance

i don't post but i still read :)
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