WK 6: BodySnatcher 3-2 vs. bleak 2-2 - BodySnatcher WINS!!

Incredible · 06-11-2018, 08:58 AM

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due FRIDAY JUNE 15th! and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Edit Rules:

1st Person can edit until his opponent drops
2nd Person can edit until the first vote is posted

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!
THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER INCREDIBLE

@BodySnatcher @bleak

bleak · 06-11-2018, 03:59 PM

Oh cool wanna do pics? Don't think you have posted one here yet

BodySnatcher · 06-11-2018, 08:23 PM

I have a pic somewhere on here posted under team usa. I'm on a short week but we can do whatever you like. Ill have 12 ready in a day or two.

bleak · 06-11-2018, 10:22 PM

Let's do reg that shit was kinda roasted already

BodySnatcher · 06-15-2018, 06:37 PM

you took too long, 16

U in foreign territory & this shit’ll get Hostel...I came to brawl
When the guns draw…u’ll literally be in building when this lead paint the wall
I’m not a saint at all, I spray & pray that I hit the right jerk
If I miss I bet the muzzle flash'll give his fat ass a seizure...this is light work
U need a life perk...so next time u drop a gym & gather more fame
Don’t complain...cuz the only thing holding u back in life is a door frame
I’m appalled by your game...I’ve laughed to death & I’m dead still
U been running in place so long...it should be a meme of u NEXT to a treadmill
I should get ya head peel....& ur G is a bluff something I must call
Cuz the last Body YOU caught was at fat camp...attempting a trust fall
This metal won’t leave a bone-dry...every shot I burn, efficient B
When the calcium...he’ll get lead poison after I cure his iron deficiency
Enough metal to supply an iron dispensary...my bullets seize kids
But if u spray a can...ur mom’ll beat ur ass for eating all the cheese whiz
Boy I squeeze lids...shots to ur body like u need to get checked up
Leave ur mouth open & jaw hanging like Draymond after you get Tec’d up

Twodrop · 06-17-2018, 03:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BodySnatcher

U in foreign territory & this shit’ll get Hostel...I came to brawl
When the guns draw…u’ll literally be in building when this lead paint the wall
this was coo
I’m not a saint at all, I spray & pray that I hit the right jerk
If I miss I bet the muzzle flash'll give his fat ass a seizure...this is light work
ya, liked this
U need a life perk...so next time u drop a gym & gather more fame
Don’t complain...cuz the only thing holding u back in life is a door frame
is this a gym/gem wp? If so it's a stretch and the bar would be dope w/o it, cool line tho
I’m appalled by your game...I’ve laughed to death & I’m dead still
U been running in place so long...it should be a meme of u NEXT to a treadmill
light, but effective
I should get ya head peel....& ur G is a bluff something I must call
Cuz the last Body YOU caught was at fat camp...attempting a trust fall
lol, this was probably my fav line so far
This metal won’t leave a bone-dry...every shot I burn, efficient B
When the calcium...he’ll get lead poison after I cure his iron deficiency
I feel like it's been done, but this was slick. Well done, tie ins r crzy
Enough metal to supply an iron dispensary...my bullets seize kids
But if u spray a can...ur mom’ll beat ur ass for eating all the cheese whiz
reminded me of muffs line from the roast, fks w/ it tho
Boy I squeeze lids...shots to ur body like u need to get checked up
Leave ur mouth open & jaw hanging like Draymond after you get Tec’d up
lol dope imagery, I can picture Draymond in awe now

Wow, really bummed Bleak couldn't show... Body went in as per usual and Bleak would've had his hands full this week. The way almost every bars setup followed the rhyme scheme of the previous line made the verse that much better.

Very cool read. Props for showing. Good luck going forward.

GUDELJ · 06-17-2018, 06:32 PM

U in foreign territory & this shit’ll get Hostel...I came to brawl
When the guns draw…u’ll literally be in building when this lead paint the wall
wasnt feelin this
I’m not a saint at all, I spray & pray that I hit the right jerk
If I miss I bet the muzzle flash'll give his fat ass a seizure...this is light work
ok
U need a life perk...so next time u drop a gym & gather more fame
Don’t complain...cuz the only thing holding u back in life is a door frame
lmao this is so stupid but it made me laugh
I’m appalled by your game...I’ve laughed to death & I’m dead still
U been running in place so long...it should be a meme of u NEXT to a treadmill
decent
I should get ya head peel....& ur G is a bluff something I must call
Cuz the last Body YOU caught was at fat camp...attempting a trust fall
lol this was cool, beginning to OD on fat jokes tho & without a pic
This metal won’t leave a bone-dry...every shot I burn, efficient B
When the calcium...he’ll get lead poison after I cure his iron deficiency
alright this is good shit, cool wordplay
Enough metal to supply an iron dispensary...my bullets seize kids
But if u spray a can...ur mom’ll beat ur ass for eating all the cheese whiz
no no no noooooo
Boy I squeeze lids...shots to ur body like u need to get checked up
Leave ur mouth open & jaw hanging like Draymond after you get Tec’d up
lol pretty cool

Pretty cool verse, shame bleak didn’t show because he’s usually good at showing. I even typed up some bullshart in my battle just so I wouldn’t get a no show. That calcium line was dope and LOTB. PROPS

Flow · 06-18-2018, 04:02 AM

No idea why door frame aint gettin props. Was funny as fuck.

Cereal · 06-18-2018, 04:34 AM

body:
If I miss I bet the muzzle flash'll give his fat ass a seizure...this is light work
nice good word play and flipping of such.. very descriptive and impressive..
Cuz the last Body YOU caught was at fat camp...attempting a trust fall
top line.. woazers..
When the calcium...he’ll get lead poison after I cure his iron deficiency
tight line there..
cheese whiz
Boy I squeeze lids.
nice aswell..
all in all good.. keep it up..

06-11-2018, 08:58 AM	#1
Incredible Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 1,482 Battle Record: 6-15 Rep Power: 25972892	WK 6: BodySnatcher 3-2 vs. bleak 2-2 - BodySnatcher WINS!! Rules Due Dates: Verses are due FRIDAY JUNE 15th! and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Edit Rules: 1st Person can edit until his opponent drops 2nd Person can edit until the first vote is posted Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER INCREDIBLE @BodySnatcher @bleak

06-11-2018, 08:23 PM	#3
BodySnatcher Hail Mary Haymakers Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: You know where I be at Posts: 1,785 Battle Record: 17-7 Champed - BAL Roast - Battle Arena League - BAL Season Champ Rep Power: 3840895	I have a pic somewhere on here posted under team usa. I'm on a short week but we can do whatever you like. Ill have 12 ready in a day or two.

06-15-2018, 06:37 PM	#5
BodySnatcher Hail Mary Haymakers Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: You know where I be at Posts: 1,785 Battle Record: 17-7 Champed - BAL Roast - Battle Arena League - BAL Season Champ Rep Power: 3840895	you took too long, 16 U in foreign territory & this shit’ll get Hostel...I came to brawl When the guns draw…u’ll literally be in building when this lead paint the wall I’m not a saint at all, I spray & pray that I hit the right jerk If I miss I bet the muzzle flash'll give his fat ass a seizure...this is light work U need a life perk...so next time u drop a gym & gather more fame Don’t complain...cuz the only thing holding u back in life is a door frame I’m appalled by your game...I’ve laughed to death & I’m dead still U been running in place so long...it should be a meme of u NEXT to a treadmill I should get ya head peel....& ur G is a bluff something I must call Cuz the last Body YOU caught was at fat camp...attempting a trust fall This metal won’t leave a bone-dry...every shot I burn, efficient B When the calcium...he’ll get lead poison after I cure his iron deficiency Enough metal to supply an iron dispensary...my bullets seize kids But if u spray a can...ur mom’ll beat ur ass for eating all the cheese whiz Boy I squeeze lids...shots to ur body like u need to get checked up Leave ur mouth open & jaw hanging like Draymond after you get Tec’d up

06-18-2018, 04:34 AM	#9
Cereal killa Join Date: Jun 2018 Posts: 820 Battle Record: 1-6 Rep Power: 1312296	body: If I miss I bet the muzzle flash'll give his fat ass a seizure...this is light work nice good word play and flipping of such.. very descriptive and impressive.. Cuz the last Body YOU caught was at fat camp...attempting a trust fall top line.. woazers.. When the calcium...he’ll get lead poison after I cure his iron deficiency tight line there.. cheese whiz Boy I squeeze lids. nice aswell.. all in all good.. keep it up..