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Old 04-29-2018, 12:19 PM   #1
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I used to be a opiate wreck, now i write bars no one can test
Let the gauge open ya chest, gunsmoke choke you to death
Djinn in the flesh, gut you inside out where you live in your bed
Jump rope witcha crimson instestines, a significant message
I can sin with the pen, repent, or wage all out war with my words
Paint a picture crystal clear, shmear it, or type a porcelain verse
Destroy a whole crew -not a morsel of force, a horseman, a ghost
An orphan who wrote, swung excalibre, thrust my sword in the stone
Important to know, gave my cell phone to e.t. to call homies
Im springstein and bon jovi, a winged demon, invoke me
Grody, ugly as fuck, youd think my father slings semen at poultry
Cant stand how the chickens that i see him with know me, as loki
Devil god of the jest, obsessed, horns like triceratops on my head
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Open mic topical death, im unfuckwithable when i rhyme with intent

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Old 04-29-2018, 09:23 PM   #2
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I used to be a opiate wreck, now i write bars no one can test
Let the gauge open ya chest, gunsmoke choke you to death
Djinn in the flesh, gut you inside out where you live in your bed
Jump rope witcha crimson instestines, a significant message
I can sin with the pen, repent, or wage all out war with my words
Paint a picture crystal clear, shmear it, or type a porcelain verse
^^Fire...

The whole piece was tbh just thought that section was Ill as fuck, stay upwards G.
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Old 04-29-2018, 10:21 PM   #3
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We gotta collab, Chief
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Old 04-30-2018, 02:29 PM   #4
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Dont like it couldnt get into it
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Old 04-30-2018, 09:50 PM   #5
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We know. You much rather someone fucking you like a faggot, eh? Lol
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@Genocide yo that's a good read man, I enjoyed that! Mixed content, just mainly focused on rhyming like a beast! good shit overall!!

Do more! it'll inspire me to go!
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Old 05-04-2018, 03:00 PM   #7
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Geno, as always fire man. Good to see you and a few more people are still active af around here. First part exis quoted was just stupid good. Wanna hear the audio brotha
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Old 05-04-2018, 04:39 PM   #8
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I always fuck with a Genocide verse.

This was seriously dope.
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I used to be a opiate wreck, now i write bars no one can test
Let the gauge open ya chest, gunsmoke choke you to death
Djinn in the flesh, gut you inside out where you live in your bed
Jump rope witcha crimson instestines, a significant message
I can sin with the pen, repent, or wage all out war with my words
Paint a picture crystal clear, shmear it, or type a porcelain verse
Destroy a whole crew -not a morsel of force, a horseman, a ghost
An orphan who wrote, swung excalibre, thrust my sword in the stone
Important to know, gave my cell phone to e.t. to call homies
Im springstein and bon jovi, a winged demon, invoke me
Grody, ugly as fuck, youd think my father slings semen at poultry
Cant stand how the chickens that i see him with know me, as loki
Devil god of the jest, obsessed, horns like triceratops on my head
Gothic, a mess, and other times shine like photo optics instead
Robotic in bed, diabolical sex, C-3P0 with a golden cock by my legs
Insomnias friend, well -probably more like ive got a problem with rest
The dark knight of gotham -robin, nightwing when i chop at ur text
Open mic topical death, im unfuckwithable when i rhyme with intent

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^You started going in where the quote begins and held it there to where quotations end.

In other words this entire verse was fire. I legit didn't want it to be over nor could I find a spot to break it down due to how nasty it was all around. Your flex game is real gawd. I enjoyed this one a lot.
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Old 05-09-2018, 08:00 PM   #10
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Man this fuckin fire. The "war with my words/porcelain verse" lines stood out to me...but all around nice the whole way through. Gave my cell phone to E.T. to call homies...lmmfao
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Old 05-20-2018, 05:27 PM   #12
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