06-12-2018, 02:02 AM | #1 |
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Gateway To Glimmer
Stereo bump to the modern classics,
Im watchiing ESPN classic with music blasting. dish out each hit, each twist & fadeaway. playbacks make the tape, posters of the players play. what you got to say to J when court in session. I support the sport in question, I board em obsessive. support their possessions, some say J assist. you know how mundane J can get, some say J a kid. J son kids and make them ride the bench. go ahead & try for kicks...you gonna admire this. I lay up where the center of your universe is. up & under off that glass while you usually brick... upsetting my finesse so now you going to learn soldier. dropped the ball on this one, guess you a turnover. you gotta learn order, ambidextrous with the backspin. this play I act in got them thinking Im trapped in... with my perfect traction I make em crossover. Your shots over... You gonna D J, then you better go for the record. get them cuts & do your best for good measure... the crowds hands start to clap like the ghetto backboard.. how you gonna handle the circle if you dont get to fast forward?
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06-12-2018, 11:55 PM | #2 |
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This was a fun read and I liked the refreshing angle you came with good looks my man
Edit: rhymes and flow on point as always
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06-13-2018, 04:56 PM | #3 |
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Yes this was also nice i liked this very much
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06-16-2018, 07:05 AM | #4 |
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Tell me you ain't a Golden State fan, for the love of God tell me!!?? Lol.
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07-01-2018, 05:41 PM | #5 |
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Huh?
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07-03-2018, 01:54 AM | #6 |
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your last cypher post was leaps and bounds better than this. It was good.
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07-03-2018, 09:26 AM | #7 |
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Just meant 'cause it was Basketball themed, was hopin' you wasn't a Warriors fan as I support Cleveland & look what happened there lol...shit was like 4 zip!
As for the piece...I liked it, you have a really easy to catch flow when you hit your stride...& you often find this middle ground, where it's not basic...nor complex, it's very relatable to the reader...shit resonates fam. Stay you bro. |
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This was clever. All the basketball references and double entandres made this an entertaining read. Your flow was also crisp and your wording was generally well articulated. Thanks for sharing.
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