02-06-2014, 09:16 AM | #1 |
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Cymbicort vs. Concrete - CONCRETE WINS
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02-07-2014, 03:09 AM | #2 |
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Confirmed.
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02-07-2014, 06:42 AM | #3 |
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Con will rip this set, don't care if you're a friggin' vet
like thorough pimp-inspects I keep every bitch in check with all disrespect, you burning me is obviously mental cos CC couldn't roast anyone unless it's comedy central it's elemental; my bars are fresher, you hardly measure you messed up on so many levels like failed architecture and I detected; homoerotic undertones in your art form despite cutting edge blowjobs - you lack a sharp tongue take it to heart bum, fuck your wimpy dork behavior I just devoured you, like puffing on a symbicort inhaler |
02-08-2014, 03:45 AM | #4 |
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How you gon say that you wack,but that it isnt your fault?
If ur not tryin to suck, that explains y ur even wack on lyrical assault U n ya verses are out of order, u cant win by ridin dick in this place That explains why hes named concrete, after cum drys on his face First he was writin poems, so why he actin hard bro Thinks he runs shit, but cant even if con trolls Ur the typical fag ppl hate, cuz u lose n put up a fuss If sum1 leaves feedback sayin construct,they want u hit by a bus u the type to get sick takin black chicks to dates for kisses Everytime congo he fuckin gets burnt by african bitches |
02-08-2014, 09:50 AM | #5 |
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Geez
This was like.... played vs forced. First guy came played...tho i did like that architecture line the way it was worded....def been done....cymbs wording was forced.....the nameplays werent phonetic for the most part and if they were the punchline didnt work both ways so it stopped the punch from connecting having to take time to make sense of the line. V concrete |
02-08-2014, 01:38 PM | #6 |
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When semen drys on his face* lol
Ill vote in a few. Type busy at work atm. |
02-08-2014, 03:33 PM | #8 |
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Pimp inspection
Architecture sharp edge Were all played. Ur wording is clean tho which is helpful. |
02-10-2014, 04:54 AM | #9 |
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Examples?
Here's my voting links btw http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=51605 http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=45310 |
02-10-2014, 02:50 PM | #10 |
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02-10-2014, 03:45 PM | #11 |
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Con will rip this set, don't care if you're a friggin' vet
like thorough pimp-inspects I keep every bitch in check Statement'ish with all disrespect, you burning me is obviously mental cos CC couldn't roast anyone unless it's comedy central Played it's elemental; my bars are fresher, you hardly measure you messed up on so many levels like failed architecture Played, flipped ok'ish. and I detected; homoerotic undertones in your art form despite cutting edge blowjobs - you lack a sharp tongue Form/Tongue don't even rhyme in my language. Played tho. take it to heart bum, fuck your wimpy dork behavior I just devoured you, like puffing on a symbicort inhaler Weak name flip attempted. vs How you gon say that you wack,but that it isnt your fault? If ur not tryin to suck, that explains y ur even wack on lyrical assault No. U n ya verses are out of order, u cant win by ridin dick in this place That explains why hes named concrete, after cum drys on his face Played concept. Flipped horribly, IMO. First he was writin poems, so why he actin hard bro Thinks he runs shit, but cant even if con trolls Weak wp attempt. Ur the typical fag ppl hate, cuz u lose n put up a fuss If sum1 leaves feedback sayin construct,they want u hit by a bus Forced - Didn't work either way. Con Struck/Construct? No. u the type to get sick takin black chicks to dates for kisses Everytime congo he fuckin gets burnt by african bitches Every time Congo <- Con go where? Makes no sense. You were just tossing WP attempts and not executing on them properly. v/Concrete - Better attempts, I guess? Executed his played concepts a lot better. A lot of this other dudes stuff made no sense to me, IMO. |
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Thought pimp check was OK. Architect was dope. Cc average. Need to come a little more outta the box but the wordings there. Cc opener was okay. The others seemed like ya were trying too hard. Peep how others word their shit. Ull get it. Vote concrete
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02-13-2014, 02:19 PM | #13 |
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Con will rip this set, don't care if you're a friggin' vet
like thorough pimp-inspects I keep every bitch in check it's elemental; my bars are fresher, you hardly measure you messed up on so many levels like failed architecture vs u the type to get sick takin black chicks to dates for kisses Everytime congo he fuckin gets burnt by african bitches Vote- Concrete .. |
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V/Concrete, the dude came off as more presentable and just dug his shit a little bit more. good battle guys |
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02-16-2014, 10:16 PM | #15 |
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to be honest this battle could've been better, concrete Cymbicort had more forced bars
Vote-Cymbicort |
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