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Old 04-10-2018, 07:40 AM   #1
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FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!
THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC

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Old 04-10-2018, 11:33 AM   #2
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Let me know. I'm ready whenever.

Down for 16 if you can write that many bars.

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Old 04-10-2018, 12:16 PM   #3
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Let me know. I'm ready whenever.

Down for 16 if you can write that many bars.
Yup unless you wanna go pics. I’ll write tomorrow night
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Old 04-10-2018, 03:20 PM   #4
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Making a Murderer.

Body...

No uppercuts, I’ma keep it real. This line is the set up to a low blow
How are you Killing Spree... when 3 of your 4 wins are a no-show?
During breakfast, lead`ll crack your head. Hope you swallow well
I saw bullets exit ya mouth leaving egg on my shell like Taco Bell
Like basketball when I hit the board & post up... I mangle all limbs
& put ya body parts in a pyramid scheme. That’s a triangle offense
This KAT could steal from the archives but these lines I’m spittin out
You would think Butler checked in... how I got everybody Wiggin out
He tells more stories than a library... so I got him between the aisles
& while he was trying to read up on me I shot him between the browse
Only cuz my gun & you have chemistry. I wouldn’t label that as stable
Cuz the relationship`ll end when he Ca K atom without a periodic table
Your record total is 17-34 in 4 years. 1 win a season. Who’s dumber?
My punches are the best. I only come after Mayweather like summer
My gun left more holes in torsos. Yea, I’ve torn souls the lord knows
I don’t need a finisher… I’ll walk up in your house & let my foreclose

...Bag

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Old 04-14-2018, 02:19 PM   #5
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Killing Spree’s Verse


Shout to cred on the prediction...



S’why
The 9’s from chi romantic wen I dead wacks
Meaning ...
gun’ll kiss ur neck in the same spot you’d find Creds tat
Respek cat? Nah! I fuk women in ur fam before the heat taunt
1 rnd from the shotty’ll hang ur stomach ova ur knees more than Bleaks aunt!
Punch till u sway, & there’s Blue in this man face
KILL bars Destroyer vote game to the point Barc’ll run my fan base
No way pussy sick, I’ll raise the bar lettin the tech rip
Snatch such dead weight, Bags’ll grip u up till his fingers infected
U joined league late, alias circling sum lame shit
Got hit by Cy,Kill.. till ur Lose column avoids a winning rotation
Got 4 9’s that’ll teach son not to fuk w/tha kid
No problem to Foster this beating.. plus I won’t get charged for punching this bitch
Faggit u hit like a women, no way bitch is stopping spree
We’ll never see a win in Snatch purse yet he’ll still claim this lose a robbery
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Old 04-14-2018, 08:21 PM   #6
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Bodysnatcher- thought u had something w. Triangle offense, but no.
Great structure, but ur verses come off hella corny. 3rd one i read from u, i was unfortunately force to vote on this one.

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Cred tat was ok.
Kill, u're sloppy w.wrdin. so there are times ur joint could read hella choppy. I can quote a line from u but he probably had the better verse a whole even tho its corny af.
Doesn't matter, still won imo :)

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Old 04-15-2018, 08:43 PM   #7
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Respek cat? Nah! I fuk women in ur fam before the heat taunt
1 rnd from the shotty’ll hang ur stomach ova ur knees more than Bleaks aunt!
No way pussy sick, I’ll raise the bar lettin the tech rip
Snatch such dead weight, Bags’ll grip u up till his fingers infected

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Like basketball when I hit the board & post up... I mangle all limbs
& put ya body parts in a pyramid scheme. That’s a triangle offense

V/kill, i got him takin this, his cred line an snatch purse coulda been dope
but the wordin killed them concepts tbh, but the ones i quoted hit good.
Bodysnatcher u need to focus on being harsher,
an concepts like the foreclose i did that concept 3yrs ago are dated work on that,
sometimes its good to check the search on here an see if the concepts been done,
keep battling u'll get there. props to both.
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Old 04-16-2018, 09:16 AM   #8
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Like basketball when I hit the board & post up... I mangle all limbs
& put ya body parts in a pyramid scheme. That’s a triangle offense
pretty cool concept
This KAT could steal from the archives but these lines I’m spittin out
You would think Butler checked in... how I got everybody Wiggin out
^this is a cool sports concept that was nicely elevated with the Butler play and KAT in the setup
He tells more stories than a library... so I got him between the aisles
& while he was trying to read up on me I shot him between the browse
^browse is pretty played but I did like the flip here, wording helped

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Respek cat? Nah! I fuk women in ur fam before the heat taunt
1 rnd from the shotty’ll hang ur stomach ova ur knees more than Bleaks aunt!
^cool site/attack line
No way pussy sick, I’ll raise the bar lettin the tech rip
Snatch such dead weight, Bags’ll grip u up till his fingers infected
lol chuckle worthy
U joined league late, alias circling sum lame shit
Got hit by Cy,Kill.. till ur Lose column avoids a winning rotation
^dece nameplay/personal


Snatch concept was cool but the wording absolutely killed it and made it unquotable to me...



Damn, tough call here as I have it even on quotes so it'll come down to the misses...
Overall I've gotta side with BodySnatcher here... played opener aside while some of his concepts/wordplay was played there was at least some form of flip and his wording was so much better, Liked KS's two site related punches and cy,kill was cool enough but he had a couple complete misses imo (i.e. Foster really played) and the Timberwolves line was prob lotb for me.. props to both

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Old 04-16-2018, 09:38 AM   #9
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I have Spree here. Body liked the triangle concept
wording is there, but flips/concepts need work.

snatch & bleaks aunt was eh aight, bad wording issues but liked ur concepts a bit better.

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No uppercuts, I’ma keep it real. This line is the set up to a low blow
How are you Killing Spree... when 3 of your 4 wins are a no-show?
(Meh pretty run of the mill approach seen this angle buncheeeessss even if its true)
During breakfast, lead`ll crack your head. Hope you swallow well
I saw bullets exit ya mouth leaving egg on my shell like Taco Bell
(No . shell/taco just dated)
Like basketball when I hit the board & post up... I mangle all limbs
& put ya body parts in a pyramid scheme. That’s a triangle offense
(Kinda cool)
This KAT could steal from the archives but these lines I’m spittin out
You would think Butler checked in... how I got everybody Wiggin out
(Wiggins. Can't just leave out apart if the phonetics.. Diesnt work if you Cant for the sake of the concept)
He tells more stories than a library... so I got him between the aisles
& while he was trying to read up on me I shot him between the browse
(I like this flip on old wp)
Only cuz my gun & you have chemistry. I wouldn’t label that as stable
Cuz the relationship`ll end when he Ca K atom without a periodic table
(Potential but nah)
Your record total is 17-34 in 4 years. 1 win a season. Who’s dumber?
My punches are the best. I only come after Mayweather like summer
(Noooooooo)
My gun left more holes in torsos. Yea, I’ve torn souls the lord knows
I don’t need a finisher… I’ll walk up in your house & let my foreclose
(Nah)


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Killing Spree’s Verse


Shout to cred on the prediction...



S’why
The 9’s from chi romantic wen I dead wacks
Meaning ...
gun’ll kiss ur neck in the same spot you’d find Creds tat
( I ain't been looking at cred like that bro)
Respek cat? Nah! I fuk women in ur fam before the heat taunt
1 rnd from the shotty’ll hang ur stomach ova ur knees more than Bleaks aunt!
(Lol lotb)
Punch till u sway, & there’s Blue in this man face
KILL bars Destroyer vote game to the point Barc’ll run my fan base
(Ha ok)
No way pussy sick, I’ll raise the bar lettin the tech rip
Snatch such dead weight, Bags’ll grip u up till his fingers infected
(K)
U joined league late, alias circling sum lame shit
Got hit by Cy,Kill.. till ur Lose column avoids a winning rotation
(K)
Got 4 9’s that’ll teach son not to fuk w/tha kid
No problem to Foster this beating.. plus I won’t get charged for punching this bitch
(Ha ok again)
Faggit u hit like a women, no way bitch is stopping spree
We’ll never see a win in Snatch purse yet he’ll still claim this lose a robbery
(Eh ok)


V/ spree took it easy as hell imo
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