Dominate vs NYCSPITZ - DOM WINS

Sharp · 07-04-2022, 08:41 PM

Netcees SOL Season II
Week 2

Due Thursday, July7th at Midnight PST

Minimum - 8 lines
Max - 12 lines
24hr ext given on request

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
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2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
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Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls

@Dominate @NYCSPITZ

Dominate · 07-04-2022, 08:46 PM

G'day mate.

NYCSPITZ · 07-05-2022, 01:10 AM

Hello

NYCSPITZ · 07-06-2022, 11:48 PM

I’ll take an ext my fren

Dominate · 07-07-2022, 12:24 AM

Works for me

Dominate · 07-09-2022, 01:56 AM

This guy?

I gave him a list of personals but his writing is obvious dookie
If some shit I brought up goes far w/ Spits, it’s cuz I’m hocking a loogie
Lost a topical to the warthog. Four-zero. Wowsers dude.
Y’all went toe to toe w/ rhymes and that little piggy went to town on you
Act like women like you but your methods are shady and sinister
If a girl is well disposed to you, you hid the body after raping and killing her
One minute in your topical league and I got props that’s bigger than you
Step here and I’m a strict parent: you can get spanked w/ this Discipline too

NYCSPITZ · 07-09-2022, 04:01 AM

Look

No showed me in the aowl, i thought this guy was a vet…
Had him sooo shook he ducked HARD - you’d think he felt a seismic event
It makes sense that killed u. We all think u should retire
When the semi spit, this Aussie got way too close to that ring of fire
He fondles students, baits em w grades…so this herb is done to me.
I mean those marks ain’t even real anymore like German currency
Traumatizes them w his dick. Whole class calls genitals “dominate places”
No Saw I turn molesters into jigsaw puzzles, police’ll find dom in eight places

evaD · 07-09-2022, 04:50 PM

NYC was pretty good but Dom was just a level above here. Well disposed and discipline cool concepts and loogie a good name play all worded nicely too.

Vote Dom

Saint · 07-09-2022, 05:31 PM

I gave him a list of personals but his writing is obvious dookie
If some shit I brought up goes far w/ Spits, it’s cuz I’m hocking a loogie
Ha.. reminds me of my spit line @rb. Liked what you did here setting it up.
Lost a topical to the warthog. Four-zero. Wowsers dude.
Y’all went toe to toe w/ rhymes and that little piggy went to town on you
I didn't this one much at first. It grew on me, still ok
Act like women like you but your methods are shady and sinister
If a girl is well disposed to you, you hid the body after raping and killing her
Well executed. Coo
One minute in your topical league and I got props that’s bigger than you
Step here and I’m a strict parent: you can get spanked w/ this Discipline too
Well for a personal, I don't follow the aowl but I Iiked the personal angle flip

No showed me in the aowl, i thought this guy was a vet…
Had him sooo shook he ducked HARD - you’d think he felt a seismic event
Ha, thought it was slick
It makes sense that killed u. We all think u should retire
When the semi spit, this Aussie got way too close to that ring of fire
Aight, bit basic here
He fondles students, baits em w grades…so this herb is done to me.
I mean those marks ain’t even real anymore like German currency
Been done, I saw what you did w the teaching angle.. so it helped
Traumatizes them w his dick. Whole class calls genitals “dominate places”
No Saw I turn molesters into jigsaw puzzles, police’ll find dom in eight places
These plays been done on Dom..your flip wasn't too origin imo

NYC not a bad showing, Dom was too much here for 8 lines. Vote Dom

Adverse · 07-09-2022, 11:15 PM

Dom:

I gave him a list of personals but his writing is obvious dookie
If some shit I brought up goes far w/ Spits, it’s cuz I’m hocking a loogie
^ decent, good connection in the set up

Lost a topical to the warthog. Four-zero. Wowsers dude.
Y’all went toe to toe w/ rhymes and that little piggy went to town on you
^ lol this was alright

Act like women like you but your methods are shady and sinister
If a girl is well disposed to you, you hid the body after raping and killing her
^ haha alright I see what you did there

One minute in your topical league and I got props that’s bigger than you
Step here and I’m a strict parent: you can get spanked w/ this Discipline too
^ think I’m missing something here. I get it on a basic level but not if there’s a deeper meaning

NYC:
No showed me in the aowl, i thought this guy was a vet…
Had him sooo shook he ducked HARD - you’d think he felt a seismic event
^ this was decent but not a hard hit by any means

It makes sense that killed u. We all think u should retire
When the semi spit, this Aussie got way too close to that ring of fire
^ the ideas decent feel like there’s probably a better way to word this though?

He fondles students, baits em w grades…so this herb is done to me.
I mean those marks ain’t even real anymore like German currency
^ yeah that’s okay.

Traumatizes them w his dick. Whole class calls genitals “dominate places”
No Saw I turn molesters into jigsaw puzzles, police’ll find dom in eight places
^ this was a decent flip but I think the set up was kind of meh. Punch isn’t exactly something new

Dom outboxed NYC here, don’t think Spitz is a bad battler but you can see that he’s out of his element a bit here. Like coming from strictly topical writing it’s hard to know exactly how to word shit to have the strongest impact but as I’ve been told a hundred times you’ve got to go for blood, make your lines sting, sometimes a clever reference isn’t enough. You got to hurt em. Decent battle fellas

V/ Dominate

NYCSPITZ · 07-10-2022, 11:29 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dominate

This guy?

I gave him a list of personals but his writing is obvious dookie
If some shit I brought up goes far w/ Spits, it’s cuz I’m hocking a loogie
Played
Lost a topical to the warthog. Four-zero. Wowsers dude.
Y’all went toe to toe w/ rhymes and that little piggy went to town on you
Y’all think this is dope? LOL
Act like women like you but your methods are shady and sinister
If a girl is well disposed to you, you hid the body after raping and killing her
This was fire
One minute in your topical league and I got props that’s bigger than you
Step here and I’m a strict parent: you can get spanked w/ this Discipline too
Honestly not feeling

Quote:

Originally Posted by nycspitz

No showed me in the aowl, i thought this guy was a vet…
Had him sooo shook he ducked HARD - you’d think he felt a seismic event
Absolute fire…
It makes sense that killed u. We all think u should retire
When the semi spit, this Aussie got way too close to that ring of fire
not feeling
He fondles students, baits em w grades…so this herb is done to me.
I mean those marks ain’t even real anymore like German currency
This was dope as fuck
Traumatizes them w his dick. Whole class calls genitals “dominate places”
No Saw I turn molesters into jigsaw puzzles, police’ll find dom in eight places
Literally swooned at how sexy this bar is

V/ NYC easily

Resin M-I-C · 07-10-2022, 11:39 AM

spit was corny to me
toe to toe was solid
well disposed, really like it.. my typa line, clever
discipline ok

vs

seismic was ok at best
ring of fire felt like just a statement
german was cool
another statementish line

nyc wasnt bad at all.. i liked some concepts but i’m all for cleverness and redirection.. Dom had lotb and did his thing

v dom

07-04-2022, 08:46 PM	#2
Dominate Tread Lightly. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 2,309 Battle Record: 26-9 Champed - Netcees Battle League - Battle Arena - Tag Team Tournament III - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 18197456	G'day mate. __________________ The Bad Guys

07-05-2022, 01:10 AM	#3
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,033 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743544	Hello __________________ UNIFIED THEORY

07-06-2022, 11:48 PM	#4
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,033 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743544	I’ll take an ext my fren __________________ UNIFIED THEORY

07-07-2022, 12:24 AM	#5
Dominate Tread Lightly. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 2,309 Battle Record: 26-9 Champed - Netcees Battle League - Battle Arena - Tag Team Tournament III - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 18197456	Works for me __________________ The Bad Guys

07-09-2022, 01:56 AM	#6
Dominate Tread Lightly. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 2,309 Battle Record: 26-9 Champed - Netcees Battle League - Battle Arena - Tag Team Tournament III - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 18197456	This guy? I gave him a list of personals but his writing is obvious dookie If some shit I brought up goes far w/ Spits, it’s cuz I’m hocking a loogie Lost a topical to the warthog. Four-zero. Wowsers dude. Y’all went toe to toe w/ rhymes and that little piggy went to town on you Act like women like you but your methods are shady and sinister If a girl is well disposed to you, you hid the body after raping and killing her One minute in your topical league and I got props that’s bigger than you Step here and I’m a strict parent: you can get spanked w/ this Discipline too __________________ The Bad Guys

07-09-2022, 04:01 AM	#7
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,033 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743544	Look No showed me in the aowl, i thought this guy was a vet… Had him sooo shook he ducked HARD - you’d think he felt a seismic event It makes sense that killed u. We all think u should retire When the semi spit, this Aussie got way too close to that ring of fire He fondles students, baits em w grades…so this herb is done to me. I mean those marks ain’t even real anymore like German currency Traumatizes them w his dick. Whole class calls genitals “dominate places” No Saw I turn molesters into jigsaw puzzles, police’ll find dom in eight places __________________ UNIFIED THEORY Last edited by NYCSPITZ; 07-09-2022 at 08:29 AM.

07-09-2022, 04:50 PM	#8
evaD Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 697 Battle Record: 19-10 Champed - BA Show And Prove - Summer Classic XI Rep Power: 4156644	NYC was pretty good but Dom was just a level above here. Well disposed and discipline cool concepts and loogie a good name play all worded nicely too. Vote Dom __________________

07-09-2022, 05:31 PM	#9
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,209 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535865	I gave him a list of personals but his writing is obvious dookie If some shit I brought up goes far w/ Spits, it’s cuz I’m hocking a loogie Ha.. reminds me of my spit line @rb. Liked what you did here setting it up. Lost a topical to the warthog. Four-zero. Wowsers dude. Y’all went toe to toe w/ rhymes and that little piggy went to town on you I didn't this one much at first. It grew on me, still ok Act like women like you but your methods are shady and sinister If a girl is well disposed to you, you hid the body after raping and killing her Well executed. Coo One minute in your topical league and I got props that’s bigger than you Step here and I’m a strict parent: you can get spanked w/ this Discipline too Well for a personal, I don't follow the aowl but I Iiked the personal angle flip No showed me in the aowl, i thought this guy was a vet… Had him sooo shook he ducked HARD - you’d think he felt a seismic event Ha, thought it was slick It makes sense that killed u. We all think u should retire When the semi spit, this Aussie got way too close to that ring of fire Aight, bit basic here He fondles students, baits em w grades…so this herb is done to me. I mean those marks ain’t even real anymore like German currency Been done, I saw what you did w the teaching angle.. so it helped Traumatizes them w his dick. Whole class calls genitals “dominate places” No Saw I turn molesters into jigsaw puzzles, police’ll find dom in eight places These plays been done on Dom..your flip wasn't too origin imo NYC not a bad showing, Dom was too much here for 8 lines. Vote Dom

07-09-2022, 11:15 PM	#10
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,739 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446142	Dom: I gave him a list of personals but his writing is obvious dookie If some shit I brought up goes far w/ Spits, it’s cuz I’m hocking a loogie ^ decent, good connection in the set up Lost a topical to the warthog. Four-zero. Wowsers dude. Y’all went toe to toe w/ rhymes and that little piggy went to town on you ^ lol this was alright Act like women like you but your methods are shady and sinister If a girl is well disposed to you, you hid the body after raping and killing her ^ haha alright I see what you did there One minute in your topical league and I got props that’s bigger than you Step here and I’m a strict parent: you can get spanked w/ this Discipline too ^ think I’m missing something here. I get it on a basic level but not if there’s a deeper meaning NYC: No showed me in the aowl, i thought this guy was a vet… Had him sooo shook he ducked HARD - you’d think he felt a seismic event ^ this was decent but not a hard hit by any means It makes sense that killed u. We all think u should retire When the semi spit, this Aussie got way too close to that ring of fire ^ the ideas decent feel like there’s probably a better way to word this though? He fondles students, baits em w grades…so this herb is done to me. I mean those marks ain’t even real anymore like German currency ^ yeah that’s okay. Traumatizes them w his dick. Whole class calls genitals “dominate places” No Saw I turn molesters into jigsaw puzzles, police’ll find dom in eight places ^ this was a decent flip but I think the set up was kind of meh. Punch isn’t exactly something new Dom outboxed NYC here, don’t think Spitz is a bad battler but you can see that he’s out of his element a bit here. Like coming from strictly topical writing it’s hard to know exactly how to word shit to have the strongest impact but as I’ve been told a hundred times you’ve got to go for blood, make your lines sting, sometimes a clever reference isn’t enough. You got to hurt em. Decent battle fellas V/ Dominate

07-10-2022, 11:39 AM	#12
Resin M-I-C Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 734 Battle Record: 33-9 Champed - 1-2 Punch Onslaught II - Tag Team Tournament V - 1-2 Punch Season III - Netcees SOL - Battle Arena - SOL Season I - NBL Season XIV - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 8150227	spit was corny to me toe to toe was solid well disposed, really like it.. my typa line, clever discipline ok vs seismic was ok at best ring of fire felt like just a statement german was cool another statementish line nyc wasnt bad at all.. i liked some concepts but i’m all for cleverness and redirection.. Dom had lotb and did his thing v dom __________________ C. O. B.