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Old 09-26-2016, 06:54 PM   #1
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Old 09-26-2016, 06:57 PM   #2
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Old 09-26-2016, 07:06 PM   #3
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Old 09-27-2016, 07:56 PM   #4
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Old 09-27-2016, 09:05 PM   #5
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Bash's line was confusing and poorly worded. Innovator's line was horribly played, to the point that I'm pretty sure "wasting time" was used on an actual album from the 1990s, though I can't remember which. Still, at least he made sense.

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Old 09-27-2016, 09:23 PM   #6
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Mannnn Inno's first line was niiiice...that shit should have been flipped and used the first line as the punch instead, wasn't feeling the second line so much but could have been a decent opener, it could have been made to flow better with less basic rhyming but Bash's was soft, and it was difficult to follow...plus he used the word red twice in the same line which could have been avoided.

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Old 09-27-2016, 10:09 PM   #7
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I think Bash just came a little soft in this one for whatever reason..

I also agree that Inno's first line was way better than his actual punch. Still enough for me though..

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Old 09-27-2016, 11:04 PM   #8
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I think bash's bar was actually dope.
Inno didn't feel cohesive at all. Also, the bar didn't rhyme very well. Tek nine with wasting time felt like a rushed rhyme. Bash might sound simple at first glance but its actually pretty clever.


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Old 09-28-2016, 06:57 AM   #9
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Innovator gets my vote here.
Bash had a cool concept but he said red twice inn the same bar Thats a No No, innovator had a very played concept but better wording lead to better sting so he got this
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Old 09-28-2016, 05:31 PM   #10
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Bash wording was baaaad on the punch dude
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Old 09-28-2016, 05:51 PM   #11
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Bash... i dont see a problem wit the use of red twice.... its actually a form of wordplay if it has different meaning... but this was kinda a bad choice to use red wit red hot... still the punch was cool

Inno... set up was beast mode bro... punch was ehh too me... wording didnt seem fresh enough wit it....but ok

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Old 09-29-2016, 07:40 AM   #12
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The Red hot was ight, just ight though.... I wasn't feeling the sting on it imo.. While Inno had a not so new concept but over all better wording that made the impact a bit better....my vote goes to Innova
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Inno got it
Bash should have just said 'spillin blood'
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Old 09-29-2016, 11:03 AM   #15
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Wow inno really impressed with that bar....yeah.. vote inno.....close battle tho really, enjoyed bashs humor but for me inno was a bit more creative with it....
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