12-26-2016, 09:45 PM | #1 |
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Destroyer (3-2) vs Mr. J (3-2) - Destroyer WINS
NBL Season 10 Week 6 Due FRIDAY 12/30/16 Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines - NO BITING - NO FEEDING - NO SWAYING - AGREE ON LINE LIMIT - IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE Don't edit after your opponent has posted. 2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in. Don't be an idiot. Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle. May God have mercy on your souls! |
12-27-2016, 08:39 PM | #2 |
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20 line topical?
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12-28-2016, 02:05 PM | #3 |
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Psych!
des a killer in the worst way & I'ma fucking hurt J throw so many shots @u, make u think it's your 21st birthday leave u for dead, sneak in ur hospital room & choke u til ur bloody, g & Leia down in a grave after giving the family false hopes for recovery des a beast w/a blade. trust you'd be better to back down... only smile Mr. J gonna have post-battle will be labeled "Glasgow" 40% chance of beating me? Obv schad posted that in jest... dude Harley a problem & I don't mean his namesake's insane love interest cats seen my smoking resume, so go head & try to step des is known for stepping on Js until they got no more fire left |
12-30-2016, 02:07 AM | #4 |
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Des the type of nerd to deny his worth..
only response when dropping is due to his life alert fuck killing him, sweep his leg, obliterate the feet reimburse him personally with an escalator seat. on the net you still getting snapped, freethrow.. use that pointer & Ima end you Gran Torino... my pen got a problem doing this, its requirement Destroyer is where discussion board its their environment ya head could get capped in, go with that sunken ship my 1 2 got you forgotten & your theories running quick...bitch.
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12-30-2016, 03:27 PM | #5 |
Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!!
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Shit's like a Fight Night battle..
Anyway tho VOTE DESTROYER even tho there's many-a-problem w/ both of these verses: Des 'back down', 'smile' doesn't rhyme w/ 'Glasgow'. The pronounciation's GO, not COW. Everything else was cool, not crazy, but very solid. As for you, Mr. J..smh. First u started w/ a concept that I used when I first started text battling, then u proceed to write a succession of vague, nonsensical lines that I legit can't qualify as punches. YOU HAD A DEFEAT LINE..WTF!? Man that verse damn near gave Me an aneurism.
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12-30-2016, 04:03 PM | #6 |
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Lol. I've pronounced that shit wrong forever
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12-30-2016, 05:11 PM | #7 |
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a lot of the shit that schad say dont rhyme easily rhymes when said aloud by the writer
not sayin it's the case here js in general but ya, destroyer got this I thought leia down was dope, swag same with harley a prob vs kinda saw the potential in a couple of j's concepts but ftmp it looks like he didnt have the time n threw 10 together v/des |
12-30-2016, 09:01 PM | #8 |
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DES verse bodied honestly, every bar was hard hitting. J, you could have had a chance at a fire bar with the requirement environment, but the bar needed more work and re-wording. The short bar format really hurts in battling cause every bar of yours is the equivalent to a line of his, so he can pack it in more....YES HOMO. Des first line was mad played though...like, pretty bad. He then dropped Princess Leia, Name play JEST, Name play Jordans and straight clowning with that line too. Fuckin LOL at schad though.
v. Des
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12-31-2016, 12:55 PM | #9 |
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Mister J that life alert line wasn't bad at all imo. The gran torino wasn't too shabby as well, ive just seen it before. Read some matces to get a feel on cleverness & whatnot for your bars. Defeat lines, cum so hard lines, stuff like that stand clear from.
Mvgt @Destroyer Harley Quinn line just about won this. Rest verse wasn't your best, but got the job done. |
01-01-2017, 09:41 PM | #10 |
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01-02-2017, 07:51 PM | #12 |
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Des - 21 shots way basic, leia down is current event but not used well, Glasgow was cool had to look it up, Harley was simple but a personal so it's decent, stepping on Js was ok I woulda preferred a Jordan reference here.
Mr. J - life alert lol, escalator seat was cute, Gran Torino needed better set up, destroyer environment didn't like, last bar nahhh. I actually voted on this battle to vote against Des not bc I don't like him but bc I didn't like his verse and thought Mr J would win. I enjoyed Mr. J's first two bars more than Dez entire verse but Dez had the better verse. V/ Dez
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