Fucka rhymescheme

YDK · 08-04-2017, 08:13 PM

Crush a perc down
Snort a line up
I figure you figured that I was doin fine huh?
That I been working steady just trying ta
Get my money high enough to escape the prison that binds us.
No luck tho
I been spending penny's to put petrol in the truck bro.
You think habits that are this ingrained
Are gonna leave me now like I flipped my brain
To it's off position?
I'll cough this instant
An I'll bet you my mom's prescription
That I'll hack up 4 percs and 2 vikes on the wall in the kitchen!
I got lawless visions mixed with
Awful convictions
Fucked up beyond recognition fallin in the halls cuz I'm judging the wrong dimensions
In each step
I'm 1 deep breath away from hittin this peak
This death.
So peep this mess
I'm too deep to be depressed
So I keep one P to sleep and regress
I mean,
if I treat these keys like seeds at these depths
I'll never have weed to beat the weak breaths.
So fuck your opinion
I don't mean to be step
Daddy to a kid that needs me to be less.
I'm tryna be grateful but the peeps are gettin left
Behind for the moment while I prove that D's the best.

Geno · 08-04-2017, 09:28 PM

Dope

YDK · 08-25-2017, 09:45 PM

@sraL

Chyeahhh!!! · 08-25-2017, 11:46 PM

caught that fuckin flow with grace dog, which I can appreciate. Shit's nice. Introspective and mos def a good read.

sral · 08-26-2017, 09:59 AM

lmao not sure why i was tagged but this was dope

i used to write with this 'free-flowing' format myself many moons ago

few spots where the flow could have been tightened up many and the line lengths shortened, but kudos

best ive read from you in a minute

2tripple0 · 09-10-2017, 04:26 AM

This was alright i guess.... wasnt bothered with the subjec5t matter though in all honesty

08-04-2017, 08:13 PM	#1
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,564 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181109	Fucka rhymescheme Crush a perc down Snort a line up I figure you figured that I was doin fine huh? That I been working steady just trying ta Get my money high enough to escape the prison that binds us. No luck tho I been spending penny's to put petrol in the truck bro. You think habits that are this ingrained Are gonna leave me now like I flipped my brain To it's off position? I'll cough this instant An I'll bet you my mom's prescription That I'll hack up 4 percs and 2 vikes on the wall in the kitchen! I got lawless visions mixed with Awful convictions Fucked up beyond recognition fallin in the halls cuz I'm judging the wrong dimensions In each step I'm 1 deep breath away from hittin this peak This death. So peep this mess I'm too deep to be depressed So I keep one P to sleep and regress I mean, if I treat these keys like seeds at these depths I'll never have weed to beat the weak breaths. So fuck your opinion I don't mean to be step Daddy to a kid that needs me to be less. I'm tryna be grateful but the peeps are gettin left Behind for the moment while I prove that D's the best. __________________ Last edited by YDK; 08-05-2017 at 12:46 PM.

08-04-2017, 09:28 PM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,324 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	Dope __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

08-25-2017, 09:45 PM	#3
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,564 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181109	@sraL __________________

08-25-2017, 11:46 PM	#4
Chyeahhh!!! Saul Paul Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: remote location with a remote weapon station Posts: 6,397 Battle Record: 16-26 Rep Power: 1663348	caught that fuckin flow with grace dog, which I can appreciate. Shit's nice. Introspective and mos def a good read. __________________ KNOW YOUR MAKER BEFORE YOU'RE MADE TO I know the ledge, his sister's a jumpoff

08-26-2017, 09:59 AM	#5
sral Shrewd as evearthed Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 8,251 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899391	lmao not sure why i was tagged but this was dope i used to write with this 'free-flowing' format myself many moons ago few spots where the flow could have been tightened up many and the line lengths shortened, but kudos best ive read from you in a minute __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

09-10-2017, 04:26 AM	#6
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	This was alright i guess.... wasnt bothered with the subjec5t matter though in all honesty __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/