WK7: Killing Spree 1-2 vs. DynamiCz 3-3 - DynamiCz WINS!!

[Incredible]

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@Killing Spree @DynamiCz

[Kill Spree]

Pics?

[DynamiCz]

In....

Nah Im good on the pics

[DynamiCz]

No help with this, have them transport the body to a medical agent
Choppers on ya building, then I unload on the pad like a airlift patient
I draw the master piece up, then do my best work with the pistol
Fam mourning when one arm waving the flame thru the air-that's a candle light vigil
Extra mags for the clip! Public defender running through these new cases
Two straps serve you, when ya chest halfway exposed it ain't a hooter waitress
You probably heard already, in this league I been named a threat
Grab the gun from the desk top, one click let the chrome open up-google internet
Thought I needed help? PGA Tourney, the iron I'm toting around a nine
Had the work applied for, his brains hanging from the window-Now Hiring Sign
You get the fade early, I can show him the gate upstairs ain't pearly
Make this tom a hawk! Have it laid sideways across ya shirt like a braves jersey

[Kill Spree]

Ugghhhh passed out here’s a verse



Dynamicz





Listen faggit
Lucky mag mention, tho there’s nothing this lame pull
Zelph threw his pen in the kitchen, You should stab urself For the shit u bring to the table
Your top kills don’t compare to my Shy murdas . I’m a quiet death force
Takem2school NS’in the only reason U ever got Cred for
You
Have u Hush’d for a DollaSign...u the lamest bitch
Show U the way my Knucks do damage! S’whye u’ll never take the Vic
Plus I stuff ur wife on a full stomach... U mad I can hit quicker
Want break up just hear the Whine N Dine cos I fucked her & didn’t have to buy the bitch dinner
& she stays awake when I Smash, She will not push me
Shed be sorry for the Slip Miks, but that’s originally how You got pussy
Pull up, shoot on him & the clique till they dead, and rot
Slaughter every Bari post so he never even gets back into a contention spot

[Bongo Bear]

Originally Posted by DynamiCz

No help with this, have them transport the body to a medical agent
Choppers on ya building, then I unload on the pad like a airlift patient

Setup nice, punch nice. Overall, nice.

I draw the master piece up, then do my best work with the pistol
Fam mourning when one arm waving the flame thru the air-that's a candle light vigil

A little bit of stretch. Decent though.

Extra mags for the clip! Public defender running through these new cases
Two straps serve you, when ya chest halfway exposed it ain't a hooter waitress

Decent

You probably heard already, in this league I been named a threat
Grab the gun from the desk top, one click let the chrome open up-google internet

This was pretty nice. I like how you brought the line back to netcees sort of.

Thought I needed help? PGA Tourney, the iron I'm toting around a nine
Had the work applied for, his brains hanging from the window-Now Hiring Sign

Good concept. Execution was decent.

You get the fade early, I can show him the gate upstairs ain't pearly
Make this tom a hawk! Have it laid sideways across ya shirt like a braves jersey

Wording could be better. Maybe? I can't think of anything right now but, this is a good ending line.

Ugghhhh passed out here’s a verse

Tic and you must've crawled out of the same bed lol.

Listen faggit
Lucky mag mention, tho there’s nothing this lame pull
Zelph threw his pen in the kitchen, You should stab urself For the shit u bring to the table

If the setup was on point, this would've hit alot harder.

Your top kills don’t compare to my Shy murdas . I’m a quiet death force
Takem2school NS’in the only reason U ever got Cred for

Nice

You
Have u Hush’d for a DollaSign...u the lamest bitch
Show U the way my Knucks do damage! S’whye u’ll never take the Vic

Wasn't feeling this one.

Plus I stuff ur wife on a full stomach... U mad I can hit quicker
Want break up just hear the Whine N Dine cos I fucked her & didn’t have to buy the bitch dinner

This is pretty nice.

& she stays awake when I Smash, She will not push me
Shed be sorry for the Slip Miks, but that’s originally how You got pussy

Ok.

Pull up, shoot on him & the clique till they dead, and rot
Slaughter every Bari post so he never even gets back into a contention spot

Good idea to end your verse with a sting.

Felt like one was alot more developed and solid. Either the opponent didn't have the time, or didn't take the time. This was a decent battle; not close by a hair but, it was relatively close I think. Both could improve on making connections in the lines.

V/DynamiCz

[BodySnatcher]

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No help with this, have them transport the body to a medical agent
Choppers on ya building, then I unload on the pad like a airlift patient
dope
I draw the master piece up, then do my best work with the pistol
Fam mourning when one arm waving the flame thru the air-that's a candle light vigil
not bad
Extra mags for the clip! Public defender running through these new cases
Two straps serve you, when ya chest halfway exposed it ain't a hooter waitress
lolol
You probably heard already, in this league I been named a threat
Grab the gun from the desk top, one click let the chrome open up-google internet
st8
Thought I needed help? PGA Tourney, the iron I'm toting around a nine
Had the work applied for, his brains hanging from the window-Now Hiring Sign
yeah this hit
You get the fade early, I can show him the gate upstairs ain't pearly
Make this tom a hawk! Have it laid sideways across ya shirt like a braves jersey
cool closer





Listen faggit
Lucky mag mention, tho there’s nothing this lame pull
Zelph threw his pen in the kitchen, You should stab urself For the shit u bring to the table
long bar homie
Your top kills don’t compare to my Shy murdas . I’m a quiet death force
Takem2school NS’in the only reason U ever got Cred for
You<<?^^st8
Have u Hush’d for a DollaSign...u the lamest bitch
Show U the way my Knucks do damage! S’whye u’ll never take the Vic
eh
Plus I stuff ur wife on a full stomach... U mad I can hit quicker
Want break up just hear the Whine N Dine cos I fucked her & didn’t have to buy the bitch dinner
long again...but lol
& she stays awake when I Smash, She will not push me
Shed be sorry for the Slip Miks, but that’s originally how You got pussy
eh
Pull up, shoot on him & the clique till they dead, and rot
Slaughter every Bari post so he never even gets back into a contention spot
light

I think Dy took this pretty easy, stay up KS

[Twodrop]

No help with this, have them transport the body to a medical agent
Choppers on ya building, then I unload on the pad like a airlift patient
ya this was nice
I draw the master piece up, then do my best work with the pistol
Fam mourning when one arm waving the flame thru the air-that's a candle light vigil
this was ok
Extra mags for the clip! Public defender running through these new cases
Two straps serve you, when ya chest halfway exposed it ain't a hooter waitress
lol.. just decent for me
You probably heard already, in this league I been named a threat
Grab the gun from the desk top, one click let the chrome open up-google internet
not sure on this one, but ok
Thought I needed help? PGA Tourney, the iron I'm toting around a nine
Had the work applied for, his brains hanging from the window-Now Hiring Sign
yup
You get the fade early, I can show him the gate upstairs ain't pearly
Make this tom a hawk! Have it laid sideways across ya shirt like a braves jersey
ya this works, was kind of a flip on ur bar from last week if I remember, Hollister barz

VS

Listen faggit
Lucky mag mention, tho there’s nothing this lame pull
Zelph threw his pen in the kitchen, You should stab urself For the shit u bring to the table
ha, no
Your top kills don’t compare to my Shy murdas . I’m a quiet death force
Takem2school NS’in the only reason U ever got Cred for
had potential, not feeling this
Have u Hush’d for a DollaSign...u the lamest bitch
Show U the way my Knucks do damage! S’whye u’ll never take the Vic
lol, ok
Plus I stuff ur wife on a full stomach... U mad I can hit quicker
Want break up just hear the Whine N Dine cos I fucked her & didn’t have to buy the bitch dinner
not sure on this one, is 'Whine N Dine' a play on his name? this bar was cool but a little wordy
& she stays awake when I Smash, She will not push me
Shed be sorry for the Slip Miks, but that’s originally how You got pussy
huh? as in, she was cheating when he first fucked her?!
Pull up, shoot on him & the clique till they dead, and rot
Slaughter every Bari post so he never even gets back into a contention spot
naa

v/ Dyna. I think KS was drunk, props for dropping tho. KS obviously is only inspired by pic battles, him vs blue was fire lol.. but props for writing so much on a friday night.

Good shit fellas.

[GUDELJ]

No help with this, have them transport the body to a medical agent
Choppers on ya building, then I unload on the pad like a airlift patient
alright cool
I draw the master piece up, then do my best work with the pistol
Fam mourning when one arm waving the flame thru the air-that's a candle light vigil
this was hard, good shit
Extra mags for the clip! Public defender running through these new cases
Two straps serve you, when ya chest halfway exposed it ain't a hooter waitress
nah wasn’t feelin this one
You probably heard already, in this league I been named a threat
Grab the gun from the desk top, one click let the chrome open up-google internet
Sorry man I wanted to like this more but sometimes I just can’t give you G passes on that 2nd line wording. Decent here
Thought I needed help? PGA Tourney, the iron I'm toting around a nine
Had the work applied for, his brains hanging from the window-Now Hiring Sign
im not seeing the tie in for brains hanging out the window..
You get the fade early, I can show him the gate upstairs ain't pearly
Make this tom a hawk! Have it laid sideways across ya shirt like a braves jersey
this was nice, I had this concept written down but I could never find a way to word it out. Good job on this

Vs


Listen faggit
Lucky mag mention, tho there’s nothing this lame pull
Zelph threw his pen in the kitchen, You should stab urself For the shit u bring to the table
lol no bro
Your top kills don’t compare to my Shy murdas . I’m a quiet death force
Takem2school NS’in the only reason U ever got Cred for
nah you know that’s played
Have u Hush’d for a DollaSign...u the lamest bitch
Show U the way my Knucks do damage! S’whye u’ll never take the Vic
had potential to be nice, decent here on how you did it. Was wordy
Plus I stuff ur wife on a full stomach... U mad I can hit quicker
Want break up just hear the Whine N Dine cos I fucked her & didn’t have to buy the bitch dinner
whine n dine was good but I think you’re confusing it for dine n dash..stop writing drunk
& she stays awake when I Smash, She will not push me
Shed be sorry for the Slip Miks, but that’s originally how You got pussy
alright
Pull up, shoot on him & the clique till they dead, and rot
Slaughter every Bari post so he never even gets back into a contention spot
nah


Idk what spree was on here, Dyna came with a pretty cool verse.


Vote DynamiCz

[Blue Bayou]

Yeah i think Dyna took this one also.. more consistent and i think his concepts were doper and more creative

Really fucking OD'd on gun bars and attack lines tho imo, i guess an entire verse of em is acceptable nowadays but it would be nice to see a variation in punchlines here or there.. regardless cool battle but Dyna had more standouts and took this

Vote - Dynamicz

[Jabari Black]

I’ll edit in bar by bar breakdown but for now:

Dynamicz has a very consistent verse. A lot of creative concepts here. Your wording execution was also very solid here.

Killing spree I liked where you were going with using all of the names throughout your verse but the execution wasn’t there. Had some good concepts but execution and wording really held you back in his one.

Dynamicz was on it and took this one by a decent margin.

Mvgt Dynamicz

[Barcotic]

Originally Posted by DynamiCz

No help with this, have them transport the body to a medical agent
Choppers on ya building, then I unload on the pad like a airlift patient
fresh flip, i like it
I draw the master piece up, then do my best work with the pistol
Fam mourning when one arm waving the flame thru the air-that's a candle light vigil
ehh, ok at best. ill give it to u
Extra mags for the clip! Public defender running through these new cases
Two straps serve you, when ya chest halfway exposed it ain't a hooter waitress
lmao dope
You probably heard already, in this league I been named a threat
Grab the gun from the desk top, one click let the chrome open up-google internet
played af
Thought I needed help? PGA Tourney, the iron I'm toting around a nine
Had the work applied for, his brains hanging from the window-Now Hiring Sign
miss
You get the fade early, I can show him the gate upstairs ain't pearly
Make this tom a hawk! Have it laid sideways across ya shirt like a braves jersey
coo

3 gd punches
1 jab
2 misses

vs

Spree
Lucky mag mention, tho there’s nothing this lame pull
Zelph threw his pen in the kitchen, You should stab urself For the shit u bring to the table
wording killed this, concept was cool but not executed well
Your top kills don’t compare to my Shy murdas . I’m a quiet death force
Takem2school NS’in the only reason U ever got Cred for
You
nah
Have u Hush’d for a DollaSign...u the lamest bitch
Show U the way my Knucks do damage! S’whye u’ll never take the Vic
u been drinking?
Plus I stuff ur wife on a full stomach... U mad I can hit quicker
Want break up just hear the Whine N Dine cos I fucked her & didn’t have to buy the bitch dinner
& she stays awake when I Smash, She will not push me
Shed be sorry for the Slip Miks, but that’s originally how You got pussy
Pull up, shoot on him & the clique till they dead, and rot
Slaughter every Bari post so he never even gets back into a contention spot[/QUOTE]

v/dyna