09-11-2018, 11:44 PM | #1 |
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Round 1: 1. Jabari Black (14-4) vs 16. Witty (3-2) - JB WINS
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09-15-2018, 07:32 PM | #3 |
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Yo.
Went on a winning streak...got modded, now you runnin' shit? Nah, I was sent to slay ya Cuz if ppl say Jabari got a stranglehold on this bitch, they talkin bout the Celtics player
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09-15-2018, 07:41 PM | #4 |
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You in over ya head! Point blank range....I’ll murk a lame with ease/
Chopper over ya head...then I’m waving on ya roof like hurricane relief/ |
09-16-2018, 06:00 PM | #5 |
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Went on a winning streak...got modded, now you runnin' shit? Nah, I was sent to slay ya
Cuz if ppl say Jabari got a stranglehold on this bitch, they talkin bout the Celtics player Think this was coo here, I like the namplay with the Celtics tie in. That was nice, execution kinda was light imo, but overall nice ------------------ You in over ya head! Point blank range....I’ll murk a lame with ease/ Chopper over ya head...then I’m waving on ya roof like hurricane relief/ This is dope! Wording was good here and the execution was right on point for a good hit. Props to both, I got JB here with the overall better creativity in his bar V-JB
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09-17-2018, 05:07 AM | #6 |
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Witty's was a cool concept, however I think the execution lacked here. Not really hard hitting for me which is odd - Witty typically has more or so harsher executions.
JB's punch was cool as well. More effective and I liked it. I got Jabari Black here. |
09-17-2018, 01:04 PM | #7 |
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Jabari was a slick chopper flip I never seen
Witty was cool but was just out punched here
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09-17-2018, 04:05 PM | #8 |
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Jabari got this but i wish he didnt say over ya head twice
Witty was cool but jb was harsher and more effective |
09-17-2018, 04:24 PM | #9 |
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Jabari’s line was dope to me...obv the chopper thing has been done but the current event and wave tie in made it a hit.
The Jabari play from witty was cool. I didn’t know about a domestic incident with his m but that tie in makes it a bit more effective. Good shit. I got JB here by a small margin but witty did his thing. |
09-17-2018, 05:44 PM | #10 |
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Cool battle, looks like im gunna be in the minority here but i liked Witty more here tbh
JB - Pretty cool for a chopper flip but the concept is pretty dated...'waving on ya roof' was a cool metaphor but his roof? roof of his mouth okay maybe but that's not how it was delivered and calling his head a "roof" is a stretch imo & made the concept seemed like a reach & ineffective to me ... i like the meta for what it is but it doesn't work Witty - set-up a bit stetched but was effective & it was a cool nameplay / current event punch.. tbh i loved the way it was delivered, good swag on the 'if you've got a stranglehold on this bitch'.. clever & worked well Ive got Witty here
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09-17-2018, 05:45 PM | #11 |
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JB up 6-2
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09-17-2018, 07:14 PM | #12 |
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gotta agree wit bb
witty had a dope one Jabari was good bt not as good V/witty |
09-17-2018, 08:15 PM | #13 |
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Hmm, I got Jabari here.
I live in Australia and watch Rugby league and Cricket. I dont follow Soccer or Baseball or Grid Iron, just like everyone in those countries dont follow my sports. So I had to google the celtics reference, bar was okay. Jabari had another chopper/copter concept but threw in a current event/hurricane flip that was good to me. I may live in Australia but Florence is on the news every day. So Jabaris bar worked better for ME. |
09-17-2018, 11:49 PM | #14 |
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Jabari Black wins 6-2
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