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07-02-2017, 08:03 PM | #1 |
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Ali As vs. Veritas - V WINS
14 lines due by tomorrow night.
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Good luck friend
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07-03-2017, 08:55 AM | #3 | |
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Filet your skin and wear it to the movies, cuz you my homey, bro.
So when I say I’ma wear you out, that’s no Tonio. No lube on this Jinder Mahal with a feminine jaw The champ. So when I lay the smack down, its all raw. Ok so maybe Tonio. you a lonely foe, who I feel pity for I won’t stop killing, cuz after one terrorist, we know there’s fifty more Fifty shades of gay, that’s your picture, lookin like an Asiatic party pool boy Bet the chopper find you and loosen your polo, you mark hoe, I’ma fool boy Can we stop fighting and have a serious discussion about why you hate me for no reason? Can we then have an honest discussion about why you afraid to be yourself on the web keying? Can we then go to my place and bake a cake and drink an herbal tea and watch the soaps? Can we talk about life, and death, our biggest disappointments, blessings, and hopes? Can we undress your dainty brown skin and lotion it with aloe? Can I slit your throat, bury you in the back yard then cover you with a backhoe? Just asking?
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07-04-2017, 04:16 PM | #4 |
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I had a death in the family Idk when I'll be back, sorry man. No actual hate just wanted good competition. Again sorry, maybe Monday I can drop
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07-12-2017, 11:23 PM | #5 |
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Dog I roll w/ crazy muslims that would get ya for skin color
V is a character, a social wanna be, typa faggot you see on Big Brother Take you to school, stick you like Elmer, write off V like a 60 degree angle Winning? I see fable, Ali the rubber, one bounce back,n you wont be stable I'm back on my shit no need for a motivator, I know you thought it was see ya later. V looks of a freebaser, I'm the neighborhood vending machine, he just feed the paper. Come see me in real life, you'll get stage fright Just like your real life this V goes no where, like a fat nerd's on prom night The mission is get money bro n you ain't doing it with them videos dude Matter fact get a video of your wifey performing, she live on this didgeridoo She brought me to your cabin in the woods dog down to her sex lair Straving for this shit dog,said V only goes up when it's drumsticks in the air just listen the AK I own will go off and steams heavily Ill come out them trees carefully...his next podcast is The Aftermath Ep.7:Please Pray for Me |
07-12-2017, 11:25 PM | #6 |
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sorry took so long, thanks for not being a fgt bout it like bags (yeah i saw that bitch!)
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07-12-2017, 11:43 PM | #7 |
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Vote- Vertias
reason- Vertias punchlines hit harder compare to Ali As I felt like he a better verse. Multies-Vertias Punchlines-Vertias personals-Vertias Ali As verse isn't great, practice you'll get better Last edited by Dope girl; 07-14-2017 at 07:59 AM. |
07-13-2017, 07:51 PM | #8 |
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I got Veritas here.
Simply for originality.. he went in. Al As is pretty wack tbh. But yeah.. if ya'll want me to break down the verses I will. But V did him in. Yall don't even gotta count this vote tbh. IJS. |
07-14-2017, 12:22 AM | #9 |
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No we'll take it, just find it funny you only came and posted in the BA because it was my battle
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08-26-2017, 10:00 AM | #10 |
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lmao vote - the non-neighbourhood vending machine
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08-30-2017, 11:58 AM | #11 |
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