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Old 09-16-2016, 01:46 PM   #1
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hope to see yall keep w tradition and go 30 but if not I set the min to 16. good luck pussies.
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@Orc and @Sharp I cant log on to ncs because that faggot changed my passwords...

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I wanted to do something new and see how I could do without the name recognition.
Lol...how'd that work out?

#1 seed as Karaoke, #13 as Blam...LOL! That's so blatant it's a shame
Fuck what Knuck did...The NBL already PROVED you're fucked once you take away your name
And LOL @ you moving packs...C'mon, gawd, you're more than lame
Only time we'll see King throwing powder is Lebron before the game
This dude buys his clothes on clearance racks...trying to stretch pay
Last time I saw a mall cop that funny...Kevin James was riding a Segway
Loves men, especially African...He swallows massive dick
This faggot's been hitting his knees for black dudes everywhere...Colin Kaepernick
Been claiming I'm someone else for YEARS...you shouldn't be hatin', brethren
C'mon, Blam! Even if I WAS an alias...I can guarantee I wouldn't go 8-7
I'll put you in the fucking ground. So, check this, queer..
King? Nah, more like a Prince...another black faggot who's gonna be dead this year
You champed when the league was weakest...Don't even bother dropping a verse
Your whole career you've done nothing but go through Scrubs...and I'm not talkin' your job as a nurse
How can he even be CLOSE to the HOF? The kids whole steez is nonsense
But I'm not surprised your in the discussion...it's the only place you get a decent concept
I bet your family used to work for mine...prolly husking corn and making breakfast
My bad, I'll stop talking about Bloodline...since your black ass can't afford to pay for Netflix
Gets no pussy, so it's internet porn. Jerkin' with speed 'til he got a cramp
This loser saw Bags posted a picture of "Gina"...and IMMEDIATELY dropped his pants
You ducked me in the playoffs, then Knuck made you flee...kid I was dead!
This dude has come out a pussy more than worms in the Reed internet thread
You could be the first black dude in the HOF!...you'd think your nigs would light it up
It's not that they're not good...most just don't text because this shit is white as fuck
If he smashes a bitch it's because she's roofied...or her necks at the edge of a knife
Dawg, you couldn't hit the fair way if you took golf lessons for the rest of your life
How you gonna talk $ w/ Seth? You prolly taking naps on the street
I'm not surprised he won the Survivor Tourney...dude prolly digs through trash just to eat
Don't worry that he's a male nurse...This thug reps the hood!
This gangster pulls the strap with the pump!!!....then tells the patient their blood pressure's good
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Yo, just take me out. I'm in the semis via 3 no shows. No thanks.
You've been under alias for 2 years, I'd shut my mouth if I were in your place
Got the nerve to complain about no shows yet youre the one afraid to show face
I'm trying to kill, if the punches to your side don't crack ribs
Then Im outside your house with the machine guns doing Desiigner's ad libs
My hood is real, can't go anywhere unless the iron is near
No disrespect to Ali but youre about to be 2nd the Cashius to die in a year
Heard u love comedies, next Big Bang u see has nothing to do with Sheldon
A couple of shots will leave you surrounded by more angels than Corey Feldman
We're getting killed by cops and opps, that's y I got protection
Act stupid if you want, the 9 will put your e go to the side like Veritas' suggestion
U can use all the personals u want, it still won't make your post tighter
I'll put so much fire to your whip, you'll get mistaken for Ghost Rider
Chicks won't stop calling me because a nigga's so damn hung
You lack personality, ur phone wouldn't blow up if it was sold by Samsung
I'm heading to the HOF, there's no way this loser's stopping me
Cop a plea but the bullets'll go thru Cash quick as if they were on a shopping spree
Any chick you're fucking is average, I'll put the gun to your cabbage
Or scope u from a distance, you'll have a crosshair on your forehead like 21 Savage
Forget the guns, we can exchange some swings
Your mom's a slut, I was in those walls longer than Will from "Stranger Things"
I'm physically imposing, beating up dudes is nothing to me
This Punk'll get choked out so fast, you'd think it was UFC 203
Your girls are plus sized, If I had a dollar for every model I've had, I would've been rich
Your McDonald's encounter with Metts wasn't the 1st time u were behind a big bitch
Youre constantly fighting over her cuz your thot isn't loyal
U keep seeing a "Fade" that doesn't have anything to do with Teyana & a bottle of oil
I'll spend the bread just to see you get left for dead
Put the 9 to ur grill, the hot shit in ur mouth rivals anything in the Ghost pepper thread
I get neck from bad chicks, you've got nothing but guys in your eyesight
All you see is Cash in dudes' mouths, his love life is a Ted Dibiase highlight

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Cash.

1. Nice personal, true
2. Coolish
3. Aiight
4. Massive dicks? Pause but lol @ the punch
5. LOL nice, should've been used after the 1st bar though. I like when you can follow like a narrative
6. Mmmm, ehh Prince wasn't gay & the misdirection was weak
7. Haha if he's really a nurse that hits
8. Cool albeit predictable
9. Ehhh nah
10. Maybe there's more to it that I don't get
11. Nah could've done more with this
12. Lol this is true but not a diss to him as much as it is to you
13. Haha
14. Lol this is nice
15. Lol dig dig



Karaoke

1. Aight aight
2. Lol, lol grrrrrrrrrrrraaaaaaooooooww
3. Lol haha. Funny you both did this type of bar except white boy dissed a legend
4. Had to look up reference, lol'ed at video but more could've been done here
5. Aight
6. Fire to whip similar concept to Hush but I liked this
7. Cool
8. Ehhh nah too simple
9. Another Like bar, not going to look up the reference
10. Another reference, come on
11. Ok
12. Ok
13. you getting lazy now fam
14. This is cool but I've already seen someone use it. No fault of yours so I'll pretend I never saw and it's cool
15. Aight



You both were very similar as far as concepts & execution. Karaoke started off fire then just fizzles. Cashius was able to remain consistent. Karaoke got carried away with using references here. Pretty good battle. I sensed writer's fatigue in both writers though. I have to go with Cashius here.
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#1 seed as Karaoke, #13 as Blam...LOL! That's so blatant it's a shame
Fuck what Knuck did...The NBL already PROVED you're fucked once you take away your name
- I liked this.
And LOL @ you moving packs...C'mon, gawd, you're more than lame
Only time we'll see King throwing powder is Lebron before the game
- ehh, alright.
This dude buys his clothes on clearance racks...trying to stretch pay
Last time I saw a mall cop that funny...Kevin James was riding a Segway
- I'm rockin wit it.
Loves men, especially African...He swallows massive dick
This faggot's been hitting his knees for black dudes everywhere...Colin Kaepernick
- pause, not really feelin
Been claiming I'm someone else for YEARS...you shouldn't be hatin', brethren
C'mon, Blam! Even if I WAS an alias...I can guarantee I wouldn't go 8-7
- lol ok
I'll put you in the fucking ground. So, check this, queer..
King? Nah, more like a Prince...another black faggot who's gonna be dead this year
- alright koo
You champed when the league was weakest...Don't even bother dropping a verse
Your whole career you've done nothing but go through Scrubs...and I'm not talkin' your job as a nurse
- i see u
How can he even be CLOSE to the HOF? The kids whole steez is nonsense
But I'm not surprised your in the discussion...it's the only place you get a decent concept
- cool misdirection
I bet your family used to work for mine...prolly husking corn and making breakfast
My bad, I'll stop talking about Bloodline...since your black ass can't afford to pay for Netflix
- ehh, not feelin
Gets no pussy, so it's internet porn. Jerkin' with speed 'til he got a cramp
This loser saw Bags posted a picture of "Gina"...and IMMEDIATELY dropped his pants
- didnt hit for me neither
You ducked me in the playoffs, then Knuck made you flee...kid I was dead!
This dude has come out a pussy more than worms in the Reed internet thread
- aighttt
You could be the first black dude in the HOF!...you'd think your nigs would light it up
It's not that they're not good...most just don't text because this shit is white as fuck
- lol decent
If he smashes a bitch it's because she's roofied...or her necks at the edge of a knife
Dawg, you couldn't hit the fair way if you took golf lessons for the rest of your life
- i liked this
How you gonna talk $ w/ Seth? You prolly taking naps on the street
I'm not surprised he won the Survivor Tourney...dude prolly digs through trash just to eat
- ok, u cuttin up
Don't worry that he's a male nurse...This thug reps the hood!
This gangster pulls the strap with the pump!!!....then tells the patient their blood pressure's good
- cool closer, i dug it

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You've been under alias for 2 years, I'd shut my mouth if I were in your place
Got the nerve to complain about no shows yet youre the one afraid to show face
- decent opener
I'm trying to kill, if the punches to your side don't crack ribs
Then Im outside your house with the machine guns doing Desiigner's ad libs
- i liked this
My hood is real, can't go anywhere unless the iron is near
No disrespect to Ali but youre about to be 2nd the Cashius to die in a year
- decent
Heard u love comedies, next Big Bang u see has nothing to do with Sheldon
A couple of shots will leave you surrounded by more angels than Corey Feldman
- ehh, didnt really like
We're getting killed by cops and opps, that's y I got protection
Act stupid if you want, the 9 will put your e go to the side like Veritas' suggestion
- this was good
U can use all the personals u want, it still won't make your post tighter
I'll put so much fire to your whip, you'll get mistaken for Ghost Rider
- aight
Chicks won't stop calling me because a nigga's so damn hung
You lack personality, ur phone wouldn't blow up if it was sold by Samsung
- lol this was good
I'm heading to the HOF, there's no way this loser's stopping me
Cop a plea but the bullets'll go thru Cash quick as if they were on a shopping spree
- ehh alright
Any chick you're fucking is average, I'll put the gun to your cabbage
Or scope u from a distance, you'll have a crosshair on your forehead like 21 Savage
- this was dope
Forget the guns, we can exchange some swings
Your mom's a slut, I was in those walls longer than Will from "Stranger Things"
- ok this was a hit
I'm physically imposing, beating up dudes is nothing to me
This Punk'll get choked out so fast, you'd think it was UFC 203
- u cuttin up
Your girls are plus sized, If I had a dollar for every model I've had, I would've been rich
Your McDonald's encounter with Metts wasn't the 1st time u were behind a big bitch
- wasnt feeling
Youre constantly fighting over her cuz your thot isn't loyal
U keep seeing a "Fade" that doesn't have anything to do with Teyana & a bottle of oil
- this eitherr
I'll spend the bread just to see you get left for dead
Put the 9 to ur grill, the hot shit in ur mouth rivals anything in the Ghost pepper thread
- nah
I get neck from bad chicks, you've got nothing but guys in your eyesight
All you see is Cash in dudes' mouths, his love life is a Ted Dibiase highlight
- aight closer


Dope match here, cant stunt both did there thing. Read this shit over a couple times, shit was pretty close. But wen it came down to it I think Cash got the edge here. Kar had some bangers but his misses were bigger misses than Cashs. Cash was jus a bit more consistent here n it got him the dub. Good shit yall.

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1 seed as Karaoke, #13 as Blam...LOL! That's so blatant it's a shame
Fuck what Knuck did...The NBL already PROVED you're fucked once you take away your name

good opening personal, tied in two things nicely

And LOL @ you moving packs...C'mon, gawd, you're more than lame
Only time we'll see King throwing powder is Lebron before the game

Ok. Decent name flip/powder play

This dude buys his clothes on clearance racks...trying to stretch pay
Last time I saw a mall cop that funny...Kevin James was riding a Segway

Coo

Loves men, especially African...He swallows massive dick
This faggot's been hitting his knees for black dudes everywhere...Colin Kaepernick

why, not terrible, not a hit, imo

Been claiming I'm someone else for YEARS...you shouldn't be hatin', brethren
C'mon, Blam! Even if I WAS an alias...I can guarantee I wouldn't go 8-7

another personal hit, solid

I'll put you in the fucking ground. So, check this, queer..
King? Nah, more like a Prince...another black faggot who's gonna be dead this year

lol, both of you used a famous death year concept...this was ok though

You champed when the league was weakest...Don't even bother dropping a verse
Your whole career you've done nothing but go through Scrubs...and I'm not talkin' your job as a nurse

Eh. scrub lines aren't fresh but the execution helped it.

How can he even be CLOSE to the HOF? The kids whole steez is nonsense
But I'm not surprised your in the discussion...it's the only place you get a decent concept

seen this 1 before, it's decent but not a new angle....karaoke used alot of disc topics and it's been used on em a few times already.

I bet your family used to work for mine...prolly husking corn and making breakfast
My bad, I'll stop talking about Bloodline...since your black ass can't afford to pay for Netflix

Ok. blatant racist diss lol

Gets no pussy, so it's internet porn. Jerkin' with speed 'til he got a cramp
This loser saw Bags posted a picture of "Gina"...and IMMEDIATELY dropped his pants

didn't feel.

You ducked me in the playoffs, then Knuck made you flee...kid I was dead!
This dude has come out a pussy more than worms in the Reed internet thread

Cool. but redundant disc topic diss.

You could be the first black dude in the HOF!...you'd think your nigs would light it up
It's not that they're not good...most just don't text because this shit is white as fuck

straight...not the wit and creativity I usually see from you, tho

If he smashes a bitch it's because she's roofied...or her necks at the edge of a knife
Dawg, you couldn't hit the fair way if you took golf lessons for the rest of your life

seen fairway lines....execution helped it tho.

How you gonna talk $ w/ Seth? You prolly taking naps on the street
I'm not surprised he won the Survivor Tourney...dude prolly digs through trash just to eat

Cool.

Don't worry that he's a male nurse...This thug reps the hood!
This gangster pulls the strap with the pump!!!....then tells the patient their blood pressure's good

If its true, alright personal.

Karaoke

You've been under alias for 2 years, I'd shut my mouth if I were in your place
Got the nerve to complain about no shows yet youre the one afraid to show face

Ok personal....not good as cash opener

I'm trying to kill, if the punches to your side don't crack ribs
Then Im outside your house with the machine guns doing Desiigner's ad libs

i liked this

My hood is real, can't go anywhere unless the iron is near
No disrespect to Ali but youre about to be 2nd the Cashius to die in a year

solid, but could be better w/ wording

Heard u love comedies, next Big Bang u see has nothing to do with Sheldon
A couple of shots will leave you surrounded by more angels than Corey Feldman

it's ok...easy simile tho

We're getting killed by cops and opps, that's y I got protection
Act stupid if you want, the 9 will put your e go to the side like Veritas' suggestion

solid disc reference, harder hit..

U can use all the personals u want, it still won't make your post tighter
I'll put so much fire to your whip, you'll get mistaken for Ghost Rider

seen these before, shouldve scrapped imo..

Chicks won't stop calling me because a nigga's so damn hung
You lack personality, ur phone wouldn't blow up if it was sold by Samsung

Cool.

I'm heading to the HOF, there's no way this loser's stopping me
Cop a plea but the bullets'll go thru Cash quick as if they were on a shopping spree

mediocre cash flip, wording wasn't great, easy nameplay..

Any chick you're fucking is average, I'll put the gun to your cabbage
Or scope u from a distance, you'll have a crosshair on your forehead like 21 Savage

Another good reference

Forget the guns, we can exchange some swings
Your mom's a slut, I was in those walls longer than Will from "Stranger Things"

doope to me, had a line like it..

I'm physically imposing, beating up dudes is nothing to me
This Punk'll get choked out so fast, you'd think it was UFC 203

another reference lol, alright.

Your girls are plus sized, If I had a dollar for every model I've had, I would've been rich
Your McDonald's encounter with Metts wasn't the 1st time u were behind a big bitch

eh, old and not relevant to me, lazy personal

Youre constantly fighting over her cuz your thot isn't loyal
U keep seeing a "Fade" that doesn't have anything to do with Teyana & a bottle of oil

didn't feel it.

I'll spend the bread just to see you get left for dead
Put the 9 to ur grill, the hot shit in ur mouth rivals anything in the Ghost pepper thread

Nah. too basic imo

I get neck from bad chicks, you've got nothing but guys in your eyesight
All you see is Cash in dudes' mouths, his love life is a Ted Dibiase highlight

this was alright, should be harder imo..

Okay, so there were dope lines by both and some passable shit. good finals tho but I woulda cut to 20 lines.

I have to say I was rooting for karaoke but towards the end he had too many misses/ehh lines while cash had a dip in the middle then picked up at the end. i liked cashius personals and wording more than I liked kares culture references. but his last 4 I ain't fuck with, sooo

I have cashius for the W.
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#1 seed as Karaoke, #13 as Blam...LOL! That's so blatant it's a shame
Fuck what Knuck did...The NBL already PROVED you're fucked once you take away your name
Harsh, but too straight forward
And LOL @ you moving packs...C'mon, gawd, you're more than lame
Only time we'll see King throwing powder is Lebron before the game
Played concept
This dude buys his clothes on clearance racks...trying to stretch pay
Last time I saw a mall cop that funny...Kevin James was riding a Segway
Decent, nothing crazy tho
Loves men, especially African...He swallows massive dick
This faggot's been hitting his knees for black dudes everywhere...Colin Kaepernick
Good, wording could be smoother
Been claiming I'm someone else for YEARS...you shouldn't be hatin', brethren
C'mon, Blam! Even if I WAS an alias...I can guarantee I wouldn't go 8-7
Simple but harsh
I'll put you in the fucking ground. So, check this, queer..
King? Nah, more like a Prince...another black faggot who's gonna be dead this year
Lol..nice
You champed when the league was weakest...Don't even bother dropping a verse
Your whole career you've done nothing but go through Scrubs...and I'm not talkin' your job as a nurse
Pretty good
How can he even be CLOSE to the HOF? The kids whole steez is nonsense
But I'm not surprised your in the discussion...it's the only place you get a decent concept
Lmao..dope
I bet your family used to work for mine...prolly husking corn and making breakfast
My bad, I'll stop talking about Bloodline...since your black ass can't afford to pay for Netflix
This is aight
Gets no pussy, so it's internet porn. Jerkin' with speed 'til he got a cramp
This loser saw Bags posted a picture of "Gina"...and IMMEDIATELY dropped his pants
Decent, some good humor
You ducked me in the playoffs, then Knuck made you flee...kid I was dead!
This dude has come out a pussy more than worms in the Reed internet thread
Decent
You could be the first black dude in the HOF!...you'd think your nigs would light it up
It's not that they're not good...most just don't text because this shit is white as fuck
LMAO..
If he smashes a bitch it's because she's roofied...or her necks at the edge of a knife
Dawg, you couldn't hit the fair way if you took golf lessons for the rest of your life
Decent
How you gonna talk $ w/ Seth? You prolly taking naps on the street
I'm not surprised he won the Survivor Tourney...dude prolly digs through trash just to eat
Ok, could've been harder
Don't worry that he's a male nurse...This thug reps the hood!
This gangster pulls the strap with the pump!!!....then tells the patient their blood pressure's good
Pretty good
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Originally Posted by King Karaoke View Post
You've been under alias for 2 years, I'd shut my mouth if I were in your place
Got the nerve to complain about no shows yet youre the one afraid to show face
Weak flip
I'm trying to kill, if the punches to your side don't crack ribs
Then Im outside your house with the machine guns doing Desiigner's ad libs
Lol..this was slick
My hood is real, can't go anywhere unless the iron is near
No disrespect to Ali but youre about to be 2nd the Cashius to die in a year
Super obvious flip
Heard u love comedies, next Big Bang u see has nothing to do with Sheldon
A couple of shots will leave you surrounded by more angels than Corey Feldman
Didn't like this one
We're getting killed by cops and opps, that's y I got protection
Act stupid if you want, the 9 will put your e go to the side like Veritas' suggestion
Nice
U can use all the personals u want, it still won't make your post tighter
I'll put so much fire to your whip, you'll get mistaken for Ghost Rider
Decent
Chicks won't stop calling me because a nigga's so damn hung
You lack personality, ur phone wouldn't blow up if it was sold by Samsung
Decent
I'm heading to the HOF, there's no way this loser's stopping me
Cop a plea but the bullets'll go thru Cash quick as if they were on a shopping spree
Weak punch
Any chick you're fucking is average, I'll put the gun to your cabbage
Or scope u from a distance, you'll have a crosshair on your forehead like 21 Savage
Decent, I used a similiar concept a while back
Forget the guns, we can exchange some swings
Your mom's a slut, I was in those walls longer than Will from "Stranger Things"
Lol..decent
I'm physically imposing, beating up dudes is nothing to me
This Punk'll get choked out so fast, you'd think it was UFC 203
Decent, nothing crazy tho
Your girls are plus sized, If I had a dollar for every model I've had, I would've been rich
Your McDonald's encounter with Metts wasn't the 1st time u were behind a big bitch
Dope, if it's true
Youre constantly fighting over her cuz your thot isn't loyal
U keep seeing a "Fade" that doesn't have anything to do with Teyana & a bottle of oil
Good
I'll spend the bread just to see you get left for dead
Put the 9 to ur grill, the hot shit in ur mouth rivals anything in the Ghost pepper thread
Just OK
I get neck from bad chicks, you've got nothing but guys in your eyesight
All you see is Cash in dudes' mouths, his love life is a Ted Dibiase highlight
Soft closer
Overall I feel like KK's writing was really lazy from start to finish, especially since Cash was a too straight forward in his approach, KK could've capitalized on that & bodied. But whatever decent finals, give it to CASHIUS.
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I'm trying to kill, if the punches to your side don't crack ribs
Then Im outside your house with the machine guns doing Desiigner's ad libs

Chicks won't stop calling me because a nigga's so damn hung
You lack personality, ur phone wouldn't blow up if it was sold by Samsung

Any chick you're fucking is average, I'll put the gun to your cabbage
Or scope u from a distance, you'll have a crosshair on your forehead like 21 Savage

I'm physically imposing, beating up dudes is nothing to me
This Punk'll get choked out so fast, you'd think it was UFC 203

Youre constantly fighting over her cuz your thot isn't loyal
U keep seeing a "Fade" that doesn't have anything to do with Teyana & a bottle of oil
I'll spend the bread just to see you get left for dead
Put the 9 to ur grill, the hot shit in ur mouth rivals anything in the Ghost pepper thread



Cashius

Loves men, especially African...He swallows massive dick
This faggot's been hitting his knees for black dudes everywhere...Colin Kaepernick

How can he even be CLOSE to the HOF? The kids whole steez is nonsense
But I'm not surprised your in the discussion...it's the only place you get a decent concept

You could be the first black dude in the HOF!...you'd think your nigs would light it up
It's not that they're not good...most just don't text because this shit is white as fuck

How you gonna talk $ w/ Seth? You prolly taking naps on the street
I'm not surprised he won the Survivor Tourney...dude prolly digs through trash just to eat
Don't worry that he's a male nurse...This thug reps the hood!
This gangster pulls the strap with the pump!!!....then tells the patient their blood pressure's good




This was a cool battle... both had dry spots.. Cassius was off and on then caught fire at the end and Karaoke was landing but wasn't consistent with it... Shit is really close but I got karaoke with one more landed punch. Y'all misses were so lame haha I don't see how they were in the same verses as the bars that landed but y'all went a lot of bars so I'm sure some was just thrown in there and I bet I missed a couple references also. Anyway ima v/Karaoke with a close edge
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Lol...how'd that work out?

#1 seed as Karaoke, #13 as Blam...LOL! That's so blatant it's a shame
Fuck what Knuck did...The NBL already PROVED you're fucked once you take away your name
////Nice personal here...
And LOL @ you moving packs...C'mon, gawd, you're more than lame
Only time we'll see King throwing powder is Lebron before the game
////Seen this concept before, ok though////
This dude buys his clothes on clearance racks...trying to stretch pay
Last time I saw a mall cop that funny...Kevin James was riding a Segway
///Wording was funny, decent concept///
Loves men, especially African...He swallows massive dick
This faggot's been hitting his knees for black dudes everywhere...Colin Kaepernick
///I had a colin line at rb but this was nice, cool///
Been claiming I'm someone else for YEARS...you shouldn't be hatin', brethren
C'mon, Blam! Even if I WAS an alias...I can guarantee I wouldn't go 8-7
///lol cool
I'll put you in the fucking ground. So, check this, queer..
King? Nah, more like a Prince...another black faggot who's gonna be dead this year
/i like this, haha
You champed when the league was weakest...Don't even bother dropping a verse
Your whole career you've done nothing but go through Scrubs...and I'm not talkin' your job as a nurse
yikes, i like it.
How can he even be CLOSE to the HOF? The kids whole steez is nonsense
But I'm not surprised your in the discussion...it's the only place you get a decent concept
nah imo
I bet your family used to work for mine...prolly husking corn and making breakfast
My bad, I'll stop talking about Bloodline...since your black ass can't afford to pay for Netflix
ok not bad////
Gets no pussy, so it's internet porn. Jerkin' with speed 'til he got a cramp
This loser saw Bags posted a picture of "Gina"...and IMMEDIATELY dropped his pants
nahddidnt like this//
You ducked me in the playoffs, then Knuck made you flee...kid I was dead!
This dude has come out a pussy more than worms in the Reed internet thread
eh soft/////
You could be the first black dude in the HOF!...you'd think your nigs would light it up
It's not that they're not good...most just don't text because this shit is white as fuck
///no////
If he smashes a bitch it's because she's roofied...or her necks at the edge of a knife
Dawg, you couldn't hit the fair way if you took golf lessons for the rest of your life
//ok not bad//
How you gonna talk $ w/ Seth? You prolly taking naps on the street
I'm not surprised he won the Survivor Tourney...dude prolly digs through trash just to eat
nah wasnt feeling this
Don't worry that he's a male nurse...This thug reps the hood!
This gangster pulls the strap with the pump!!!....then tells the patient their blood pressure's good
//good closer///





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Hi...




You've been under alias for 2 years, I'd shut my mouth if I were in your place
Got the nerve to complain about no shows yet youre the one afraid to show face
ok personal//
I'm trying to kill, if the punches to your side don't crack ribs
Then Im outside your house with the machine guns doing Desiigner's ad libs
//lol cool but soft imo///
My hood is real, can't go anywhere unless the iron is near
No disrespect to Ali but youre about to be 2nd the Cashius to die in a year
///allright//
Heard u love comedies, next Big Bang u see has nothing to do with Sheldon
A couple of shots will leave you surrounded by more angels than Corey Feldman
haha ok cool//
We're getting killed by cops and opps, that's y I got protection
Act stupid if you want, the 9 will put your e go to the side like Veritas' suggestion
nah soft imo
U can use all the personals u want, it still won't make your post tighter
I'll put so much fire to your whip, you'll get mistaken for Ghost Rider
hushs line was a bit better, cuz of the set up. this wasnt set up the best
Chicks won't stop calling me because a nigga's so damn hung
You lack personality, ur phone wouldn't blow up if it was sold by Samsung
ok cool
I'm heading to the HOF, there's no way this loser's stopping me
Cop a plea but the bullets'll go thru Cash quick as if they were on a shopping spree
ight ight, i seen this concept before tho. deecent
Any chick you're fucking is average, I'll put the gun to your cabbage
Or scope u from a distance, you'll have a crosshair on your forehead like 21 Savage
well he got it removed so lol but eh ok///
Forget the guns, we can exchange some swings
Your mom's a slut, I was in those walls longer than Will from "Stranger Things"
nah son. lol
I'm physically imposing, beating up dudes is nothing to me
This Punk'll get choked out so fast, you'd think it was UFC 203
wasnt feeling this at all imo
Your girls are plus sized, If I had a dollar for every model I've had, I would've been rich
Your McDonald's encounter with Metts wasn't the 1st time u were behind a big bitch
metts lol ok but nah soft
Youre constantly fighting over her cuz your thot isn't loyal
U keep seeing a "Fade" that doesn't have anything to do with Teyana & a bottle of oil
decent///
I'll spend the bread just to see you get left for dead
Put the 9 to ur grill, the hot shit in ur mouth rivals anything in the Ghost pepper thread
lol set up again.landed soft imo.
I get neck from bad chicks, you've got nothing but guys in your eyesight
All you see is Cash in dudes' mouths, his love life is a Ted Dibiase highlight
//reminds me of that fab's new joint...ok
Bye...
nice battle here..im going for the one who had more hits than misses which is cash. I like king's approach but some lines were just worded ehhhh and made me lean towards cash here, cash had some off moments but the personals were def the winning component here.....my votes goes to ca$h.....
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I’m going to be quick, but I’ve read this battle a few times.

Cashius: You hit the personals hard. Your verse was disorganized a bit, though —fat wifeif you’d thought more about which punches should follow which punches, the closer and the Kaepernick lines would have been even stronger (and they were my favorites from your verse). I didn’t like the fact that you said he “could be the first black dude in the HOF,” which is blatantly false. A few of your punches needed a little more in the way of either creativity or harshness. But this was a good, solid, championship-worthy verse.

Karaoke: You really tailed off toward the end. The “Stranger Things” line was so good, then it was downhill. Moreover, most of your personals and nameplays were the weakest parts of your verse. Desiigner ad libs and “Stranger Things” were the two standout lines. Yet they also fit into the theme of a bunch of clever but generic references that made your verse feel a bit redundant. Still, you worded and organized your verse much better than Cashius, but you didn’t leave as much of an impact.

Vote: Cashius
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