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Old 11-11-2018, 09:27 PM   #1
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i'm with my buddies prepared to spit a sick joint
so put your money where your mouth is bitches... bitcoin
try to make heads or tails of the way my shit's going
but when i flip you fail to catch the change like a flipped coin
take you out cuz i can like recyclin' day
only hot cuz you ain't got a fan or anyone who likes what you say
without a shot ought to be puttin' that rifle away
cuz you're a disciple but with an e is the type that you prey
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you put pen to words same as attemptin' to take a turd & polish it
any mention of your worth i came to demolish it
dispensin' words that sever nerves break spines & cave in all your ribs
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Old 12-12-2018, 04:42 PM   #2
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Wow man... dont know alright i guess... halfway decent....
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Old 12-12-2018, 08:30 PM   #3
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You remind me of someone, not sure who yet...

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try to make heads or tails of the way my shit's going
but when i flip you fail to catch the change like a flipped coin

^^I like that but hate it @ the same time...the wordin' is, iunno?

This would make a good audio joint, in text it's cool...I like a lot but just think your word usage is very up & down which sometimes fucked the flow up for me...just my opinion bro.

Sweet little drop though, stay doin' you hombre.
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Old 12-13-2018, 03:20 AM   #5
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I put my money where my mouth is bitches, and bitcoin..

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