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Old 06-08-2015, 01:48 PM   #1
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Due Dates:
  • Verses are due Thursday, June 11th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
  • Battles that lack votes may close later.
  • One sided battles may get closed early.
  • Extensions are 24 hours


Line Limit:
  • Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
  • If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

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First to 5, win by at least two votes
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Old 06-08-2015, 02:28 PM   #2
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Old 06-09-2015, 06:16 AM   #3
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Since u don't know I gotta explain bitch, don't SLEEP coz I'm hot as a flame get
N if I catch this kid napping, im tying him up to rot in my basement
No one hold me back, just let the boyz b boyz n I promise man
That I'll smash homez in the pavement till black stones in his bracelet pop out..that's an onyx slam
Dude wishes his skin tone was different, so I'll spray his face with starch
See macule change colors, just wait till the fuckin irritation starts..
I'll lace this nark wit a lazy left, watch'em drop fast,
Shiiit, imagine a pair a full hooks, they'll give'em a terrible look like our fuckin cops have
Ur cancer progressing, had a couple glimpses of death glance ya direction
Now the times come, when I raise these arms n CLAP! Like I'm anxious to answer a question
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Old 06-10-2015, 03:24 PM   #4
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ys maka da madman kill da whole human race,
dis niccur bust-a-nut? only on his boyfriend face/
u white boy site that my knife bring defeat,
take u vanilla, extract sumtin devilishly sweet/
i da rich man makin ur sister give me dome,
u na boomin bust unless i pay to bomb ur home/
maka da best niccurs my lines endless,
flo's fluent cos i got mo tongues than a french kiss/
u ded niccur n maka make ur life slam shut,
i see u on the other side like da knife hedin 4 ur gut/
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Old 06-10-2015, 06:05 PM   #5
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Bust

Kidnapping. I like this. Wp seems familiar but the tie ins were nice.
onyx slam was pretty cool
I don't get see macula
cops eh ok
closer Abv avg

Not a bad showing. Who is this bust guy this mfer talking bout shooting ppl too? Damn lol niggss sign up w/ there guns drawn in this bitch

I like it. I like it alot

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ur opener made me laugh.
devilish sweet was weak tho brudda
booming bust isn't a phrase I'm familiar w/ . But I do get the association boom n bust
frech kiss is a self rep . Not a diss
lol ohhh closer was dirty . See u on the other side u bitch! Stab


hmm


Bust was more consistent. .but cool battle


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Old 06-11-2015, 03:20 AM   #6
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Bust got it,

Not an amazing battle. Bust.. if I was gonna quote anything would be your closer and onyx slam. Those were ok. Not that hard though & rest was flat.

Maka, I don't like it when people vote like this but I really can't quote anything. If I had to give you some feedback it would be to actually try hurtin your opponent with sharper personals and creative disses. You shit was all a bit too simple/swaggering

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Old 06-11-2015, 10:37 AM   #7
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Since u don't know I gotta explain bitch, don't SLEEP coz I'm hot as a flame get
N if I catch this kid napping, im tying him up to rot in my basement
decent
No one hold me back, just let the boyz b boyz n I promise man
That I'll smash homez in the pavement till black stones in his bracelet pop out..that's an onyx slam
alright pretty good
Dude wishes his skin tone was different, so I'll spray his face with starch
See macule change colors, just wait till the fuckin irritation starts..
coulda been better I think, wp not bad tho but the concept was weak
I'll lace this nark wit a lazy left, watch'em drop fast,
Shiiit, imagine a pair a full hooks, they'll give'em a terrible look like our fuckin cops have
i like the wording but the punch is decent at best
Ur cancer progressing, had a couple glimpses of death glance ya direction
Now the times come, when I raise these arms n CLAP! Like I'm anxious to answer a question
ehh not really feelin this

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ys maka da madman kill da whole human race,
dis niccur bust-a-nut? only on his boyfriend face/
u white boy site that my knife bring defeat,
take u vanilla, extract sumtin devilishly sweet/
i da rich man makin ur sister give me dome,
u na boomin bust unless i pay to bomb ur home/
maka da best niccurs my lines endless,
flo's fluent cos i got mo tongues than a french kiss/
u ded niccur n maka make ur life slam shut,
i see u on the other side like da knife hedin 4 ur gut/
lol maybe a troll verse or just really bad, nothing to quote


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Old 06-11-2015, 04:01 PM   #8
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Bust
Opener was ok
Only other thing I could quote was onyx slam thought that was pretty cool

Maka

I couldn't really quote anything everything was too simple try to be more creative and personal.

V- Bust
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Old 06-11-2015, 08:07 PM   #9
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Bust had a battle verse, I liked onyx slam, wasn't really feeling much from maka, punches have to be creative, attack your opponent

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