11-19-2018, 11:06 PM | #1 |
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Round 2: Black Lives Matter vs. KKK - BLM WINS
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1. YOU MUST VOTE ON ALL BATTLES INCLUDING YOUR OWN!!! 2. You will post your vote on your normal name, and explain your vote. Please let’s not be complete lazy bastards and drop dog shit votes, put some effort into that shit. When you vote on your own battle, try not to make it so obvious as to who you are - personally idc but it’s for your own benefit tbh. 3. Minimum line limit is 10 / Maximum is 16 4. ONLY ONE EXTENSION ALLOWED PER BATTLER! NO EXCEPTIONS! You will have ample amounts of time each week to post your verses, all battles will always be posted on time and on schedule, no excuses. So if you need an extension, PM a mod, don’t post in your thread. 5. Battles will be set on Sunday night or Monday morning. Verses will be due by Friday night. Voting will end on Sunday. - NO BITING - NO RECYCLING - NO CHEATING - NO SWAYING Black Lives Matter: KKK: Last edited by For Battling; 11-19-2018 at 11:09 PM. |
11-19-2018, 11:55 PM | #2 |
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11-20-2018, 04:43 AM | #3 |
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11-25-2018, 07:04 AM | #4 |
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BLM’s Verse:
You hate us for no reason, one of us probably left your wife a lil loose She said she wanted someone hung, all you could do was provide her with a noose Im creative as fuck, your verses are dry as hell Pull the out the blicky and have you getting a Dummy, Boy even if 69’s jail Im a legend mate while you on the other hand are one of the worst Even with the gimmick last round, you didn’t Marvel anyone with your verse I’m a colossus, your rhetoric’s just nonsense Not a plot twist but it’s ironic that a Woke nigga is about to leave u unconscious I’ve beaten everyone in this, you’ve got no notable victories just trashy wins You’re a bunch of bitches obsessed with black dudes, those K’s could stand for Kardashians |
11-25-2018, 07:06 AM | #5 |
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Black Lives Matter? You monkeys support this chatter? It's Jungle Book w/ pimp flair Niggas die, they get paid. Fat apes eatin' off the weight that the chimps bear I triiiieeedddd to tell em: you don't want these hands to rattle ya nose We'll slide up yellin and bring the Fade to Black Live like Metallica shows The riots in Bmore? Basically a ride down the beach to OUR type of meet Shit if Flacco won a ring, they'd have more dmg caused by uh-oh to his own street Fuck the sci-fi shit. You ain't got A Way Out, no save w/ the black card So PLZ act hard. You'll be fit w/ 6 nigs in a sunken place in my backyard 2 choices: drawn and quartered by Fords or hung w/ ur pants saggin. Get out of line? Boy I'll treat u like ya mom & have u pick a branch, faggot. Since when? |
11-25-2018, 10:34 AM | #6 |
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You hate us for no reason, one of us probably left your wife a lil loose
She said she wanted someone hung, all you could do was provide her with a noose lmao dope Im creative as fuck, your verses are dry as hell Pull the out the blicky and have you getting a Dummy, Boy even if 69’s jail ahh nah you completely messed this one up Im a legend mate while you on the other hand are one of the worst Even with the gimmick last round, you didn’t Marvel anyone with your verse ok but loses points as a standard line I’m a colossus, your rhetoric’s just nonsense Not a plot twist but it’s ironic that a Woke nigga is about to leave u unconscious aright I’ve beaten everyone in this, you’ve got no notable victories just trashy wins You’re a bunch of bitches obsessed with black dudes, those K’s could stand for Kardashians lol ok Vs You monkeys support this chatter? It's Jungle Book w/ pimp flair Niggas die, they get paid. Fat apes eatin' off the weight that the chimps bear i think I get what you were going for with the whole jungle book concept but you didn’t do it well enough to make it clear I triiiieeedddd to tell em: you don't want these hands to rattle ya nose We'll slide up yellin and bring the Fade to Black Live like Metallica shows lol nice The riots in Bmore? Basically a ride down the beach to OUR type of meet Shit if Flacco won a ring, they'd have more dmg caused by uh-oh to his own street nah Fuck the sci-fi shit. You ain't got A Way Out, no save w/ the black card So PLZ act hard. You'll be fit w/ 6 nigs in a sunken place in my backyard hmm this is OK. Wording was a bit weird 2 choices: drawn and quartered by Fords or hung w/ ur pants saggin. Get out of line? Boy I'll treat u like ya mom & have u pick a branch, faggot. nah BLM had a pretty good verse, some lines felt like they were more for a standard battle but there was only 1 clear miss imo. That opener was LOTB and gave you s good advantage. I definitely feel like you could have done more with dissing your gimmick but all in all it was a cool verse. KKK your verse was ok, you had some cool concepts but were often hurt by wording that didn’t quite get the punch across in the way it should have. I also feel you could’ve done more with dissing your gimmick. I’ve got BLM pretty comfortably here. Vote BLM |
11-25-2018, 12:30 PM | #7 |
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Close battle. KKK only really miss for me is the uh oh bar. Closer leaned me. Opener I'm giving benefit of doubt. Rest got a lol.
BLM opener and last two bars were solid. Others fell flat for me. It's close but more Lols with KKK so he edges it Vote kkk |
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11-25-2018, 09:34 PM | #9 |
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Hi...
You hate us for no reason, one of us probably left your wife a lil loose She said she wanted someone hung, all you could do was provide her with a noose I’m a colossus, your rhetoric’s just nonsense Not a plot twist but it’s ironic that a Woke nigga is about to leave u unconscious I’ve beaten everyone in this, you’ve got no notable victories just trashy wins You’re a bunch of bitches obsessed with black dudes, those K’s could stand for Kardashians I felt that this was a consistent verse. Opener was line of the battle in my opinion. I triiiieeedddd to tell em: you don't want these hands to rattle ya nose We'll slide up yellin and bring the Fade to Black Live like Metallica shows The riots in Bmore? Basically a ride down the beach to OUR type of meet Shit if Flacco won a ring, they'd have more dmg caused by uh-oh to his own street Fuck the sci-fi shit. You ain't got A Way Out, no save w/ the black card So PLZ act hard. You'll be fit w/ 6 nigs in a sunken place in my backyard Your wording is somewhat weird to me. I get what youre saying but the wording took the sting out a lot of your punches. Vote- BLM, just more polished... Bye...
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11-26-2018, 02:00 AM | #10 |
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The brackets around KKK's verse is stupid imo but the verse itself I like. Really liked Fade to Black and the branch shit, I guess you are referencing the monkey kingdom in the Jungle Book shit? If so I fuck with it, I remember the scene where they carry him around. A Way Out has been done a million times, not terrible.
BLM had some good stuff here, really liked the opener. 69 is current i suppose, idk much about the shit but you get one google its 2018. I feel like the last half kinda dropped off, although the closer was decent. Marvel was a throwaway in a 10 line battle imo might be the difference here KKK |
11-26-2018, 09:36 AM | #11 |
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You hate us for no reason, one of us probably left your wife a lil loose
She said she wanted someone hung, all you could do was provide her with a noose lol kinda cool, kinda predictable though Im creative as fuck, your verses are dry as hell Pull the out the blicky and have you getting a Dummy, Boy even if 69’s jail nah far too simple for me Im a legend mate while you on the other hand are one of the worst Even with the gimmick last round, you didn’t Marvel anyone with your verse missed for me tbh I’m a colossus, your rhetoric’s just nonsense Not a plot twist but it’s ironic that a Woke nigga is about to leave u unconscious yeah I liked this one a lot conceptually I’ve beaten everyone in this, you’ve got no notable victories just trashy wins You’re a bunch of bitches obsessed with black dudes, those K’s could stand for Kardashians lol nice idea again, definitely picked up towards the later end of your verse vs You monkeys support this chatter? It's Jungle Book w/ pimp flair Niggas die, they get paid. Fat apes eatin' off the weight that the chimps bear just okay I triiiieeedddd to tell em: you don't want these hands to rattle ya nose We'll slide up yellin and bring the Fade to Black Live like Metallica shows kinda okay, kinda feels like an older idea revamped/twisted to make it applicable lol The riots in Bmore? Basically a ride down the beach to OUR type of meet Shit if Flacco won a ring, they'd have more dmg caused by uh-oh to his own street straight Fuck the sci-fi shit. You ain't got A Way Out, no save w/ the black card So PLZ act hard. You'll be fit w/ 6 nigs in a sunken place in my backyard okay 2 choices: drawn and quartered by Fords or hung w/ ur pants saggin. Get out of line? Boy I'll treat u like ya mom & have u pick a branch, faggot. just okay, felt a bit flat tbreal I'm kinda tied on this one, Flacco line didn't do much for me, I enjoyed the Metal;lica line but it felt kinda.. done already? I know that's odd sounding but it just feels like a stale idea given a revamped twist to make it applicable to me. I dunno. Well hung was okay, woke nigga was nice, closer was nice. More of that please. I've got Black Lives Matter here |
11-26-2018, 10:26 PM | #13 |
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I read them.
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11-27-2018, 07:05 AM | #14 |
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Literally need 1 vote to decide this battle
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11-27-2018, 08:08 AM | #15 |
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Noise was dope rest of BLM’s verse I didn’t like much tbh. That 69 shit was wack but the chimp bar was decent just worded bad.
KKK I thought was more consistent and had better hits. Got fit 6 niggas and your closer was dope V/kkk |
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tough call cuz i like kardashians the least of the quotes but I also liked staywoke the most of the quotes.........so with that in mind looking at the rest of the verses id probably lean to blm with less misses. coin flip here. v blm |
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11-27-2018, 04:57 PM | #19 |
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6-3 BLM
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11-27-2018, 04:58 PM | #20 |
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