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Old 06-20-2019, 10:09 PM   #1
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Old 06-21-2019, 04:57 AM   #2
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U look good & then fall off. Inconsistency make me wanna curl up
Repeated failure between posts this bitch a Thai defender in the Women’s World Cup
Fuck trash talk. One jab from me all it take to make a statement
Ain’t gotta push ur buttons, just make straight contact... It’s a modern day payment
Break into ur dirty crib, throw u into furniture & trash ur homely purchases
Ain’t keep his house well polished... but u can still see his face in most the surfaces
Cant spend a dime on a bitch. U must be trollin so stop it.
No cash on me? I just ‘take the plastic out.’ You get the inflatable doll out ur closet
& if there’s info ya boys won’t reveal it. Ur a rat so lips never speak shit
Snubbed .44 to ur cheek. Get the nose to ur ear like I was whispering secrets
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Old 06-27-2019, 03:59 AM   #5
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Wanderer vs Sinacog.

Sinacog wins 3-0.

Yooooooouuuuuu lost to Sinacog, NIGGGGA, a Sinacog verse?
LOL I don't even neeeed to write a punchline...

like a Sincaog verse

That's a lot to unravel, troll votes led to an improbable scandal
Your bar on suicide doors should've included tying a knot to a handle
STOP asking your girl if I'm bigger, & don't believe if she says yours
She jerks me limp & keeps going, you both are beating a dead horse
She took my call as you cuddled her, that's what your bitch is about
I asked was I intruding she mumbled "Get a gun. I'll send blueprints of the house"
I entered about an hour later, glock & the vibrator to glisten her cat
It's no magic Wand, I pulled the Rabbit out after waving the stick at your cap
Wednesdays it's dick in her vaj, keeps quiet but her pussy lips are saying it
My place, your crib. Even at work I got her camel yelling "Guess what day it is??!!"
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Old 06-28-2019, 01:47 AM   #6
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U look good & then fall off. Inconsistency make me wanna curl up
Repeated failure between posts this bitch a Thai defender in the Women’s World Cup
Meh
Fuck trash talk. One jab from me all it take to make a statement*
Ain’t gotta push ur buttons, just make straight contact... It’s a modern day payment*
Ok
Break into ur dirty crib, throw u into furniture & trash ur homely purchases
Ain’t keep his house well polished... but u can still see his face in most the surfaces
Wording off
Cant spend a dime on a bitch. U must be trollin so stop it.*
No cash on me? I just ‘take the plastic out.’ You get the inflatable doll out ur closet*
No
& if there’s info ya boys won’t reveal it. Ur a rat so lips never speak shit*
Snubbed .44 to ur cheek. Get the nose to ur ear like I was whispering secrets*
Decent seen it though
Camped up high with police issue glocks. That’s true, no cop alert
Few flashes from the roof halt u by the side of the road. It’s a routine stop & search
Cool

Seen the nose to ear flip before but was ok the stop and search was new to me...other than that I didn't like too much...just ok



That's a lot to unravel, troll votes led to an improbable scandal
Your bar on suicide doors should've included tying a knot to a handle
Ok
STOP asking your girl if I'm bigger, & don't believe if she says yours
She jerks me limp & keeps going, you both are beating a dead horse
Decentish
She took my call as you cuddled her, that's what your bitch is about
I asked was I intruding she mumbled "Get a gun. I'll send blueprints of the house"
Nah
I entered about an hour later, glock & the vibrator to glisten her cat
It's no magic Wand, I pulled the Rabbit out after waving the stick at your cap*
Cool
Wednesdays it's dick in her vaj, keeps quiet but her pussy lips are saying it
My place, your crib. Even at work I got her camel yelling "Guess what day it is??!!"
Lol

Almost was a flop verse here with that blueprints line but the last two again was the best here nothing much else to show for it...dead horse was decent I guess

flowed better throughout...better final 2 bars...better consistency...vote...aero
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Old 06-28-2019, 04:12 PM   #7
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Wanderer -

U look good & then fall off. Inconsistency make me wanna curl up
Repeated failure between posts this bitch a Thai defender in the Women’s World Cup

I thought this was cool.

Fuck trash talk. One jab from me all it take to make a statement
Ain’t gotta push ur buttons, just make straight contact... It’s a modern day payment

This was cool.

Break into ur dirty crib, throw u into furniture & trash ur homely purchases
Ain’t keep his house well polished... but u can still see his face in most the surfaces

Lol, this was cool.

Cant spend a dime on a bitch. U must be trollin so stop it.
No cash on me? I just ‘take the plastic out.’ You get the inflatable doll out ur closet

This was cool. Nice.

& if there’s info ya boys won’t reveal it. Ur a rat so lips never speak shit
Snubbed .44 to ur cheek. Get the nose to ur ear like I was whispering secrets

LOL! Nice.

Camped up high with police issue glocks. That’s true, no cop alert
Few flashes from the roof halt u by the side of the road. It’s a routine stop & search

This was cool.

Aero -

That's a lot to unravel, troll votes led to an improbable scandal
Your bar on suicide doors should've included tying a knot to a handle

Lmao, this was cool.

STOP asking your girl if I'm bigger, & don't believe if she says yours
She jerks me limp & keeps going, you both are beating a dead horse

This was cool.

She took my call as you cuddled her, that's what your bitch is about
I asked was I intruding she mumbled "Get a gun. I'll send blueprints of the house"

I thought this was cool.

I entered about an hour later, glock & the vibrator to glisten her cat
It's no magic Wand, I pulled the Rabbit out after waving the stick at your cap

Nice one here.

Wednesdays it's dick in her vaj, keeps quiet but her pussy lips are saying it
My place, your crib. Even at work I got her camel yelling "Guess what day it is??!!"

Lmao, this was cool.

Overall -

Cool battle, I have Aero winning..
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Old 06-29-2019, 12:51 AM   #8
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U look good & then fall off. Inconsistency make me wanna curl up
Repeated failure between posts this bitch a Thai defender in the Women’s World Cup
Fuck trash talk. One jab from me all it take to make a statement
Ain’t gotta push ur buttons, just make straight contact... It’s a modern day payment

& if there’s info ya boys won’t reveal it. Ur a rat so lips never speak shit
Snubbed .44 to ur cheek. Get the nose to ur ear like I was whispering secrets
Camped up high with police issue glocks. That’s true, no cop alert
Few flashes from the roof halt u by the side of the road. It’s a routine stop & searc

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hat's a lot to unravel, troll votes led to an improbable scandal
Your bar on suicide doors should've included tying a knot to a handle
STOP asking your girl if I'm bigger, & don't believe if she says yours
She jerks me limp & keeps going, you both are beating a dead horse
She took my call as you cuddled her, that's what your bitch is about
I asked was I intruding she mumbled "Get a gun. I'll send blueprints of the house"
I entered about an hour later, glock & the vibrator to glisten her cat
It's no magic Wand, I pulled the Rabbit out after waving the stick at your cap
Wednesdays it's dick in her vaj, keeps quiet but her pussy lips are saying it
My place, your crib. Even at work I got her camel yelling "Guess what day it is??!!"


damnnnnnnnnnnn. i read this three time

I thought Wanderer was gonna take it at first, 2nd time I read it, aero edged it and third time,Aero took it.


overall giving this aero due to a more consistent verse
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Old 06-29-2019, 02:57 AM   #9
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This was some good punches from both.
Aero had much stronger multis And that closer was dope. I agree the blue print line wasn't so great. But it followed the scheme. Everything except the first bar followed that scheme. The first bar is a good personal towards previous battle but Idk the suicide door was ok.
Wanderer man. There was a lot of good shit in here. Just a few little errors here and there, some multis or wording could've been stronger but the punches were there. The open set up could've been better. The polish line and still seeing the faces I liked. Just something about the way you approach it that isn't as smooth as your opponent. His multi schemes being a little longer makes it feel more structured. I've literally looked back and forth quite a few times. This is gonna look like such a weird explained vote. Probably toughest vote I've had since returning.
favorite bar vs favorite bar.
The furniture line from wanderer. Seeing your reflection in polished furniture or making a face shaped dent in a dusty dresser. I personally liked this.
From aero the closer had a lot of elements. Wednesday being a reference, the camel talking lips. Great delivery on it.
You know what? It wouldn't be right for the drop wanderer had to not get one vote. I feel like weakest punch of the battle was the blueprint line. Suicide door maybe not so high on the list either So I'm gonna go against the rest

Vote - Wanderer

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Wand -- idk man, read bland to me. Opener I didn't get. Not looking up/ sports bar. I kinda liked the wording of your closer 'stop & search' but meh the creativity/connection wasnt there. Secrets was OKAY to me.

Aero -- opener was cool flip, alright
magic wand was cool
closer not bad, did enough to win
better wording, more harsh/relevant concepts. executed better too..
dead horse & blueprints missed but not enough to make it closer anyway

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Old 06-29-2019, 08:18 AM   #11
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U look good & then fall off. Inconsistency make me wanna curl up
Repeated failure between posts this bitch a Thai defender in the Women’s World Cup

this is ok, modern reference but the post concept is as old as time

Fuck trash talk. One jab from me all it take to make a statement
Ain’t gotta push ur buttons, just make straight contact... It’s a modern day payment

eh there could've been a better sting on this, im just not crazy about the wording

Break into ur dirty crib, throw u into furniture & trash ur homely purchases
Ain’t keep his house well polished... but u can still see his face in most the surfaces

the concept here is cool but I do think it could've been utilized better

Cant spend a dime on a bitch. U must be trollin so stop it.
No cash on me? I just ‘take the plastic out.’ You get the inflatable doll out ur closet

this was a bit simple, but kinda funny so I like it.

& if there’s info ya boys won’t reveal it. Ur a rat so lips never speak shit
Snubbed .44 to ur cheek. Get the nose to ur ear like I was whispering secrets

I swear I've seen or heard this before, but whatever. It's alright

Camped up high with police issue glocks. That’s true, no cop alert
Few flashes from the roof halt u by the side of the road. It’s a routine stop & search

I think this could've been worded better, but the overall concept was strong enough to carry the bar. It's solid

*edit to include Aero's first 2 lines*:

Yooooooouuuuuu lost to Sinacog, NIGGGGA, a Sinacog verse?
LOL I don't even neeeed to write a punchline...like a Sincaog verse

Quote:
Originally Posted by Sinacog
This was cool.


That's a lot to unravel, troll votes led to an improbable scandal
Your bar on suicide doors should've included tying a knot to a handle

solid opener. It's a bit shy of a haymaker, but it's a good bar

STOP asking your girl if I'm bigger, & don't believe if she says yours
She jerks me limp & keeps going, you both are beating a dead horse

naw, you just called your dick a horse. not even equating it to a horse's dick, but the actual horse itself. you out here with seabiscuit dick bruh?

She took my call as you cuddled her, that's what your bitch is about
I asked was I intruding she mumbled "Get a gun. I'll send blueprints of the house"

kinda simple but funny

I entered about an hour later, glock & the vibrator to glisten her cat
It's no magic Wand, I pulled the Rabbit out after waving the stick at your cap

this is lowkey fire

Wednesdays it's dick in her vaj, keeps quiet but her pussy lips are saying it
My place, your crib. Even at work I got her camel yelling "Guess what day it is??!!"

naw, kinda funny but you can do better


I think the most obvious difference between the 2 is that I prefer aero's wording. I think his bars have more of a sting on them even when he's just being simple and/or comical. Magic hat was botb for me

v/ aero aka a schlong named secretariat

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U look good & then fall off. Inconsistency make me wanna curl up
Repeated failure between posts this bitch a Thai defender in the Women’s World Cup
mmm decent, I think it could’ve been better if executed differently
Fuck trash talk. One jab from me all it take to make a statement
Ain’t gotta push ur buttons, just make straight contact... It’s a modern day payment
again, clever concept but the execution was underwhelming
Break into ur dirty crib, throw u into furniture & trash ur homely purchases
Ain’t keep his house well polished... but u can still see his face in most the surfaces
better, I liked this
Cant spend a dime on a bitch. U must be trollin so stop it.
No cash on me? I just ‘take the plastic out.’ You get the inflatable doll out ur closet
ok lol
& if there’s info ya boys won’t reveal it. Ur a rat so lips never speak shit
Snubbed .44 to ur cheek. Get the nose to ur ear like I was whispering secrets
phew, fire here
Camped up high with police issue glocks. That’s true, no cop alert
Few flashes from the roof halt u by the side of the road. It’s a routine stop & search
hmm ok


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Sinacog wins 3-0.

Yooooooouuuuuu lost to Sinacog, NIGGGGA, a Sinacog verse?
LOL I don't even neeeed to write a punchline...

like a Sincaog verse
lol loved this

That's a lot to unravel, troll votes led to an improbable scandal
Your bar on suicide doors should've included tying a knot to a handle
alright pretty cool
STOP asking your girl if I'm bigger, & don't believe if she says yours
She jerks me limp & keeps going, you both are beating a dead horse
fuckin dead
She took my call as you cuddled her, that's what your bitch is about
I asked was I intruding she mumbled "Get a gun. I'll send blueprints of the house"
lol nice
I entered about an hour later, glock & the vibrator to glisten her cat
It's no magic Wand, I pulled the Rabbit out after waving the stick at your cap
ok
Wednesdays it's dick in her vaj, keeps quiet but her pussy lips are saying it
My place, your crib. Even at work I got her camel yelling "Guess what day it is??!!"
gone. Hell no


Cool battle here, wanderer had some cool stuff but a lot of lines were underwhelming. Aero had a nice funny verse and gets it.


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rabbit bar was funny and closer was cool from aero and the reason he won
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