04-29-2019, 12:38 AM | #1 |
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Week 2: veritas (0-1) vs. josh s (0-1) - JOSH S WINS
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Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON A MINIMUM OF 4 BATTLES WILL RESULT IN A DEDUCTION OF 2 VOTES IN YOUR BATTLE. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! VOTE ON 4 BATTLES MINIMUM OR YOU PAY THE PRICE. SIMPLE! COMPLETE RULE THREAD: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=140091 @veritas @josh s |
04-29-2019, 01:47 AM | #2 |
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04-30-2019, 04:57 AM | #3 |
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I got this "heel locked"
I wont offer a truce.. known to lie in bed with da goddess of truth
then left Veritas at the bottom of a well after I fucked the daughter of Zeus lettuce prey; V's just food on a plate, why you carrots not valid ?? but if you red rounds of this fagot then you oughta know Veri toss salad dashit I'm kicking goes over bitches heads, V can't figure a round out must live under a rock.. so it's only right that I give you a round house Jiu Jitsu amounts to foolishness, u can't get out, it's uselessness I'll hold u to the same treatment Jesus got, what's that?! a "mounted crucifix"! think that's fucking hard? just wait til the bucking start I had ur bitch in so many positions my dick slipped right out the "rubber guard" lemme guess.. u just gonna "roll" with the punches?? i'd let tools hit um I'm into 3-somes with bitches, u only "love triangles" when there's dudes in um i'm a freakin' ape, tail gated ya mom's ford compact sport.. like, that's a "hip Escape"! watch how I "go.. go plot a" murder scene, all i need is my shin bone to stick in place by now ur probably "grappling" with da fact i'm a natural hard spar spinning elbow, then hand you a cold shoulder.. that's an actual "arm bar"!! Last edited by josh s; 04-30-2019 at 05:44 AM. Reason: Rakim aura |
04-30-2019, 09:59 AM | #4 | |
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Veritas is pulmonary Emphysema, meaning you don’t want the smoke,
Fifty Shades a Gray ya chick, with a demeaning Rear Naked Choke. A disciple of the six masters of Ryōzanpaku, so I’m invincible in battle, That’s why you couldn’t affect this beef if you were Monsanto Cattle Old school vet, undefeated, often cheated, still a threat, a pimp, and the Don, it ain't a thing to register your wife for my gifts like I'm Bed Bath and Beyond. Smashing hard, I swim in the sea of her G spot, it’s immense what I’m packing Know the hoe screaming out: “Oh Zeus! release the Kraken!” Give her to the team, I’m the John Stockton of passing her for the fare time, got that hoe relapsed on tricking, falling back like Karl Malone’s hairline. You can’t beat me, even let you choose my utensil, it won't matter, I’ll take your neck like I’m John Wick with a pencil. terrorize your verse of lies, you slept on V and neglected a crisis plan, left ur mom and pops lifeless and raped your daughter with devices inside an ISIS van I crack ya gam-gam in the dentures, then spoil Avengers with a wiser plan: My Endgame is your hoe on my dick at your funeral from the Iron, Man
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04-30-2019, 09:18 PM | #5 |
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V verse reminds me of verses from Upn back in the day, not so much aiming at gun bars and shit but taking the comedy twist that clowns his opponent....the naked choke and kraken lines were dope...that Stockton, Malone shit sucked....but that closer was DOPE....
Josh s that opener was nice....that lettuce prey line was awful....that love triangle line was raw....the closer was ehhhh....Josh I think you did a lot better this week.... This is actually a draw for the most part but since I gotta pick one....I'm going with V JUST BECAUSE HIS VERSE WAS MORE MY PREFERENCE THAN JOSH S VOTE-V |
05-01-2019, 12:17 PM | #6 |
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Dope battle.
I liked both verses honestly. I bought Josh was a little more witty. I’ve always been a sucker for cleverness, flowed well too. For me, V, your set ups were a bit boring, I’d you will. I thought you were really direct and hard hitting at times though. V/ Josh |
05-01-2019, 01:16 PM | #7 |
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Lol..this battle was okay..
It was a good battle..but Josh S killed it here.. Veritas had a decent verse..but Josh came with it.. V/ Josh S |
05-05-2019, 09:10 AM | #8 |
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I think josh had it here
V fell off halfway to me.. different concepts but I rly think the bed bath & beyond line hit, a lot was out of the box but not great to me.. difficult here to pick a winner.. josh tried some personals and the jitsu stuff got repetitive but thought he had enough....i guess VOTE JOSH |
05-05-2019, 02:34 PM | #9 |
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I wont offer a truce.. known to lie in bed with da goddess of truth
then left Veritas at the bottom of a well after I fucked the daughter of Zeus dashit I'm kicking goes over bitches heads, V can't figure a round out must live under a rock.. so it's only right that I give you a round house think that's fucking hard? just wait til the bucking start I had ur bitch in so many positions my dick slipped right out the "rubber guard lemme guess.. u just gonna "roll" with the punches?? i'd let tools hit um I'm into 3-somes with bitches, u only "love triangles" when there's dudes in um Vs Veritas is pulmonary Emphysema, meaning you don’t want the smoke, Fifty Shades a Gray ya chick, with a demeaning Rear Naked Choke. Old school vet, undefeated, often cheated, still a threat, a pimp, and the Don, it ain't a thing to register your wife for my gifts like I'm Bed Bath and Beyond. One read like a more aggressive old school rb vs while the other had a headless horseman upn steez to it. I actually enjoyed both but felt Josh had stronger hits w.the lines imo. This all goes to preference at the end tho. I read this a few days ago but stopped on Veri last set up bar because of the spoiler warning behind it & at the time I didn't see endgame yet. Bar was actually gd, all things considering. Mvgt- josh |
05-05-2019, 11:38 PM | #10 |
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I wont offer a truce.. known to lie in bed with da goddess of truth
then left Veritas at the bottom of a well after I fucked the daughter of Zeus word lettuce prey; V's just food on a plate, why you carrots not valid ?? but if you red rounds of this fagot then you oughta know Veri toss salad ehhh dashit I'm kicking goes over bitches heads, V can't figure a round out must live under a rock.. so it's only right that I give you a round house not bad here Jiu Jitsu amounts to foolishness, u can't get out, it's uselessness I'll hold u to the same treatment Jesus got, what's that?! a "mounted crucifix"! lol what that bars are poppin, huh? think that's fucking hard? just wait til the bucking start I had ur bitch in so many positions my dick slipped right out the "rubber guard" lmao here lemme guess.. u just gonna "roll" with the punches?? i'd let tools hit um I'm into 3-somes with bitches, u only "love triangles" when there's dudes in um personal here? i'm a freakin' ape, tail gated ya mom's ford compact sport.. like, that's a "hip Escape"! watch how I "go.. go plot a" murder scene, all i need is my shin bone to stick in place ehh by now ur probably "grappling" with da fact i'm a natural hard spar spinning elbow, then hand you a cold shoulder.. that's an actual "arm bar"!! cool closer Veritas is pulmonary Emphysema, meaning you don’t want the smoke, Fifty Shades a Gray ya chick, with a demeaning Rear Naked Choke. whoa, black rob A disciple of the six masters of Ryōzanpaku, so I’m invincible in battle, That’s why you couldn’t affect this beef if you were Monsanto Cattle eghh Old school vet, undefeated, often cheated, still a threat, a pimp, and the Don, it ain't a thing to register your wife for my gifts like I'm Bed Bath and Beyond. cool Smashing hard, I swim in the sea of her G spot, it’s immense what I’m packing Know the hoe screaming out: “Oh Zeus! release the Kraken!” ok, wtf yall both have Zeus bars? am I missing something Give her to the team, I’m the John Stockton of passing her for the fare time, got that hoe relapsed on tricking, falling back like Karl Malone’s hairline. not the greatest but i laughed You can’t beat me, even let you choose my utensil, it won't matter, I’ll take your neck like I’m John Wick with a pencil. havent seen john wick terrorize your verse of lies, you slept on V and neglected a crisis plan, left ur mom and pops lifeless and raped your daughter with devices inside an ISIS van jesus what is going on here I crack ya gam-gam in the dentures, then spoil Avengers with a wiser plan: My Endgame is your hoe on my dick at your funeral from the Iron, Man what a dick lololol I got Josh here
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