Week 4: Incredible vs Sinacog - INCRED WINS

Flow · 02-05-2020, 04:59 PM

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the rule thread. Records updated in rankings.

DUE MONDAY,

@Sinacog @Incredible

Sinacog · 02-08-2020, 12:09 AM

I'm a beast with melodies; deceasing revelries; the darkest sun from the sheik of destiny!
The beast is destiny; you're not 'Incredible Hulk'; you're green with envy!

Incredible · 02-08-2020, 11:42 AM

The metals in ur mouth, explodes down where ur intestine sits
My niggas like wild wolves, tear ur top off they aint packin on cigarettes

Inno · 02-08-2020, 12:30 PM

Ok so inc I get what your trying to do but homie this just didn’t work. I see the tie ins with the pack reference the rest got lost in translation homie. I was feeling the setups but it just fell short with the punch.

Cog. Same ish as last week but you keep inching towards formulating a punch. This was decent and honestly if inc would came a bit more harder I would of gave him the vote.

Tough one cuz inc had this but I just don’t get his punch so ama give it to cog

dull boy · 02-08-2020, 12:32 PM

Vote - Cog

Dullboys explanation:

Quote:

Incredible: I don’t know what packing cigarettes has to do with taking the top off. Maybe I’m not getting it. I think you mean the cellophane but how that relates to packing them and wolves idk.

Cog used destiny twice, which was weird, and the hulk part is sort of out of place besides needing it to work for the wordplay.

- INF

FGR · 02-08-2020, 02:57 PM

. I got cog taking this.. Dude is still far from beating top tier but i do see week after week him getting better.. Incred ur shit didnt connect bro.. I see what u was going for but in the end if didnt connect..
Vote sin

Ouch · 02-08-2020, 04:19 PM

yeah no offense to either of you but I didn't see a punch at all... from either

literally I though after reading sinacogs thing anyone can beat that.. because there wasn't a punch.. then I read 'Incredibles' bar whcih was layed out more normal or to my liking... but ya shit just confused me man.. im not sure what you were trying to do, but it made no sense at all

soo.... vote --- Sinacog because his shit didn't make any sense either, but at least it rhymed

Amen · 02-09-2020, 11:56 AM

Sinacog’s was hardly a punch. You said he green with envy. Uh ok, no real impact.

I get what Inc was saying however it was terribly worded.

Inc took this with more of a PUNCH.

Considering this is the 1-2 PUNCH league.

V/Inc

John Dillinger · 02-09-2020, 10:13 PM

Vote Inc, a little more creative than calling someone green with envy imo

Adverse · 02-11-2020, 03:24 PM

Though Inc kind of botched his wording a bit i think his approach was definitely better and hit a bit harder. Had more edge to it. Sin is heading in the right direction but needs to start going for the throat

V/INC

Habitat · 02-11-2020, 08:17 PM

Inc definitely messed up the wording and botched what could have been a dope bar. But sinacog came through with that 1992 concept. Tough call but even though inc messed up his wording I dug his concept more. I just cant get behind green with envy

V/inc

Cashius · 02-11-2020, 10:00 PM

Vote incredible for having a more aggressive bar.

Blue Bayou · 02-11-2020, 10:14 PM

Intestine sits and cigarettes... I just can't

Vote Tie

Saint · 02-11-2020, 10:50 PM

Coin flip. Sins would've hit better w/ rewording even still the diss was more direct than Incs.
Inc was jumbled up again but the concept was much better & not lame

V - INC

Saint · 02-11-2020, 10:50 PM

Incred wins

02-08-2020, 02:57 PM	#6
FGR AHHHHHHH Join Date: May 2013 Location: Philadelphia Posts: 558 Battle Record: 16-17 Rep Power: 8596595	. I got cog taking this.. Dude is still far from beating top tier but i do see week after week him getting better.. Incred ur shit didnt connect bro.. I see what u was going for but in the end if didnt connect.. Vote sin __________________ . ..death to all RIGHT RIGHT!! Last edited by FGR; 02-08-2020 at 06:46 PM.

02-08-2020, 04:19 PM	#7
Ouch Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2019 Posts: 5,684 Battle Record: 1-5 Accomplishments - Lost to Kill Spree Champed - Wall Talking Rep Power: 4052252	yeah no offense to either of you but I didn't see a punch at all... from either literally I though after reading sinacogs thing anyone can beat that.. because there wasn't a punch.. then I read 'Incredibles' bar whcih was layed out more normal or to my liking... but ya shit just confused me man.. im not sure what you were trying to do, but it made no sense at all soo.... vote --- Sinacog because his shit didn't make any sense either, but at least it rhymed Last edited by Ouch; 02-08-2020 at 04:21 PM.

02-11-2020, 08:17 PM	#11
Habitat Make my day Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 742 Battle Record: 8-6 Champed - 1-2 LR Tournament Rep Power: 7519558	Inc definitely messed up the wording and botched what could have been a dope bar. But sinacog came through with that 1992 concept. Tough call but even though inc messed up his wording I dug his concept more. I just cant get behind green with envy V/inc __________________

02-11-2020, 10:14 PM	#13
Blue Bayou Ukrainian Howlitzers Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,091 Battle Record: 41-24 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 3 - Alias Tournament II - Fight Night XLVIII - Fight Night XXV - Fight Night XV - Fight Night (3x) - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Tag Team Season 3 - Lyric Olympics - 1-2 Punch League (3x) - Battle Arena League (2x) - Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 - BA Tag - NPL Roast - Netcees Pic League Rep Power: 17502332	Intestine sits and cigarettes... I just can't Vote Tie __________________ "I shit myself I had to throw my underwear in the dumpster outback Uve won" -kungfugrip

02-11-2020, 10:50 PM	#14
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,183 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535864	Coin flip. Sins would've hit better w/ rewording even still the diss was more direct than Incs. Inc was jumbled up again but the concept was much better & not lame V - INC __________________

02-08-2020, 12:09 AM	#2
Sinacog Satan Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,141 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129212	I'm a beast with melodies; deceasing revelries; the darkest sun from the sheik of destiny! The beast is destiny; you're not 'Incredible Hulk'; you're green with envy!

02-08-2020, 11:42 AM	#3
Incredible Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 1,482 Battle Record: 6-15 Rep Power: 25972892	The metals in ur mouth, explodes down where ur intestine sits My niggas like wild wolves, tear ur top off they aint packin on cigarettes

02-08-2020, 12:30 PM	#4
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	Ok so inc I get what your trying to do but homie this just didn’t work. I see the tie ins with the pack reference the rest got lost in translation homie. I was feeling the setups but it just fell short with the punch. Cog. Same ish as last week but you keep inching towards formulating a punch. This was decent and honestly if inc would came a bit more harder I would of gave him the vote. Tough one cuz inc had this but I just don’t get his punch so ama give it to cog

02-09-2020, 11:56 AM	#8
Amen As-salamu alaykum! Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 8,470 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Season 6 Rep Power: 0	Sinacog’s was hardly a punch. You said he green with envy. Uh ok, no real impact. I get what Inc was saying however it was terribly worded. Inc took this with more of a PUNCH. Considering this is the 1-2 PUNCH league. V/Inc

02-09-2020, 10:13 PM	#9
John Dillinger Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 882 Battle Record: 8-7 Accomplishments -NBL Pic Roast Champed -Netcees Writers League Rep Power: 10281356	Vote Inc, a little more creative than calling someone green with envy imo

02-11-2020, 03:24 PM	#10
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,738 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446142	Though Inc kind of botched his wording a bit i think his approach was definitely better and hit a bit harder. Had more edge to it. Sin is heading in the right direction but needs to start going for the throat V/INC

02-11-2020, 10:00 PM	#12
Cashius I'M A MONSTER! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,555 Battle Record: 77-13 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - The Quick & The Dead II - BA Swag & Flow Tournament - 1-2 Season 3 - NBL Season 6 - The Elements - Fall Brawl II - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Season 9 - Summer Classic VII - 50+ Wins - The Winter Classic - Tag Team Tourney -1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20257520	Vote incredible for having a more aggressive bar.

02-11-2020, 10:50 PM	#15
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,183 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535864	Incred wins __________________

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