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06-18-2018, 10:39 AM
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WK7: Incredible 1-2 vs.Cereal 1-0 - Incredible WINS!!
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Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER INCREDIBLE @Incredible @Cereal Last edited by Incredible; 06-18-2018 at 12:25 PM. |
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06-18-2018, 11:07 AM
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killa
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checkity yoselfhealth
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128390 http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128454 http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128452 http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128384 Last edited by Cereal; 06-23-2018 at 01:02 AM. |
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06-18-2018, 11:08 AM
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Going 12
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06-18-2018, 03:52 PM
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You got caution wrapped around you but not for the right things, this a closed scene
Cause when my shots buck its going in... now your quiet, I'm the opposing team My stick shoots hockey pucks out for my protection, call it my goalie Get caught at a stand still but make his body move as if his wipers are on full speed I gotta device that works in my whip not for picking up passagers tho I'll shed light on the subject of you getting murdered, just watch this massacre glow! They'll say its a statement & NO statement bars!! He like "just try to walk in my shoes", but he'd realize we're right about him, if he walked in ours Got nada for ur name, I'll just punch you in the nose have you running to cry home Only thing I have against this shitty name since I typed it for the mag...its saved in my phone My style is in its golden state, you date back to the cavaliers, I'm not a worrier I fucked ur bitch while standing 4 times in a row and never let the Cavs Warrior Last edited by Incredible; 06-18-2018 at 10:01 PM. |
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06-18-2018, 11:21 PM
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killa
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I aint inta biting, though Jack Jack is nuts.. I might as well cover him violet And claim a CRIMSON river as such.. Such is, i am down with the Dis-in/uncle,.. fact Chris Bennoit is still waiting for Incredible Hart and family to BUCKLE.. BUt wait there is more, i bust 'rounds like buck shots in the reign --- ALL fire--- this way for DUMBO leaked by a peanut's hands i cap him 'n put the feather back in place.. Dust of the plate this HOLMES is coming home I'll run through this puncho like i would receive a pack of smokes.. I'll'a'tar'raison aside i plan to spit in Incredible's mouth just so when i read this back "it comes out as a SPEAK & SPELL" sound So here it is MR MR offer oreo, held by technology under.. Incredible is such false hope (Captain Planet said keep the loot, and plunder) |
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06-20-2018, 03:30 AM
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Cereal is Candy, correct? The guy who was banned for spamming the BA forum?
Anyways, Wasn't feeling much from his verse, a couple attempts, first 3 bars had potential but missed. Favorite from incred was wipers line.. Wanted to like massacre glow but the punch missed for me. Props to both for showing, v/ Incredible Last edited by Twodrop; 06-21-2018 at 12:29 PM. |
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06-20-2018, 05:04 AM
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I might as well cover him violet And claim a CRIMSON river as such.. A Incredibles scheme could've had heavy potential. I'm not feeling the way you used this at all though. Such is, i am down with the Dis-in/uncle,.. fact Chris Bennoit is still waiting for Incredible Hart and family to BUCKLE.. I like the second part. BUt wait there is more, i bust 'rounds like buck shots in the reign --- ALL fire--- this way for DUMBO leaked by a peanut's hands i cap him 'n put the feather back in place.. I like this kind of. Fell flat to me but, I see how it had potential. Dust of the plate this HOLMES is coming home I'll run through this puncho like i would receive a pack of smokes.. Didn't like this. I'll'a'tar'raison aside i plan to spit in Incredible's mouth just so when i read this back "it comes out as a SPEAK & SPELL" sound Didn't like this I think both needed work on connecting and wording the bars better. My vote is for Incredible. He was more cohesive to me.
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06-20-2018, 07:05 PM
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DMS—Diddled My Stick
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Cereal had simpler rhyme schemes, and other fundamentals.
V/ Incredible |
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06-21-2018, 09:36 AM
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You got caution wrapped around you but not for the right things, this a closed scene
Cause when my shots buck its going in... now your quiet, I'm the opposing team dece concept My stick shoots hockey pucks out for my protection, call it my goalie Get caught at a stand still but make his body move as if his wipers are on full speed fresh attack line, didn't love the wording tho I gotta device that works in my whip not for picking up passagers tho I'll shed light on the subject of you getting murdered, just watch this massacre glow! much better wording here, but kinda blah They'll say its a statement & NO statement bars!! He like "just try to walk in my shoes", but he'd realize we're right about him, if he walked in ours not feelin Got nada for ur name, I'll just punch you in the nose have you running to cry home Only thing I have against this shitty name since I typed it for the mag...its saved in my phone okay My style is in its golden state, you date back to the cavaliers, I'm not a worrier I fucked ur bitch while standing 4 times in a row and never let the Cavs Warrior decent attempt with the concept/creativity vs. I aint inta biting, though Jack Jack is nuts.. I might as well cover him violet And claim a CRIMSON river as such.. don't get it, punch light tho and needed to be worded harsher Such is, i am down with the Dis-in/uncle,.. fact Chris Bennoit is still waiting for Incredible Hart and family to BUCKLE.. nah BUt wait there is more, i bust 'rounds like buck shots in the reign --- ALL fire--- this way for DUMBO leaked by a peanut's hands i cap him 'n put the feather back in place.. conceptually I'm feeling this but it could've been done better and harsher Dust of the plate this HOLMES is coming home I'll run through this puncho like i would receive a pack of smokes.. poncho? I don't get the connection here tbh I'll'a'tar'raison aside i plan to spit in Incredible's mouth just so when i read this back "it comes out as a SPEAK & SPELL" sound not feelin So here it is MR MR offer oreo, held by technology under.. Incredible is such false hope (Captain Planet said keep the loot, and plunder) nah Incredible won. Better punches and less filler... cereal has some decent creativity but it was very scatterbrained and nothing was formulated to hit Vote - Incredible |
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