WK 6: Contender: GUDELJ 3-0 vs. Flow 2-2 - Flow WINS!!

[Incredible]

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@GUDELJ @Flow

[GUDELJ]

take aim at his throat. Fuck the bullshit I ain’t playin w/ this bloke
Put a fag in the sky.. this Sig killin every1 around w/o the 2nd hand smoke

Hit you where it hurts, shtick in ur face...wait till it squirts ~~
Then you’ll see that big thang.. which one of u fags gon kiss the tip 1st

Hairy idiot with black shades on? What the shit
Dude.. you’re literally 1 step away from becoming cousin it





I grip the tec, he gone learn respect
Slap a sausage on his plate, what’s he gon cook next?


*waitwaitwait run it back*

I said..

What’s he cookin? I’ll put the meat on his plate. Have yourself a taste
An angry customer w/ burnt food.. I hate when u put it in all the way

Where’s your verse at? Was this pic posted just to show u a duckin mister?
Finger slip - Here’s a tip, stop trying to look like your fuckin sister

Duck face

Hang it up

Stop fake flexin. Flurry of shots leave em swollen
Gramitical gats, I got a semi. It’ll connect w/ ur colon

[Incredible]

lmao okay Officer, either you lying and that slob is ur neighbor
or dinner dates be like ur zipper face - split unevenly, and not in ur favour
you impossibly gay bruh, you call that living clean cut?
fashion following faggot don't even got the Hipster hold his skinny jeans up
that bitch a 3 looking like Knucklehead if he shaved and he washed
something tells me her idea of Pigging Out wasn't a tinder date with a cop
stay with the glock, got a Nina and I put it to misuse..
ur guns called Healthcare, Social Housing and Federal Tax- they're all Government Issues
tuck in your pistol pussy, arms folded cause Snorlax vile as hell
ur body language so defensive it could make the World Cup Finals by itself
you wyling Zelph, holy cow at that beast that you laid
it's grays you wear in the field and also in a field where she graze

[Jabari Black]

Edit: my vote’s below. My b for posting twice.

[Twodrop]

Zelph:

take aim at his throat. Fuck the bullshit I ain’t playin w/ this bloke
Put a fag in the sky.. this Sig killin every1 around w/o the 2nd hand smoke
ok
Hit you where it hurts, shtick in ur face...wait till it squirts ~~
Then you’ll see that big thang.. which one of u fags gon kiss the tip 1st
wasn't feeling
Hairy idiot with black shades on? What the shit
Dude.. you’re literally 1 step away from becoming cousin it
light, but ok
I grip the tec, he gone learn respect
Slap a sausage on his plate, what’s he gon cook next?
huh
What’s he cookin? I’ll put the meat on his plate. Have yourself a taste
An angry customer w/ burnt food.. I hate when u put it in all the way
didn't get this one
Where’s your verse at? Was this pic posted just to show u a duckin mister?
Finger slip - Here’s a tip, stop trying to look like your fuckin sister
liked this
Stop fake flexin. Flurry of shots leave em swollen
Gramitical gats, I got a semi. It’ll connect w/ ur colon
this was dope

Flow:

lmao okay Officer, either you lying and that slob is ur neighbor
or dinner dates be like ur zipper face - split unevenly, and not in ur favour
fire
you impossibly gay bruh, you call that living clean cut?
fashion following faggot don't even got the Hipster hold his skinny jeans up
lol, yup
that bitch a 3 looking like Knucklehead if he shaved and he washed
something tells me her idea of Pigging Out wasn't a tinder date with a cop
ok
stay with the glock, got a Nina and I put it to misuse..
ur guns called Healthcare, Social Housing and Federal Tax- they're all Government Issues
hmmm, not sure on this one
tuck in your pistol pussy, arms folded cause Snorlax vile as hell
ur body language so defensive it could make the World Cup Finals by itself
this was on point
you wyling Zelph, holy cow at that beast that you laid
it's grays you wear in the field and also in a field where she graze
ha, cool closer

Flow flex'd in this..

Cool battle.

v/ Flow

[BodySnatcher]

ake aim at his throat. Fuck the bullshit I ain’t playin w/ this bloke
Put a fag in the sky.. this Sig killin every1 around w/o the 2nd hand smoke
ehh
Hit you where it hurts, shtick in ur face...wait till it squirts ~~
Then you’ll see that big thang.. which one of u fags gon kiss the tip 1st
nah homie
Hairy idiot with black shades on? What the shit
Dude.. you’re literally 1 step away from becoming cousin it
lol ehh
What’s he cookin? I’ll put the meat on his plate. Have yourself a taste
An angry customer w/ burnt food.. I hate when u put it in all the way
come on homie
Where’s your verse at? Was this pic posted just to show u a duckin mister?
Finger slip - Here’s a tip, stop trying to look like your fuckin sister
nah
Stop fake flexin. Flurry of shots leave em swollen
Gramitical gats, I got a semi. It’ll connect w/ ur colon
cool

0 uppercuts, 2 jabs, 5 body shots


mao okay Officer, either you lying and that slob is ur neighbor
or dinner dates be like ur zipper face - split unevenly, and not in ur favour
LOTB
you impossibly gay bruh, you call that living clean cut?
fashion following faggot don't even got the Hipster hold his skinny jeans up
ehhh...
that bitch a 3 looking like Knucklehead if he shaved and he washed
something tells me her idea of Pigging Out wasn't a tinder date with a cop
lolol
stay with the glock, got a Nina and I put it to misuse..
ur guns called Healthcare, Social Housing and Federal Tax- they're all Government Issues
winded, decent at best
tuck in your pistol pussy, arms folded cause Snorlax vile as hell
ur body language so defensive it could make the World Cup Finals by itself
cool line
you wyling Zelph, holy cow at that beast that you laid
it's grays you wear in the field and also in a field where she graze
st8

2 uppercuts, 2 jabs, 2 body shots


Damn Zelph that pic from Flo was ripe for the picking...I thought you would've come harder. I see you did some different things in your verse display, I'm not sure how I feel about it. You'll get back on your feet. I got Flo taking this with consistency. Good contender picture match fellas

[BodySnatcher]

double post

[Cereal]

guide:
w/o the 2nd hand smoke
nice
Slap a sausage on his plate, what’s he gon cook next?
kiss the chef lines always good..
Finger slip
and nice colon closing line..

inc:
that slob is ur neighbor - nice opener..
OUCH*
dinner dates be like ur zipper face - split unevenly, and not in ur favour...***
#nice World Cup Finals by itself..
pretty tight..

vote gudelj
more personal direct instead of indirect.. plus the colon line did it for me..

[Jabari Black]

take aim at his throat. Fuck the bullshit I ain’t playin w/ this bloke
Put a fag in the sky.. this Sig killin every1 around w/o the 2nd hand smoke

(I like how you used the pic, but sig/cig flips have been done so much that you have to do something really special for it to land)

Hit you where it hurts, shtick in ur face...wait till it squirts ~~
Then you’ll see that big thang.. which one of u fags gon kiss the tip 1st

(Pause lol. Might be giving you too much credit but i read kiss the tip as hollow tip. I hate pauseworthy bars, but overall this was okay)

Hairy idiot with black shades on? What the shit
Dude.. you’re literally 1 step away from becoming cousin it

(Okay as well. Good job of using the pic but the punch wasn’t too heavy)

I grip the tec, he gone learn respect
Slap a sausage on his plate, what’s he gon cook next?

(Wasted a bar here. Pretty sure this was keyed thinking you had the no show dub)

*waitwaitwait run it back*

I said..

What’s he cookin? I’ll put the meat on his plate. Have yourself a taste
An angry customer w/ burnt food.. I hate when u put it in all the way

(Same. This one was kinda OD with the gay stuff though)

Where’s your verse at? Was this pic posted just to show u a duckin mister?
Finger slip - Here’s a tip, stop trying to look like your fuckin sister

(Clearly keyed thinking you had the no show. This one was a step up though. The set up coulda been better. I liked the duckface angle but the punch needed to be harsher)

Stop fake flexin. Flurry of shots leave em swollen
Gramitical gats, I got a semi. It’ll connect w/ ur colon

(Lol where tf this come from??? This was pretty nice! I think you could have set it up bit better but I like it as is)



lmao okay Officer, either you lying and that slob is ur neighbor
or dinner dates be like ur zipper face - split unevenly, and not in ur favour

(I think I’m missing something. I didn’t really get this one)

you impossibly gay bruh, you call that living clean cut?
fashion following faggot don't even got the Hipster hold his skinny jeans up

(I liked the concept. The wp was a slight stretch. It works if you say “hipsta” but I read it as it was written. Overall it was okay)

that bitch a 3 looking like Knucklehead if he shaved and he washed
something tells me her idea of Pigging Out wasn't a tinder date with a cop

(Lol this was pretty funny all around. Pigging out was a simple flip but the pic made t relevant and you did enough for it to feel fresh. I liked this one)

stay with the glock, got a Nina and I put it to misuse..
ur guns called Healthcare, Social Housing and Federal Tax- they're all Government Issues

(This was nice)

tuck in your pistol pussy, arms folded cause Snorlax vile as hell
ur body language so defensive it could make the World Cup Finals by itself

(I liked the concept. The punch itself was a bit too basic to me)

you wyling Zelph, holy cow at that beast that you laid
it's grays you wear in the field and also in a field where she graze

(Lol wording coulda been cleaner but this was a solid closer)


This has so much potential to be fire but the drama around the showing and whether the pics been sent probably hurt the battle. I’m pretty sure zelph keyed together the second half of his verse thinking he was getting the no shown win.

Zelph was really breaking down the pics and I liked where he was going, but then played around for a few bars. The semicolon bar was nice though - wasn’t expecting that.

Flow came with it in his verse. He took some obvious angles (girl being fat, zelph a cop, etc) but he did it with so much creativity that it felt fresh. His punches were landing heavy and made me laugh throughout his verse.

Flow took this one. Zelph definitely has the talent and creativity to make this a lot closer but kinda just dropped the ball with some of the bars. Flow was consistent as always but had some standout punches to go along with it. Woulda been a very tough verse to beat regardless.

Mvgt Flow