01-17-2020, 05:45 AM | #1 |
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Week 1: Sinacog vs Adverse - ADVERSE WINS
Week 1
You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the rule thread. DUE TUESDAY @Sinacog @Adverse *The 1-2 league is one bar VS one bar.* Last edited by Saint; 01-22-2020 at 02:46 PM. |
01-17-2020, 02:20 PM | #2 |
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01-17-2020, 07:56 PM | #3 |
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I'm the sun from the manana'; the cut from the rhymes of karma; I killed a thousand warlords with runs from the nirvana; 'peace like islam' the sun is the nirvana!
I'm the pope from the isles of Jerusalem; you're a joke from the the nile(denial) of a foolish kid; you think you're 'CUTTING EDGE' but this anime samurai..couldn't make the cut with a katana! |
01-20-2020, 01:28 AM | #4 |
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Send a casket! Once the Uz' with the banana extension blast him
The funeral home will have to carve "Sin" into that stone like the Ten Commandments |
01-20-2020, 09:59 AM | #5 |
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Love Sin going extremely long bar with it
Da Nile wp is as old as da feet wp tho and the cut/katana reference is basic Ad any sin/biblical play these days is going to be a bit tired....but the flip was cool enough and the np was worded well as an attack line imo Vote Adverse
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01-20-2020, 10:31 AM | #6 |
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Sinacog - Trash verse. Couldn't make the cut with a katana okay for a setup bar not a punchline.
Adverse - The word "Sin" is nowhere to be found in the 10 commandments thereby nullifying the punch. Adverse loses on a technicality. Vote: Sinacog
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01-20-2020, 11:09 AM | #7 |
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Kinda the same thing blue said with respect to sinacog's bar, the denial wp is one of those things that anyone who's been doing this as long as sinacog has knows not to do. The couldnt make the cut/katana thing was too simple, and the using the word cut twice in "make the cut" and "cutting edge" comes off as sloppy and redundant. Even the rhymes you chose for this are pretty rudimentary, so the whole thing feels really phoned in
Adverse: the extension blast him/ten commandments rhyme could've been cleaner. I like the overall idea for the punch, but the execution could've been a bit better. I think small things like the word "that" can slow your momentum down, and you might've been able to add another layer on. But overall this was a cool bar mvgt - adverse |
01-20-2020, 11:44 AM | #8 |
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This was close both fall off the edge a little bit
BUT I'll give it to adverse for better attempt |
01-22-2020, 10:59 AM | #9 |
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wasn't a huge fan of either of these bars but adverse was more coherent and i dug his more. commandments were carved in stone though not sins. however adverse still had the better bar here. sinacog was all over the place
v/adverse
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01-22-2020, 12:14 PM | #10 |
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I got adverse
Sins flips (da nile and couldn't make the cut) are a little dated and execution was kinda hokey Adverse had a different take on a predictable/done name flip V/adverse |
01-22-2020, 12:53 PM | #11 |
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I hate to talk about things other than a vote within my vote but this is wild as fuck that y’all are complimenting his long bar style when his bar was way longer than my shot I erased and my shit was long bar too. Weird as hell for real. But not really, considering that you guys would probably use anything to vote against me
Anyway adverse bar was hot. Sinacog the focus of your wordplay was a bit outdated and easy to think of Vote adverse |
01-22-2020, 02:45 PM | #12 |
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Sinacog had too much going on here. Tried a cutting edge wordplay but was awful/old. The setup was too long, again.
Adverse got it on having a simple & effective bar. V Adverse |
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