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Old 02-01-2019, 11:15 AM   #1
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I'm a Saint, ready my poetry; God knows I'm learning too well
Angels in Heaven adore me; while if a Angel is 'Singing The Blues' it's because he's depressed you're not burning in hell
I'm shooting the tech; one shot and your words are history
I'm putting 'Blues Clues on a Pole' like Steve solving a murder mystery
I'm royalty; you're a peasant putting a blade to your wrist
I'll grab the blade, and have 'Blue Dying of Heir' like a Joker who'll prostrate to a prince
God loves me; I make splashes in waters with waves of commotion
I'm a Saint; 'Sin is Taking Blues Soul' like God Raging in Oceans
No-one thinks your dope; I got blades for this guys neck
If birds are thinking 'Blues Fly' than I'm Painting the Sky Red
I have sex with demi-gods; Aphrodite be getting my erection in nook deep
I had sex with Asherah; and I'll 'kill you with that pole' and you'll still never be getting that pussy..


An Asherah pole is a sacred tree or pole that stood near Canaanite religious locations to honor the Ugaritic mother-goddess Asherah, consort of El. The relation of the literary references to an asherah and archaeological finds of Judaean pillar-figurines has engendered a literature of debate..

Don't discount my verse that fast..read it and comprehend..it's good..lol..

Vote fairly..peace...

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Old 02-01-2019, 12:12 PM   #3
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due in 72 hours?? you already knew I wrote in 10 minutes & posted? haha


my eyes hurt. no way am i quoting ur rhymes
not when i could read Veritas book 3X over before finishin ur opening line
writtens like that are proof you've got the wrong flex
dunno what's more dated, explanations at the bottom of verses..or ya concepts
so fresh i speak to myself in the 3rd person when i’m blazin a session
“you dropped dope Blue.. n’ Sin u ate so fast it’s like u made a suggestion”
u write 10,000 words a bar but we ignore your presence
ur wack. if i say ‘dope Metasin’ i’m payin homage to a former legend
dawgy you ain’t up to snuff w/ whores..
cousin fact - the only person that you ever fuck is yours
embarrass this faggit then i’ll put the pump to his tooth
moccasin then spend $300 at the cleaners gettin blood from my shoes
an egomaniac sweeping the votes. that’s right, i’m truly vicious
once the ‘Overalls are Red’ i'll be left w/ a Bigger Head then Stewie Griffin
so when it comes to dope writers that top the chain
you can't say you are, Sin. nothing you ever drop is flames
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Ngl this battle really pisses me off
And in this battle I mean Sinacog. She not only slept on my Cred verse but also had a paragraph long expo to make sure I didn’t sleep on her shit.

In all fairness, tho, some of those lines were good.
Blue came with some flames tho

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Old 02-26-2019, 02:58 AM   #5
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Blue had some pretty good lines. Former legend line was line of the battle.
Sinacog had some decent lines. Just felt like a bunch of nameplays that ain't really do much in comparison.

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Rhymes/Multi/Inners - as far as this cat goes it was fairly even, however blues were less forced and seemed to be used more efficiently.
Punches/Personals - gotta go with blue. The 10000 words/feel your presence/dope metasin was a great example, but honestly blue was really consistent. Sin seemed to have some lined up, but compared to blue they didn't hit very hard.
Metaphors/Wordplay - blue took this. Moccasin, overalls red, insinuate. Really nice, consistent use of the wordplay here. Sin had a lot of blue lines, but like the red sky line, it just didn't equate to the same prowess blue put on display here.
Vocabulary/Technique - I wouldn't have thought sin could lose in a vocab match up. But the repetition of I'm a saint, and blade/grab a blade. It just didn't work well this time. Usually more obscure word choices allow sin to have a unique delivery, but blue took it as a result of choosing the right words to progress his set ups and overall keep the drop fresh and interesting.
Structure/Flow - both were structured well, but blue seemed to flow better. A few unbalanced bars from sin matched with blue consistently having bars lined up for the most part lead to a unanimous decision here.

Overall - Blue got it. Solid round where the pressure was put on line after line without sacrificing the flow or structure and wordplay to keep it fresh. Just a clean concise use of everything it's hard to pick out many flaws here.

VOTE - Blue Bayou
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Blue killed it I loved the insinuate name play as well as the mock a sin/ moccasin even though I used a really similar flip in the past. I think blue had the better punches and name flips and all around the more cohesive verse.

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Old 07-21-2019, 04:23 PM   #8
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This was a fairly one sided battle. Sin tried to be direct with the name plays, but a lot of them were poorly worded, with some struggling to be coherent. Not sure why you tried to keep some kind of theological-theme to this, it really just injected unnessacary wording, while adding no value to the attempted punches. Blue did a Mich better job connecting his punches. Some clever wordplay, flipped into nice jabs. The insinuate/suggestion flopped for me, butbthecrest of these lines did more then enough to clearly sweep the categories.

At the end of the day, overworded and convoluted bars vs concisely executed bars. Easy decision.

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