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Old 06-04-2018, 11:21 PM   #1
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Old 06-08-2018, 09:49 PM   #2
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Ffs just lookin at Bleak an the feeling of vomit increases
Such a fat slob if he ate Witherspoon its to swallow more Reeses peices
Fuck me, you three look like you're your own fuckin species
Wit cargos cut off at the knee like she'll be when her legs lose to diabetes
might throw heavy in RL but in text you aint even a scratch kid
stomach more suckered in than you agreein to makin this match pics
Cus im mad slick, so how would i ever lose to some fat bitch
Shiiit... even that band on your wrist looks like its probably gastric
You a Holdor lookin faggot, no wonder you struggle writing
When he said "honeycomb over" he didnt mean he wanted her hair like it!
N i cant even tell if that was a lake n yall had jus jumped in
Or if those water marks jus the dribble that you had to wipe off her chin

Will add an extra bar if you aint matched when i wake up
I got 12 more if you decide to step up though, im game
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Old 06-08-2018, 11:47 PM   #3
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Better than Knuck, so...
10 for Slytherin? Prof. McG with sticks, I will cease this Flow scam.
&&&THESE 10 points are hollow...THIS^^ is if Hogwarts was a rehab program
Might as well be German fags, alchy twinks need vests that sparkle
visit THEIR part of Europe to find that sausage &beer goes best when gargled
Won't beat around the bush, I'll put face to brick &son this maggot
I'd go straight for the neck but there is barely 1 amongst these faggots
You look lost, bud. Like they forced you here to be creepy vultures
Straight facts: This looks like the poster to warn against campus rape culture
I welcome ocks with arms, my creed is to smother opposition
You faggots got Arms Wide Open in prep for a Creed cover competition
My submission was a perfect vista. You sent an early 00's soft rock band
I'd say send a Natural Setting to match, but y'all at home w/ fags in all hands

Jay is the one in the middle of this circlejerk
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Old 06-09-2018, 03:44 AM   #4
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at first glance both of u guys have very weird approaches to pic battling. veru much different from each other to. not saying thats bad... but im like ok.. i gotta really sit down n break this down

fs just lookin at Bleak an the feeling of vomit increases
Such a fat slob if he ate Witherspoon its to swallow more Reeses peices
( i see the reese/ witherspoon wp and association. but the whole idea of eating reeses pieces witherspoon...is like.. hmm idk the more i think on it the more its kind of funny to me LMAO. ima give it a pass..but not a definite quoteable...its above average)
Fuck me, you three look like you're your own fuckin species
Wit cargos cut off at the knee like she'll be when her legs lose to diabetes
(lol. could of worded this different but i like it)
might throw heavy in RL but in text you aint even a scratch kid
stomach more suckered in than you agreein to makin this match pics
(ha, )
Cus im mad slick, so how would i ever lose to some fat bitch
Shiiit... even that band on your wrist looks like its probably gastric
( this is subtle, not that hard but its a quirky jab)
You a Holdor lookin faggot, no wonder you struggle writing
When he said "honeycomb over" he didnt mean he wanted her hair like it!
(lmaoooooooooo)
N i cant even tell if that was a lake n yall had jus jumped in
Or if those water marks jus the dribble that you had to wipe off her chin
(no, wording was shot. and i dont like this at all)

lol.. jay you could did so much more with some of those but u still did good

10 for Slytherin? Prof. McG with sticks, I will cease this Flow scam.
&&&THESE 10 points are hollow...THIS^^ is if Hogwarts was a rehab program
(ehh? this was all over the place to me..didnt reign it in imo..only part that made sense to me was the latter part of the punch)
Might as well be German fags, alchy twinks need vests that sparkle
visit THEIR part of Europe to find that sausage &beer goes best when gargled
(, ok)
Won't beat around the bush, I'll put face to brick &son this maggot
I'd go straight for the neck but there is barely 1 amongst these faggots
(lol haha here we go)
You look lost, bud. Like they forced you here to be creepy vultures
Straight facts: This looks like the poster to warn against campus rape culture
(ha, i like the angle)
I welcome ocks with arms, my creed is to smother opposition
You faggots got Arms Wide Open in prep for a Creed cover competition
(whats the arms wide open tie in? an album name? idk shit about creed but it kinda does i guess..ok)
My submission was a perfect vista. You sent an early 00's soft rock band
I'd say send a Natural Setting to match, but y'all at home w/ fags in all hands
(awww man kinda dropped the ball w/ the yall at home w/ fags in all hands..thats just not hitting to me tbh)

interesting battle, bleak told me to vote in chat so i jumped in here.

honest opinion but i got jays 3 quotes to bleaks 2

v/ jay
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Old 06-09-2018, 02:23 PM   #5
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Both were funny. Flow edged it for me with more hits.
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Ffs just lookin at Bleak an the feeling of vomit increases
Such a fat slob if he ate Witherspoon its to swallow more Reeses pieces

LOL this was solid

Fuck me, you three look like you're your own fuckin species
Wit cargos cut off at the knee like she'll be when her legs lose to diabetes

Nice

might throw heavy in RL but in text you aint even a scratch kid
stomach more suckered in than you agreein to makin this match pics

Lmao yoooo!

Cus im mad slick, so how would i ever lose to some fat bitch
Shiiit... even that band on your wrist looks like its probably gastric

Decent here

You a Holdor lookin faggot, no wonder you struggle writing
When he said "honeycomb over" he didnt mean he wanted her hair like it!

Lmao nice

N i cant even tell if that was a lake n yall had jus jumped in
Or if those water marks jus the dribble that you had to wipe off her chin

Decent closer

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Better than Knuck, so...
10 for Slytherin? Prof. McG with sticks, I will cease this Flow scam.
&&&THESE 10 points are hollow...THIS^^ is if Hogwarts was a rehab program

A lot going on here, but this was coo

Might as well be German fags, alchy twinks need vests that sparkle
visit THEIR part of Europe to find that sausage &beer goes best when gargled

Nahhh

Won't beat around the bush, I'll put face to brick &son this maggot
I'd go straight for the neck but there is barely 1 amongst these faggots

Lmao this is funny

You look lost, bud. Like they forced you here to be creepy vultures
Straight facts: This looks like the poster to warn against campus rape culture

Lol this ight

I welcome ocks with arms, my creed is to smother opposition
You faggots got Arms Wide Open in prep for a Creed cover competition

Lightwork, but its decent tho

My submission was a perfect vista. You sent an early 00's soft rock band
I'd say send a Natural Setting to match, but y'all at home w/ fags in all hands

Lol ok closer

This shit here was funny, but far as harsh goes, yeah Flow got tooo harsh in some areas of his verse. Lol this was a setup bleak! Good shit to both tho I got flow here with more harsh stings. Both came funny as hell and had a nice verse tho, props to both!

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Ffs just lookin at Bleak an the feeling of vomit increases
Such a fat slob if he ate Witherspoon its to swallow more Reeses peices

(Lol I want to hate on this so bad but it’s kinda funny. My critique is that the Reese Witherspoon has no tie in and the wp wasn’t perfect. I’m letting this slide. This was okay)

Fuck me, you three look like you're your own fuckin species
Wit cargos cut off at the knee like she'll be when her legs lose to diabetes

(Lol this one was funny)

might throw heavy in RL but in text you aint even a scratch kid
stomach more suckered in than you agreein to makin this match pics

(Decent. Funny. Could be a geographical thing but here, you would say “sucked in” not “suckered it”. I still get the point though)

Cus im mad slick, so how would i ever lose to some fat bitch
Shiiit... even that band on your wrist looks like its probably gastric

(Lol not bad. Jab but I liked it)

You a Holdor lookin faggot, no wonder you struggle writing
When he said "honeycomb over" he didnt mean he wanted her hair like it!

(HA! Nigga clowning now! This is pretty dope)

N i cant even tell if that was a lake n yall had jus jumped in
Or if those water marks jus the dribble that you had to wipe off her chin

(I like the attempt to incorporate something in the background but this one missed. The execution was off on this one)




10 for Slytherin? Prof. McG with sticks, I will cease this Flow scam.
&&&THESE 10 points are hollow...THIS^^ is if Hogwarts was a rehab program

(This was okay. The execution hurt this one. I appreciate the attempt to punch in the setup but you tried to do too much with too little space and it felt really scattered. Not sure what the 10 points refer to. The punch wasn’t crazy but it saved the bar imo)

Might as well be German fags, alchy twinks need vests that sparkle
visit THEIR part of Europe to find that sausage &beer goes best when gargled

(My b but I’m missing something here. I don’t get what sausage and beer goes best when gargles refers to)

Won't beat around the bush, I'll put face to brick &son this maggot
I'd go straight for the neck but there is barely 1 amongst these faggots

(Lol nice)

You look lost, bud. Like they forced you here to be creepy vultures
Straight facts: This looks like the poster to warn against campus rape culture

(Lmao facts. I like this one too)

I welcome ocks with arms, my creed is to smother opposition
You faggots got Arms Wide Open in prep for a Creed cover competition

(Dang I thought you could have done something way better than this. The concept itself was a but weird and I don’t think it was executed the best)

My submission was a perfect vista. You sent an early 00's soft rock band
I'd say send a Natural Setting to match, but y'all at home w/ fags in all hands

(Concept was pretty clever but I think you fumbled it. The punch just wasn’t there)


I liked this battle. It was pretty close but Flow was consistent enough to squeak out a win. I think Bleak DEFINITELY had the heavier punches but Flow has fewer misses.

I think Bleak is dangerous af. Concepts are there, creative af, and can really land some haymakers but I think you get in your own way some times with the wording and execution.

I think Flow had took a slight step down from his previous two battles but still had a good showing. I think Flow’s biggest obstacle will be being able to produce haymakers when he doesn’t have personal angle on the guy.

Overall good battle. Both y’all niggas had me laughing but Flow Edged it.

Mvgt: Flow
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Ffs just lookin at Bleak an the feeling of vomit increases
Such a fat slob if he ate Witherspoon its to swallow more Reeses peices
lol, ok
Fuck me, you three look like you're your own fuckin species
Wit cargos cut off at the knee like she'll be when her legs lose to diabetes
coo
might throw heavy in RL but in text you aint even a scratch kid
stomach more suckered in than you agreein to makin this match pics
liked this, dope
Cus im mad slick, so how would i ever lose to some fat bitch
Shiiit... even that band on your wrist looks like its probably gastric
ok
You a Holdor lookin faggot, no wonder you struggle writing
When he said "honeycomb over" he didnt mean he wanted her hair like it!
fire
N i cant even tell if that was a lake n yall had jus jumped in
Or if those water marks jus the dribble that you had to wipe off her chin
eh closer

vs.

10 for Slytherin? Prof. McG with sticks, I will cease this Flow scam.
&&&THESE 10 points are hollow...THIS^^ is if Hogwarts was a rehab program
see what u did, I fk w/ it
Might as well be German fags, alchy twinks need vests that sparkle
visit THEIR part of Europe to find that sausage &beer goes best when gargled
this was coo
Won't beat around the bush, I'll put face to brick &son this maggot
I'd go straight for the neck but there is barely 1 amongst these faggots
yup, lol
You look lost, bud. Like they forced you here to be creepy vultures
Straight facts: This looks like the poster to warn against campus rape culture
ok
I welcome ocks with arms, my creed is to smother opposition
You faggots got Arms Wide Open in prep for a Creed cover competition
lol...ok
My submission was a perfect vista. You sent an early 00's soft rock band
I'd say send a Natural Setting to match, but y'all at home w/ fags in all hands
na.. didn't like this

Flows punches were just stinging harder. Both verses were enjoyable enough, thought flow got this one though.

v/Flow
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Ffs just lookin at Bleak an the feeling of vomit increases
Such a fat slob if he ate Witherspoon its to swallow more Reeses pieces
ffs = for fuk sake I’m guessing? Dunno wasn’t really feeling this line
Fuck me, you three look like you're your own fuckin species
Wit cargos cut off at the knee like she'll be when her legs lose to diabetes
nah bro those are str8 soccer player calves. Muscular ass legs, the punch would have been nice if there wasn’t so much Braun in her legs
might throw heavy in RL but in text you aint even a scratch kid
stomach more suckered in than you agreein to makin this match pics
niceeee
Cus im mad slick, so how would i ever lose to some fat bitch
Shiiit... even that band on your wrist looks like its probably gastric
lmao nice
You a Holdor lookin faggot, no wonder you struggle writing
When he said "honeycomb over" he didnt mean he wanted her hair like it!
lol alright
N i cant even tell if that was a lake n yall had jus jumped in
Or if those water marks jus the dribble that you had to wipe off her chin
wasnt feelin this



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Better than Knuck, so...
10 for Slytherin? Prof. McG with sticks, I will cease this Flow scam.
&&&THESE 10 points are hollow...THIS^^ is if Hogwarts was a rehab program
nah brother wasn’t feelin this
Might as well be German fags, alchy twinks need vests that sparkle
visit THEIR part of Europe to find that sausage &beer goes best when gargled
sausage and beer concept was good but the rest of the punch hurt it a lil. Still overall decent
Won't beat around the bush, I'll put face to brick &son this maggot
I'd go straight for the neck but there is barely 1 amongst these faggots
alright
You look lost, bud. Like they forced you here to be creepy vultures
Straight facts: This looks like the poster to warn against campus rape culture
lol I liked this
I welcome ocks with arms, my creed is to smother opposition
You faggots got Arms Wide Open in prep for a Creed cover competition
wasnt feelin this
My submission was a perfect vista. You sent an early 00's soft rock band
I'd say send a Natural Setting to match, but y'all at home w/ fags in all hands
nah

First off, props to Flo Real pullin off the Dani Carvajal look, I dig it bru


This was a cool battle, it’s always a bit tough for me to judge on pic battles cause it’s not really my thing but it was nice reading something different. A lot of good jokes in here. I have flo with 3 notable lines and bleak with 2 as well as 1 decent. Both had the same number of misses but flo has the harder hitting punches here imo. Both of you did nice and bleak trust me Man I see you improving each week. Pics seems to be your forte tbh, maybe try doing it more often if your opponent is up to it. Flo also has a smoother verse that was worded better and flowed good, at times bleak had some iffy wording or execution like in hogwarts line for example. Overall good showing guys and props.

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Bleak: Hogwarts, rape culture. Closer

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