06-08-2020, 02:41 AM | #1 |
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Semi Finals: FGR Vs. Wanderer - WANDERER WINS
8-Man Show N' Prove Semi-Finals!! Rules Due Dates: • Verses are due Thursday by 11:59 PM PST. • Voting ends MONDAY ideally • Battles that lack votes may close later. • One sided battles may get closed early. • Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ • To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance Line Limit: • Min. = 10 lines • Max. = 20 lines • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. Voting: • I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls. General Rules: • 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. • 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. • Feeding = DQ. • Recycling = DQ. • Biting = DQ. • No freeposting, swaying or bitching. • Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will disqualified. • A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. • If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a verse. • Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. • If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount, and can’t post more lines @FGR @Wanderer |
06-08-2020, 01:46 PM | #2 |
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06-08-2020, 05:54 PM | #3 |
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06-11-2020, 10:13 PM | #5 |
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Wanderers Verse:
A girl probs said ur dick was too small & I doubt u ever got past that let’s be real... this won’t be the first time u’ve had to show n prove & been laughed at Losing streak in the NBL. Last week to Orc’s verse in the worst way & unsurprisingly struggled with Letter’s... since u always forcing them wordplays Not a revered writer. No Oscar Wilde but for sure this kid’s gay Hardly Shakespeare... but I WILL be tryna dislodge one from ur rib cage & I won’t talk shit bout ur weight.. tho it’d make the people chant How can I throw shade on u when even the worlds largest gazebo can’t Srsly.. Clench fists at me? buckshot’ll teach this faker a lesson Pop one in ur jaw & watch ur teeth roll over each other, that’s a display of aggression See I got a .44 for close range but all my choppers are mean If u pulling arms wit the snub nose it’s coz ur girl’s a pig & u don’t wanna be seen VS. FGRs Verse: Punches, personals, wordplay.... I suggest bringing yo best Whatever u got in store for me I'm smashing like a George Floyd protest Everytime he drops a verse the site dies a little. His bars leave us in dire straits if we keep reading wanderoo in text faster than a book on primates A tourney win for you?? that is not what this man will see Keep dreaming, cuz I'll aim this Armiger chest & make sure it's your final fantasy You'll need a ambulance after this beating. My hits are vicious, fag One or two punches will cosmetics to come to your house like a ipsy bag This gay fuck doesn't slay stuff. playing with the chrome will get him hurt if you hear he's raising arms it's most likely some dude taking off his shirt Women despise you. No chick wants to service your boner If a girl bangs him, Wannamaker want to die like a suicidal store owner Last edited by Incredible; 06-12-2020 at 03:51 PM. |
06-12-2020, 10:16 PM | #6 | |
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Wander got this by a line or two in my opinion Fgr had some stuff I didn’t understand and that made the differenxe
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06-13-2020, 08:51 PM | #7 |
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A girl probs said ur dick was too small & I doubt u ever got past that let’s be real... this won’t be the first time u’ve had to show n prove & been laughed at ^ decent opener Losing streak in the NBL. Last week to Orc’s verse in the worst way & unsurprisingly struggled with Letter’s... since u always forcing them wordplays ^ lmao nice one here Not a revered writer. No Oscar Wilde but for sure this kid’s gay Hardly Shakespeare... but I WILL be tryna dislodge one from ur rib cage ^ decent but I've seen it done a lot of different ways & I won’t talk shit bout ur weight.. tho it’d make the people chant How can I throw shade on u when even the worlds largest gazebo can’t ^ this was alright but at the same time was worded kinda awkward Srsly.. Clench fists at me? buckshot’ll teach this faker a lesson Pop one in ur jaw & watch ur teeth roll over each other, that’s a display of aggression ^ ehhhhh See I got a .44 for close range but all my choppers are mean If u pulling arms wit the snub nose it’s coz ur girl’s a pig & u don’t wanna be seen ^ hahaha good closer man FGR: Punches, personals, wordplay.... I suggest bringing yo best Whatever u got in store for me I'm smashing like a George Floyd protest ^ I liked this solid punch to start it off Everytime he drops a verse the site dies a little. His bars leave us in dire straits if we keep reading wanderoo in text faster than a book on primates ^ kinda forced tbh A tourney win for you?? that is not what this man will see Keep dreaming, cuz I'll aim this Armiger chest & make sure it's your final fantasy ^ okay decent reference You'll need a ambulance after this beating. My hits are vicious, fag One or two punches will cosmetics to come to your house like a ipsy bag ^ had to google but alright This gay fuck doesn't slay stuff. playing with the chrome will get him hurt if you hear he's raising arms it's most likely some dude taking off his shirt ^ okay hahaha kinda funny Women despise you. No chick wants to service your boner If a girl bangs him, Wannamaker want to die like a suicidal store owner ^ could have been executed a little better Overall i think Wand squeezed this one out, his was a tiny bit more consistent. Fgr had more misses imo |
06-14-2020, 10:04 AM | #8 |
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show and prove intro was hot
ok statement letter line shakespeare is a lil old my dude lol solid fat lines display of aggression was a banggerr snub nose was funny vs floyd was simple, was ok wanderoo didnt hit googled armiger.. a lil stretch but pts on creativity cosmetic seen before, fresh twist i like it shirt made me laugh out loud fr haha googled wannamaker, aight wanderer was a bit more consistant here.. started to heat up at the end real good.. fgr has good concepts, a lil tweak here and there with a couple lines and he’d have a bigger impact.. good stuff gentlemen v Wanderer
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06-16-2020, 01:30 PM | #9 |
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A girl probs said ur dick was too small & I doubt u ever got past that let’s be real... this won’t be the first time u’ve had to show n prove & been laughed at Subpar opener. Losing streak in the NBL. Last week to Orc’s verse in the worst way & unsurprisingly struggled with Letter’s... since u always forcing them wordplays Not bad, but I wasn't feelin the wording of the 2nd line. And like i've mentioned before, the "you lost to ___ last week" bars don't really impress. Not a revered writer. No Oscar Wilde but for sure this kid’s gay Hardly Shakespeare... but I WILL be tryna dislodge one from ur rib cage Meh & I won’t talk shit bout ur weight.. tho it’d make the people chant How can I throw shade on u when even the worlds largest gazebo can’t Ok Srsly.. Clench fists at me? buckshot’ll teach this faker a lesson Pop one in ur jaw & watch ur teeth roll over each other, that’s a display of aggression Above avg gun bar See I got a .44 for close range but all my choppers are mean If u pulling arms wit the snub nose it’s coz ur girl’s a pig & u don’t wanna be seen Ehhhhhh You had 3 bars in the battle against me better than anything you brought here. Writing fatigue? 5.5/10 VS. FGRs Verse: Punches, personals, wordplay.... I suggest bringing yo best Whatever u got in store for me I'm smashing like a George Floyd protest Basic Everytime he drops a verse the site dies a little. His bars leave us in dire straits if we keep reading wanderoo in text faster than a book on primates The wp didn't work. Wander you? Oooh? tf A tourney win for you?? that is not what this man will see Keep dreaming, cuz I'll aim this Armiger chest & make sure it's your final fantasy So-so gun bar You'll need a ambulance after this beating. My hits are vicious, fag One or two punches will cosmetics to come to your house like a ipsy bag Had to look up Ipsy but i like the wp here This gay fuck doesn't slay stuff. playing with the chrome will get him hurt if you hear he's raising arms it's most likely some dude taking off his shirt I chuckled Women despise you. No chick wants to service your boner If a girl bangs him, Wannamaker want to die like a suicidal store owner Ok 6/10 I'd like to see you be more clever than just using WPs. Wordplays should be the icing on the cake, not the cake itself. If I had to pick, cosmetics was LOTB. Cosmetics > raising arms > aggression > wannamaker/letters/gazebo Vote: FGR |
06-25-2020, 06:35 PM | #10 |
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Pullin arms
Letters Gazebo Armiger Cosmetics WNderer was more consistent here FGR I thought your name plays were a bit too obscure so they didn’t really land Vote - wanderer |
07-05-2020, 09:01 PM | #11 |
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Wand wins
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