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05-21-2018, 10:06 PM | #1 |
White Earl
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Past, Present, Phuture. (@Eng.. 15 year old FIRE..The Oldest shit i remember writing word for word cause id spit it a lot)
Past..
Was born then i grew, confused from age 2 all the way through day school Was never the chump, i kept my hands up like raised roofs An enraged youth, evade truth, i was like whoo needs it, what reason A disturbed human being, rumor breeding, fire spittin -akuma breathing Motivated by mostly hatred, was known to play with ghosts and demons A relentless menace, i couldnt keep friends -had aggressive friendships Do you get the message? Attencion defasite during classes Not to mention hyperactive, indeed my life was maddness Adrenaline kept kickin in, always force fed prescriptions of ritaline Of course, it was often my derivitive, this is how i reminisce, ive got the chills.. They kept me drugged up when i was younger, no wonder im still poppin pills Rhymin real, until im embraced a deal for spittin, so make a real.decision My 5 senses on the track help you hear, smell, touch, taste & feel the wisdom Presently on probation, drug procrastination has me mad.. Perhaps ill relapse after i pass rehab, uncertain Still sick in the mind, sick when i rhyme I had to buy a flu shot before theyed sell me a mic Went to jail, even in my cell i would write Scratchin on the walls with a clever device I caught my suntan through the window when the weather was nice Present.. My veins run cold and bluish, frozen fluids, i cant maintain composure stupid Searchin for sanity cause ive been known to lose it, disowned by music cause musically ive exposed the trueness, Im the truest with 2 cents My life story begins where the good news ends My attitude changes frequently, like a frequancy Ive recently lost control of all reasoning, reason being.. I could care less about people then we did about jesus bleeding Indecent demons keep increasing the beef im seeking Beefin with priests beliefs for thinkin i wont leave religious beings extinct Be that as it may, im as bad as they say.. Ill treat your life how you should treat the mic, pass it away Placed in a casket to stay, cast of the face of the planet to a place where ur stranded, there is no escapin fate when im after my prey Im preyin on first rate mercenaries yo, youll end up in a worst case scenario Fuck san rio, everywhdre you look the sand meets the air in your nose Ill make you swallow your pride, and hurt the glands in your throat And now you know where i stand as a man on his own My companions are nowhere around, like a ghost town My spirit so broken i feel like im closed down My smile decomposed to a frown, like depression -im down Stick out my head and cut my neck, or put the fuckin rope around Future.. Rest assured, im still reppin hard, armed with an ill repitoire, weapons drawn Drawin pints of blood until the blood pressures gone No need for heartbeats dog, lets evolve Im pressin onwards, farther, much harder, always wanted to be a father So I left the sun martyred, sex changed to a daughter raped her and she gave birth to a star much darker Im a dark lord, so get that straight.. a maniac on the track, no need for skitz on tapes Theres enough skitzophrenics in the mix all day Im the futures nuisance, a bomb with two pins Whenever i go off i seem to lose friends If the poor ate feces -i wouldnt give 2 shits Fuck a donation, dont waste it, im killing dimes off, tryina get my soul mated Bone breakin with low patience, do me a favor, keep this between you and i I no longer have time for humankind, they left me crucified, so fuck your pride Go and save yourselves, my miracle makin tubes are tied, go str8 to hell Watch my saints rebel, cause no ones loyal.. In the future, theyll shoot ya over soap and foil, i wrote the moral These are the views that i choose, so die motherfucker, theres no tomoro
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05-22-2018, 02:04 PM | #2 |
rhyme capsule.
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yo keeping it real your style hasn't changed that much except you're a lot less rough around the edges now.
if i posted the oldest stuff i wrote, about a decade ago, it'd be unrecognizable. dope shit, anyway, felt like a blast from the past. |
05-22-2018, 06:27 PM | #4 |
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Okay this was okay but dont put yourself down man you must have something everyone has something i mean look at what you just wrote that was really clever you need to point more towards your strengths.... dont let the world get you down man you must have something everybody got something whoever they are wherever they are..... even if your locked in a cell er whatever the last 5 years er whatever you got something no matter what.... life is hard i realize this but everybody got problems and its cool to talk about them but i just would love to hear what your good at even if its nothing what do you actually have to offer me...... what can i build off of you or what can i learn from you.... that would be cool to hear about....
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05-22-2018, 08:40 PM | #5 | |
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I thought u spazz'd here for being 15, multis/flow is crazy, content is on point. I liked it, 8/10. |
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05-23-2018, 12:38 AM | #6 |
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Lol @ this 2trip nigga...
This was dope Geno...like Eng said not a lot has changed apart from you polishin' shit upwards a little, I dug it all tbh...if I wrote like this over a decade ago my rep power would now be in the green lol. |
05-23-2018, 12:43 PM | #7 |
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I wasn’t writing like this at 15 lol mad props yo, this shit was helly long too I’m surprised you remembered it with all the drugs you’ve consumed. Not assuming you’ve done drugs but but yk what it is. Good shit.
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05-23-2018, 12:44 PM | #8 |
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2 trip killing these feedbacks tho
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06-09-2018, 06:30 PM | #9 |
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This is good for being only 15 when you wrote it.
Or. 15 years ago however old you were.... Let's be clear though - you're much better now. Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 06-09-2018 at 06:53 PM. |
06-13-2018, 04:59 AM | #10 |
White Earl
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Thats bruh
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