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10-14-2016, 07:16 PM | #1 |
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Battle Arena Tournament - Utmost vs Cyrax - OPEN FOR VOTES
VERSE 1
Pull outta honed cutter, drag it down ya chest - watch this hoe suffer leave sucha plunging neck line, autopsy photos'll hit the Vogue cover & Pitt against any of you bitches, i'll blam the nina o'course I mean, I wont Kid Around..it'll get messier than the Brangelina divorce Plus ya girl? I'll scoop her n' an hour for sex kid Then watch her 'bring it to her mouth n toss it back'...*Chefs Kiss* Ur small potatoes, truly friend & yes ur life will cruelly end Coz face it ur a spec tater.. which i'll still slice, dice n julienne I'll let the fif blare n' when i bus aint shit spared sooo treat this like the Trump tape.. all over after the clip aired VERSE 2 im sending your soul to the sky...shotty piercing it, this shits Astral Projection...shells leave yu with a out of body experience i'll get dome from yur girl if i was fucked up n all out tweakin, she wants to blow Cyanide Pill pop before leaving her mouth leaking after this beatin ur gonna say im not new coz i smash yah'll, it doesn't matter who i Ampoule that alias bullshit an get hit in yur glass jaw my ruger will destroy yur frame coz yur a coward hater, one shot n they'll be a head smoked wit no body like Zordons on power rangers when i use my blade on cut yur neck.. blood'll start to splatter, get slashed criss crossed in vertical angles till shit looks like a tartan pattern |
10-14-2016, 08:00 PM | #2 |
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Verse one here, for the opener. Gun lines gotta be witty ampoul? tatarn patterns? It's a battle bro. Too weird for me
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10-17-2016, 05:55 AM | #3 |
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agree with nik what he said... verse 1 win..
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10-17-2016, 04:21 PM | #4 |
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I agree... opener for verse 1 was the only decent punch in the battle..
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10-17-2016, 11:44 PM | #5 |
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Verse 1 caught fire real quick.
Verse 2 had a few lines but the delivery was weird the 4th or 5th line felt like a stutter step.. you almost brought it,,but it seemed weird...ya know... V/Verse 1, I just enjoyed the amount of punches that came quick that closer was smooth in my eyes, pretty cool shit brah... nice battle
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10-18-2016, 09:23 AM | #6 |
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Trump n chefskiss vs opener
Wasn't digging the word in on most bars but it was close. Power rangers reference had to b on point for it to get cool points, unfortunately it wasn't slick enough imo. V first verse |
10-18-2016, 10:12 AM | #7 |
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I liked the first verse here more tbh. Second verse jus didnt have any impact behind the punch itself, altho u did have sum creative ideas
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12-06-2016, 07:01 PM | #8 |
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v/verse 1 - great flow, creative bars enjoyable verse.
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