07-13-2020, 05:25 PM | #1 |
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Adverse 1-1 vs FGR 1-1 - FGR WINS
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07-13-2020, 05:34 PM | #2 |
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Pics match up pretty well lol sup FGR 12 lines?
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07-15-2020, 07:50 PM | #4 |
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Didn't see battles were set it this section... Check.. 12 is cool ad
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Yoo Throwing back a brewski with that hairstyle? This kid is just hopeless Look like you grabbed clippers n said "fuck, my side burns!" Or is that cuz of the liver cirrhosis? I'm a husky guy fam but face it bruh you're the heavier dude He Hittin the barber like "yo square me up" and they like "bruh...ur whole head is a cube" Your girl running around on u secretly, cuz you're trash and she loves me She's keeping you in the dark for the same reason you are, cuz ur mad fuckin ugly I can say "HA he came dressed for his own funeral!" Let the heater end this battle But I'd rather commend him on his dope cosplay….. of Peter Griffin's shadow In the mag User said we would both be contenders...I agree with half that G Only place you making waves is in the pool and that's cus you built like a manatee Reenact this scene again and fo sho you're getting capped take the photo and then BLAST Last thing cameraman will see is an 'eagle peeking near his head' like the logo in the back |
07-16-2020, 07:29 PM | #6 |
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If I ever see this asshole imma blast off...dumping the 50cal feels great I'll show up to your crib with arms so big it'll rival the one holding that plate Adverse is hated by most. Plz kill yourself we all know you're bound to I mean look at his face.. even the statue feels awkward around you No one wants you here queer... I suggest you leave before getting hit I'd say kick rocks.. but them shoes already look like you were stomping in a gravel pit Trashed ass sneaks...replace them when you get money in your hands I'd rather take my chances with strangers & candy then to ever step in them vans I got a full head of hair with no care... If I was you I'd be cursing Cuz your hairline is backing up more then a non-confrontational person I take bitches to fast food places... Then I get them home for a poking This homo's meeting big boys behind the building & having his mouth wide open
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07-18-2020, 01:23 PM | #8 |
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Throwing back a brewski with that hairstyle? This kid is just hopeless
Look like you grabbed clippers n said "fuck, my side burns!" Or is that cuz of the liver cirrhosis? Lmao I'm a husky guy fam but face it bruh you're the heavier dude He Hittin the barber like "yo square me up" and they like "bruh...ur whole head is a cube" Lmao again great start Your girl running around on u secretly, cuz you're trash and she loves me She's keeping you in the dark for the same reason you are, cuz ur mad fuckin ugly Lol I can say "HA he came dressed for his own funeral!" Let the heater end this battle But I'd rather commend him on his dope cosplay….. of Peter Griffin's shadow Decent In the mag User said we would both be contenders...I agree with half that G Only place you making waves is in the pool and that's cus you built like a manatee This coulda been worded sharper Reenact this scene again and fo sho you're getting capped take the photo and then BLAST Last thing cameraman will see is an 'eagle peeking near his head' like the logo in the back This is ok bit of a reach If I ever see this asshole imma blast off...dumping the 50cal feels great I'll show up to your crib with arms so big it'll rival the one holding that plate decent Adverse is hated by most. Plz kill yourself we all know you're bound to I mean look at his face.. even the statue feels awkward around you Lol this is good No one wants you here queer... I suggest you leave before getting hit I'd say kick rocks.. but them shoes already look like you were stomping in a gravel pit End of this could’ve been worded better but it’s decent Trashed ass sneaks...replace them when you get money in your hands I'd rather take my chances with strangers & candy then to ever step in them vans Lol I got a full head of hair with no care... If I was you I'd be cursing Cuz your hairline is backing up more then a non-confrontational person Punch would’ve come off better the other way round I think I take bitches to fast food places... Then I get them home for a poking This homo's meeting big boys behind the building & having his mouth wide open Lol Ad came out swinging with two haymakers, 3rd was good also. FGR had steady jabs throughout and a solid verse but I’ll give this to adverse for the two LOTBs Vote - adverse |
07-19-2020, 08:24 AM | #9 |
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Yo this was a dope battle
I read adverse and was sure he got it Then read FGR, was feeling everything but the first shoe bar Very close though, I think fgr just edged it Non confrontational was lotb for me |
07-19-2020, 08:57 AM | #10 |
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Throwing back a brewski with that hairstyle? This kid is just hopeless Look like you grabbed clippers n said "fuck, my side burns!" Or is that cuz of the liver cirrhosis? Your girl running around on u secretly, cuz you're trash and she loves me She's keeping you in the dark for the same reason you are, cuz ur mad fuckin ugly FGR: Trashed ass sneaks...replace them when you get money in your hands I'd rather take my chances with strangers & candy then to ever step in them vans I got a full head of hair with no care... If I was you I'd be cursing Cuz your hairline is backing up more then a non-confrontational person Man, I thought this was gonna be lowkey the BoTW - but it didn't really turn out as hype as I thought lol. Still, I enjoyed it for what it was. You both need to work on wording, it's just something that's holding back BOTH of these verses from being as fire as they could be. Overall, not gonna be too wordy, this was a decent little battle, but I liked Ad a little more. Conceptually, I thought he was just better and I laughed more at the cirrhosis line than anything FGR really had. Keep up the good work guys. V - Adverse
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07-19-2020, 12:06 PM | #11 |
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Fuckin ugly Manatee Vs Step in vans Closer Going adverse here. More hits Vote adverse |
07-19-2020, 05:17 PM | #12 |
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eagle vs awkward vans big boys real even.. going quotes here and fgr had one more line i liked.. vans my fav line of the battle too.. good stuff v fgr
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Throwing back a brewski with that hairstyle? This kid is just hopeless
Look like you grabbed clippers n said "fuck, my side burns!" Or is that cuz of the liver cirrhosis? Tad wordy but ok. Cool concept I'm a husky guy fam but face it bruh you're the heavier dude He Hittin the barber like "yo square me up" and they like "bruh...ur whole head is a cube" Again, kinda wordy but made me lol Your girl running around on u secretly, cuz you're trash and she loves me She's keeping you in the dark for the same reason you are, cuz ur mad fuckin ugly Nah bro this wasn’t too hot I can say "HA he came dressed for his own funeral!" Let the heater end this battle But I'd rather commend him on his dope cosplay….. of Peter Griffin's shadow It’s ok In the mag User said we would both be contenders...I agree with half that G Only place you making waves is in the pool and that's cus you built like a manatee Its not the freshest idea’ Reenact this scene again and fo sho you're getting capped take the photo and then BLAST Last thing cameraman will see is an 'eagle peeking near his head' like the logo in the back I didn’t like this. I suppose the punch was just ok but That set up needed punctuation or just to be cut down altogether Vs If I ever see this asshole imma blast off...dumping the 50cal feels great I'll show up to your crib with arms so big it'll rival the one holding that plate Solid opener, not the most creative Adverse is hated by most. Plz kill yourself we all know you're bound to I mean look at his face.. even the statue feels awkward around you im not overly keen No one wants you here queer... I suggest you leave before getting hit I'd say kick rocks.. but them shoes already look like you were stomping in a gravel pit Yeah ok Trashed ass sneaks...replace them when you get money in your hands I'd rather take my chances with strangers & candy then to ever step in them vans heating up more. This was cool I got a full head of hair with no care... If I was you I'd be cursing Cuz your hairline is backing up more then a non-confrontational person this seems simple but I Never seen a receding hairline flip like this and I liked it I take bitches to fast food places... Then I get them home for a poking This homo's meeting big boys behind the building & having his mouth wide open Closer’s ok Man I don’t know if everyone else is gonna find this close to call but I do. I think adverse first two bars coulda been dope with better wording / execution but they fell slightly short. FGR had kick rocks, vans and hairline which were executed pretty well. Ahhggg man. ITS DONE Vote - FGR |
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Throwing back a brewski with that hairstyle? This kid is just hopeless
Look like you grabbed clippers n said "fuck, my side burns!" Or is that cuz of the liver cirrhosis? ok abit wordy good concept I'm a husky guy fam but face it bruh you're the heavier dude He Hittin the barber like "yo square me up" and they like "bruh...ur whole head is a cube" funny light Your girl running around on u secretly, cuz you're trash and she loves me She's keeping you in the dark for the same reason you are, cuz ur mad fuckin ugly came off a bit simple ad at the end I can say "HA he came dressed for his own funeral!" Let the heater end this battle But I'd rather commend him on his dope cosplay….. of Peter Griffin's shadow okish In the mag User said we would both be contenders...I agree with half that G Only place you making waves is in the pool and that's cus you built like a manatee haha nice Reenact this scene again and fo sho you're getting capped take the photo and then BLAST Last thing cameraman will see is an 'eagle peeking near his head' like the logo in the back cool vs. If I ever see this asshole imma blast off...dumping the 50cal feels great I'll show up to your crib with arms so big it'll rival the one holding that plate ok nice reference but it lacked a diss Adverse is hated by most. Plz kill yourself we all know you're bound to I mean look at his face.. even the statue feels awkward around you it makes sense due to his face but this could hav been harsher No one wants you here queer... I suggest you leave before getting hit I'd say kick rocks.. but them shoes already look like you were stomping in a gravel pit haha cool Trashed ass sneaks...replace them when you get money in your hands I'd rather take my chances with strangers & candy then to ever step in them vans nice lol I was trying to figure out a vans line with Ad earlier I got a full head of hair with no care... If I was you I'd be cursing Cuz your hairline is backing up more then a non-confrontational person lol good I take bitches to fast food places... Then I get them home for a poking This homo's meeting big boys behind the building & having his mouth wide open not feeling this too much real tight battle, both had equal amount of misses and punches so it's a tough call.. I think i'm going here with FGR due to his non-confrontational person line. Adverse I see you're trying new styles that's cool I feel you, just shorten a bit the lines and that will improve the readability flow. however excellent verse as always v/fgr |
07-20-2020, 02:17 PM | #16 |
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I'm a husky guy fam but face it bruh you're the heavier dude
He Hittin the barber like "yo square me up" and they like "bruh...ur whole head is a cube" I can say "HA he came dressed for his own funeral!" Let the heater end this battle But I'd rather commend him on his dope cosplay….. of Peter Griffin's shadow Reenact this scene again and fo sho you're getting capped take the photo and then BLAST Last thing cameraman will see is an 'eagle peeking near his head' like the logo in the back If I ever see this asshole imma blast off...dumping the 50cal feels great I'll show up to your crib with arms so big it'll rival the one holding that plate No one wants you here queer... I suggest you leave before getting hit I'd say kick rocks.. but them shoes already look like you were stomping in a gravel pit Trashed ass sneaks...replace them when you get money in your hands I'd rather take my chances with strangers & candy then to ever step in them vans Close as fuck for me. Good reads from both. I thought the strangers and candy from FGR was lotb, Adverse's square up and Peter griffin lines were right behind it. Funny that FGR was up against a verse that had two lines about shoes last week, now he's got two this week.. It's just preference for me, but I got FGR with lotb. Great battle guys V/FGR |
07-20-2020, 04:24 PM | #17 |
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I'm a husky guy fam but face it bruh you're the heavier dude
He Hittin the barber like "yo square me up" and they like "bruh...ur whole head is a cube" I can say "HA he came dressed for his own funeral!" Let the heater end this battle But I'd rather commend him on his dope cosplay….. of Peter Griffin's shadow In the mag User said we would both be contenders...I agree with half that G Only place you making waves is in the pool and that's cus you built like a manatee All decent shit you didn’t have much to work with imo VS If I ever see this asshole imma blast off...dumping the 50cal feels great I'll show up to your crib with arms so big it'll rival the one holding that plate No one wants you here queer... I suggest you leave before getting hit I'd say kick rocks.. but them shoes already look like you were stomping in a gravel pit Trashed ass sneaks...replace them when you get money in your hands I'd rather take my chances with strangers & candy then to ever step in them vans I got a full head of hair with no care... If I was you I'd be cursing Cuz your hairline is backing up more then a non-confrontational person I take bitches to fast food places... Then I get them home for a poking This homo's meeting big boys behind the building & having his mouth wide open Mir started to heat up at the end there. I got FGR with more quotables and his misses were better. That Vans line was dope and your closer was nice. Imo I think adverse didn’t have much to work with or I can’t see shit on my phone but who knows V/FGR |
07-20-2020, 05:19 PM | #18 |
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