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08-21-2020, 10:32 AM
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Empressive
Impress, Empress.
Empires have fallen for less than your natural crown. Hearts have broken for less than your casual frown. You, with no shadow of doubt, are valuable NOW. Rally the crowds. Watch them throw malice in mounds. Watch as they watch as you fall to the ground. Then stand and wipe the dust from your brow. Grasp at the sand, pull on the air it doesn't matter how, just stand. On your own. Empty handed and alone. It is, after all, your throne. |
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08-23-2020, 01:18 PM
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Shrewd as evearthed
Join Date: Aug 2014
Location: Wolverhampton, England
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Battle Record: 28-3
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Welcome back @Certain.
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08-23-2020, 02:19 PM
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low tide in serotonin bay
Join Date: Jul 2013
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Really like what I have read from you thus far man, on point. I like the poetic structure, the kind of vague double meanings to everything and just the layers of it. It’s pretty impressive and makes for wonderful visuals. Good vocabulary as well
Look forward to reading more |
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09-05-2020, 11:32 PM
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Mad fucking dangerous.
Join Date: Jul 2013
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I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws. |
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09-06-2020, 02:10 AM
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living
Join Date: Jan 2013
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it doesn't matter how, just stand
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