03-31-2018, 08:22 PM | #1 |
obsessed
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- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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black liquor
wish it would stop
watch the laundry spin and then sit on a box circular sleep. daydream while i cry kill me at dawn, sing silent night - no. hum at my grave dig me up. stop. then kiss my remains skeletons out the closet. my bones here to stay shapeshifting gravediggers. I'm barely awake you talk me alive, i sleep when i yawn told me to keep eyes closed three eternities long so she goes again, another fish in the sea another piece of driftwood breaking off into pieces tailbaiting fresh water species. as he hums für elise you don't mean something to me. just need something to break defensive in particular. relationship balled into shape from wheatgrass, liquor, deafness and arguments sake my wedding vows will start off in malaise "afraid my depression will slowly degrade you" in love and in sickness, in health, and inept sugarcoat your love with your honey colored flesh other worldly sex, martian soil beneath ourselves who am i kidding. selfish star gazer lost in himself probably would decline if you offered me help i feel how an author thinks when he writes in italics. how? a quiet whisper while being slightly sarcastic half winter, springtime, march solstice mars rover, enzymes. black liquor god sold us. paths shrinking. bed time pillow talk, fact checking. more liquor store drifting. 4.50. 6 oz flask dangled in sleeve use disease to reprieve from society as a daily retreat we've become emotionless whatever we do staring at art, until they tell me to leave come back the next day to stare on repeat maybe it's me. dissecting something that doesn't exist in matrix - a glitch. in reality, suboxone, coffee stained marital strips we go back to a time. nostalgia is a hell of safety net black liquor here at my side |
03-31-2018, 08:35 PM | #2 |
Lime Life
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Exquisite.
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09-09-2018, 04:53 PM | #3 |
living
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my wedding vows will start off in malaise
"afraid my depression will slowly degrade you" in love and in sickness, in health, and inept sugarcoat your love with your honey colored flesh other worldly sex, martian soil beneath ourselves who am i kidding. selfish star gazer lost in himself probably would decline if you offered me help i feel how an author thinks when he writes in italics. how? a quiet whisper while being slightly sarcastic beauty to me, as sad as it is. sometimes its nice to know this is out there in the world as well. thanks.
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09-09-2018, 08:19 PM | #4 |
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this was sick
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09-11-2018, 09:02 PM | #5 | |
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Italics line was mad dope. Why didn’t I think of that. Well played bb
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09-21-2018, 02:30 AM | #6 |
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Dude, I know you hate my shit but I can say I appreciate yours. That was such a smooth read, it was like a journal entry inside of your thoughts, with a continuously distinct pic within every line. It was dripping with sadness but also it was like you were processing it all in real time. Idk, I found it very introspective. And also, I could personally relate to it. So thank you
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09-21-2018, 11:33 AM | #7 |
Punchline Prettyboy
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That was fun to read
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10-21-2018, 09:13 AM | #8 |
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Yea smooth. Felt depth.
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