06-08-2015, 01:48 PM | #1 |
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makajibbz 1-1 vs Bust 0-0 - BUST WINS
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06-08-2015, 02:28 PM | #2 |
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06-09-2015, 06:16 AM | #3 |
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Since u don't know I gotta explain bitch, don't SLEEP coz I'm hot as a flame get
N if I catch this kid napping, im tying him up to rot in my basement No one hold me back, just let the boyz b boyz n I promise man That I'll smash homez in the pavement till black stones in his bracelet pop out..that's an onyx slam Dude wishes his skin tone was different, so I'll spray his face with starch See macule change colors, just wait till the fuckin irritation starts.. I'll lace this nark wit a lazy left, watch'em drop fast, Shiiit, imagine a pair a full hooks, they'll give'em a terrible look like our fuckin cops have Ur cancer progressing, had a couple glimpses of death glance ya direction Now the times come, when I raise these arms n CLAP! Like I'm anxious to answer a question |
06-10-2015, 03:24 PM | #4 |
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ys maka da madman kill da whole human race,
dis niccur bust-a-nut? only on his boyfriend face/ u white boy site that my knife bring defeat, take u vanilla, extract sumtin devilishly sweet/ i da rich man makin ur sister give me dome, u na boomin bust unless i pay to bomb ur home/ maka da best niccurs my lines endless, flo's fluent cos i got mo tongues than a french kiss/ u ded niccur n maka make ur life slam shut, i see u on the other side like da knife hedin 4 ur gut/ |
06-10-2015, 06:05 PM | #5 |
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Bust
Kidnapping. I like this. Wp seems familiar but the tie ins were nice. onyx slam was pretty cool I don't get see macula cops eh ok closer Abv avg Not a bad showing. Who is this bust guy this mfer talking bout shooting ppl too? Damn lol niggss sign up w/ there guns drawn in this bitch I like it. I like it alot Maka ur opener made me laugh. devilish sweet was weak tho brudda booming bust isn't a phrase I'm familiar w/ . But I do get the association boom n bust frech kiss is a self rep . Not a diss lol ohhh closer was dirty . See u on the other side u bitch! Stab hmm Bust was more consistent. .but cool battle V/bust
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06-11-2015, 03:20 AM | #6 |
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Bust got it,
Not an amazing battle. Bust.. if I was gonna quote anything would be your closer and onyx slam. Those were ok. Not that hard though & rest was flat. Maka, I don't like it when people vote like this but I really can't quote anything. If I had to give you some feedback it would be to actually try hurtin your opponent with sharper personals and creative disses. You shit was all a bit too simple/swaggering V/Bust |
06-11-2015, 10:37 AM | #7 |
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Since u don't know I gotta explain bitch, don't SLEEP coz I'm hot as a flame get
N if I catch this kid napping, im tying him up to rot in my basement decent No one hold me back, just let the boyz b boyz n I promise man That I'll smash homez in the pavement till black stones in his bracelet pop out..that's an onyx slam alright pretty good Dude wishes his skin tone was different, so I'll spray his face with starch See macule change colors, just wait till the fuckin irritation starts.. coulda been better I think, wp not bad tho but the concept was weak I'll lace this nark wit a lazy left, watch'em drop fast, Shiiit, imagine a pair a full hooks, they'll give'em a terrible look like our fuckin cops have i like the wording but the punch is decent at best Ur cancer progressing, had a couple glimpses of death glance ya direction Now the times come, when I raise these arms n CLAP! Like I'm anxious to answer a question ehh not really feelin this Vs ys maka da madman kill da whole human race, dis niccur bust-a-nut? only on his boyfriend face/ u white boy site that my knife bring defeat, take u vanilla, extract sumtin devilishly sweet/ i da rich man makin ur sister give me dome, u na boomin bust unless i pay to bomb ur home/ maka da best niccurs my lines endless, flo's fluent cos i got mo tongues than a french kiss/ u ded niccur n maka make ur life slam shut, i see u on the other side like da knife hedin 4 ur gut/ lol maybe a troll verse or just really bad, nothing to quote Vote: Bust |
06-11-2015, 04:01 PM | #8 |
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Opener was ok Only other thing I could quote was onyx slam thought that was pretty cool Maka I couldn't really quote anything everything was too simple try to be more creative and personal. V- Bust |
06-11-2015, 08:07 PM | #9 |
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Bust had a battle verse, I liked onyx slam, wasn't really feeling much from maka, punches have to be creative, attack your opponent
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