08-01-2023, 03:43 AM | #1 |
Badgerdick
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FREEWRITE - 01/08/23
The wordsmith in the house
hit the first lick then I bounce you’ll get served quick if you doubt me with upturned fists to the mouth Ive burnt bridges to ground fast then curved rivers around that to fortify my position til they worship where I’m found at I was mortified by religion til they bought up my divine vision sought my guidance and wisdom as I hawked the rights to the kingdom now all is mine that’s within it immortalised in an instant halls aligned with pure riches adorned with diamonds and trinkets and more beside it that glistens that caught the eye every visit I’m Mordecai with the writtens a poltergeist when I flip it or Walter White with equipment it’s Columbine when I kill shit so cross the line like a bigot i’ll dot your eyes in a minute contract signed where the sigs inked the bottom line is youre finished |
08-01-2023, 07:59 PM | #2 |
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Nice rhymes. The first few lines felt more energetic but I really liked the Mordecai/poltergeist references
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