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Old 06-12-2018, 02:02 AM   #1
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Stereo bump to the modern classics,
Im watchiing ESPN classic with music blasting.
dish out each hit, each twist & fadeaway.
playbacks make the tape, posters of the players play.
what you got to say to J when court in session.
I support the sport in question, I board em obsessive.
support their possessions, some say J assist.
you know how mundane J can get, some say J a kid.
J son kids and make them ride the bench.
go ahead & try for kicks...you gonna admire this.
I lay up where the center of your universe is.
up & under off that glass while you usually brick...
upsetting my finesse so now you going to learn soldier.
dropped the ball on this one, guess you a turnover.
you gotta learn order, ambidextrous with the backspin.
this play I act in got them thinking Im trapped in...
with my perfect traction I make em crossover.
Your shots over...
You gonna D J, then you better go for the record.
get them cuts & do your best for good measure...
the crowds hands start to clap like the ghetto backboard..
how you gonna handle the circle if you dont get to fast forward?
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Old 06-12-2018, 11:55 PM   #2
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This was a fun read and I liked the refreshing angle you came with good looks my man


Edit: rhymes and flow on point as always
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Old 06-13-2018, 04:56 PM   #3
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Yes this was also nice i liked this very much
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Old 06-16-2018, 07:05 AM   #4
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Tell me you ain't a Golden State fan, for the love of God tell me!!?? Lol.
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Old 07-01-2018, 05:41 PM   #5
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Tell me you ain't a Golden State fan, for the love of God tell me!!?? Lol.
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your last cypher post was leaps and bounds better than this. It was good.
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Old 07-03-2018, 09:26 AM   #7
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Just meant 'cause it was Basketball themed, was hopin' you wasn't a Warriors fan as I support Cleveland & look what happened there lol...shit was like 4 zip!

As for the piece...I liked it, you have a really easy to catch flow when you hit your stride...& you often find this middle ground, where it's not basic...nor complex, it's very relatable to the reader...shit resonates fam.

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This was clever. All the basketball references and double entandres made this an entertaining read. Your flow was also crisp and your wording was generally well articulated. Thanks for sharing.
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