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dead man -- hawk on a leash
i sat forever wondering on who you became
tried to find a suitable frame - iron wrought, water-stained - for our kodak collection. hopeless, desperate. our sofa was sectional count the days. nobody left but ourselves to carry the decimal you craved marriage, i buried your dreams i realize now my sabotage was very intentional walk in, drop your purse, stare at me resentfully, as i tear my intestines merrily with various chemicals, welcome home bon voyage, please tell Stephanie hi told you close the door behind you, never goodbye told myself it's fine forever, restful reclined called myself a moving van and rented a place where i currently pace, currently hate, currently rhyme currently drink myself into a perfect denial what a shame. but that's okay. it was destined to die the grass is always greener when cemented in lies cemetery boulevard i planned a retreat for when it gets warm enough to pack up and leave if i stay here forever, i'll be silent and sad trying my hand at perpetrating nightly romances but it's old, i find it tiresome, the daily pursuit all i want is comfort. that's what led me to you let me - no, don't let me - i've been doing it wrong questing content for another personal songbird she thinks she wants me, honestly it's somewhat absurd loving me is something that she doesn't deserve i need a change. i really need to open a chapter as lonely as it has to be i've got to adapt. these are diaries and eulogies and history made looking back i've poured myself into this for ages paper pages, digit faded, timeline terabyte sacred i was so unfulfilled with the life we created under pressure, unimpressed, underwhelmed, understated i'd rather live in flux than drown inside of your stasis. not even sure if anybody reads these or not it's a feeling of community like burial plots, for my negligence, neurosis, all the secrets we kept cease and descent. i grew older on the day that i left. hurt makes a human. that's my only belief i've probably got enough to make an army of creatures walking the streets, coughing, bleeding, hawks on a leash waiting for their moment to fly. rest in peace. dead man
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Classic dead man. Like a sneak peak inside the mind of what it is to be a complicated human being. Searching. Longing to belong and feel whole. Only to find what it is he thought he was missing. But now questions it all. #life
Dope stuff, per usual.
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04-23-2018, 03:03 AM | #3 |
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This shit struck home.for me. About.to get this apartment if the ap goes through ok. Anyway. Im not struggling with women issues atm but i can totally remember a time when this shit was spot on. Smh
called myself a moving van and rented a place where i currently pace, currently hate, currently rhyme currently drink myself into a perfect denial what a shame. but that's okay. it was destined to die the grass is always greener when cemented in lies
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Yeah this was all dope.
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This was pretty good. Very easy to read and mechanics are there. Good work on this drop.
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this is talent
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Have you tried calling her? Looking her up? Getting some coffee and finding closure?
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I almost feel quoting this n sharing it on fb so my exes can see it
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"she thinks she wants me, honestly it's somewhat absurd
loving me is something that she doesn't deserve i need a change. i really need to open a chapter as lonely as it has to be i've got to adapt. these are diaries and eulogies and history made looking back i've poured myself into this for ages paper pages, digit faded, timeline terabyte sacred i was so unfulfilled with the life we created under pressure, unimpressed, underwhelmed, understated i'd rather live in flux than drown inside of your stasis." Drake flow on Duppy;? |
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