01-22-2020, 03:54 PM | #1 |
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Week 2: Adverse 1-0 vs FGR 1-0 - FGR WINS
Week 2
You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the rule thread. DUE MONDAY, @Adverse @FGR *The 1-2 league is one bar VS one bar.* Last edited by Saint; 01-29-2020 at 05:22 AM. |
01-22-2020, 04:26 PM | #2 |
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01-22-2020, 06:54 PM | #3 |
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01-23-2020, 06:46 PM | #4 |
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You're predictable as a hot summer, "I'll spray this glock, bustin' at your ribs!"
But only time they see you as 'F, a G' is when they're erecting a statue for the greatest cocksucker that's ever lived Last edited by Saint; 01-23-2020 at 06:58 PM. Reason: Edit: typo |
01-23-2020, 06:48 PM | #5 | |
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FGR's bar
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01-24-2020, 09:05 PM | #6 |
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No free pass on the acronym bar although i appreciate the effort. Adjuring works pretty well i like it
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01-27-2020, 09:30 AM | #7 |
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felt like adverse got tangled a bit with the FAG flip. Tbh I liked the effort and the bar was decent but when taking a leap there always a chance you might slip. Adverse slipped a bit this week and FGR took advantage. Good battle FGR |
01-27-2020, 10:32 PM | #8 |
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Nameplay was smooth on FGRs end. Adverse with two subject matters here threw me off a bit. Not usually a big deal but you got two lines to kill making them relate as much as possibly is key. Try thinking outside the box. Vote - FGR
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01-28-2020, 04:16 PM | #9 |
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F a G I thought was a cool angle but it was too long winded imo....an easy more succinct reworded and this would've been a funny solid np
Adjurin works well in slang and k like the wp....punch was formulated well to the setup...nice bar Got FGR in this one...props to both
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01-28-2020, 08:22 PM | #10 |
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You're predictable as a hot summer, "I'll spray this glock, bustin' at your ribs!" But only time they see you as 'F, a G' is when they're erecting a statue for the greatest cocksucker that's ever lived Very creative but poorly worded. Liked the EFFIGY wordplay I don't think people with high enough IQ's got that part FGR : Thinking your gonna win? You must not know who you sparring wit Everyone here saying adjuring trouble, u should urge them to stop starting shit I have a problem with adjuring trouble as a stand alone and I don't think this is very creative. Anyone can put Ad in front of a word and try to make it work. My votes goes to ADVERSE
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01-28-2020, 09:46 PM | #11 |
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01-29-2020, 03:03 AM | #12 |
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Got adverse here. F a G is actually a very clever nameplay, definitely could of been done alot better then a statue of the greatest cock sucker that ever lived. That shits on some school yard bad man level lingo not to mention wordy as fuck. FGR knows the score and I like his adjusting trouble, it was alot more crisp and direct and clean. But I had to scroll up twice to remind me which name play you used where F a G got my own creative thoughts bubbling on how id flip it etc an on that basis
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01-29-2020, 05:15 AM | #13 |
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Adverse bar was a good attempt it just felt a little long winded compared to fgr who had a better name play imo
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