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Old 10-14-2016, 07:16 PM   #1
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VERSE 1
Pull outta honed cutter, drag it down ya chest - watch this hoe suffer
leave sucha plunging neck line, autopsy photos'll hit the Vogue cover
& Pitt against any of you bitches, i'll blam the nina o'course
I mean, I wont Kid Around..it'll get messier than the Brangelina divorce
Plus ya girl? I'll scoop her n' an hour for sex kid
Then watch her 'bring it to her mouth n toss it back'...*Chefs Kiss*
Ur small potatoes, truly friend & yes ur life will cruelly end
Coz face it ur a spec tater.. which i'll still slice, dice n julienne
I'll let the fif blare n' when i bus aint shit spared
sooo treat this like the Trump tape.. all over after the clip aired

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im sending your soul to the sky...shotty piercing it,
this shits Astral Projection...shells leave yu with a out of body experience
i'll get dome from yur girl if i was fucked up n all out tweakin,
she wants to blow Cyanide Pill pop before leaving her mouth leaking
after this beatin ur gonna say im not new coz i smash yah'll,
it doesn't matter who i Ampoule that alias bullshit an get hit in yur glass jaw
my ruger will destroy yur frame coz yur a coward hater,
one shot n they'll be a head smoked wit no body like Zordons on power rangers
when i use my blade on cut yur neck.. blood'll start to splatter,
get slashed criss crossed in vertical angles till shit looks like a tartan pattern
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Old 10-14-2016, 08:00 PM   #2
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Verse one here, for the opener. Gun lines gotta be witty ampoul? tatarn patterns? It's a battle bro. Too weird for me
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Old 10-17-2016, 05:55 AM   #3
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agree with nik what he said... verse 1 win..
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Old 10-17-2016, 04:21 PM   #4
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I agree... opener for verse 1 was the only decent punch in the battle..

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Old 10-17-2016, 11:44 PM   #5
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Verse 1 caught fire real quick.
Verse 2 had a few lines but the delivery was weird
the 4th or 5th line felt like a stutter step..
you almost brought it,,but it seemed weird...ya know...

V/Verse 1, I just enjoyed the amount of punches that came quick
that closer was smooth in my eyes, pretty cool shit brah...
nice battle
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Old 10-18-2016, 09:23 AM   #6
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Trump n chefskiss vs opener


Wasn't digging the word in on most bars but it was close.

Power rangers reference had to b on point for it to get cool points, unfortunately it wasn't slick enough imo.


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Old 10-18-2016, 10:12 AM   #7
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I liked the first verse here more tbh. Second verse jus didnt have any impact behind the punch itself, altho u did have sum creative ideas


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v/verse 1 - great flow, creative bars enjoyable verse.
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