Profit (4-3) vs. Infiltration (4-4) - PROFIT WINS

For Battling · 02-05-2018, 02:14 PM

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@Profit @Infiltration

Saint · 02-08-2018, 12:32 AM

8-10

Profit · 02-08-2018, 08:17 AM

8 is good right now but can I get the ext cos I won't be able to write till tomorrow night

Profit · 02-09-2018, 11:09 PM

S' clear w/wack bars u jump on cocks fa chears & daps, par
I mean if u wanted to ride 500 laps.. u shoulda pursued a career in NASCAR
They say u do a bunch fa the site, well don't believe the lies peeps made
Cos we wanna to change the culture, by gettin rid of ur wack ass like the IT trade
U bleed this text shit, Type to ignore ur life to talk w/nerds
Gotta reputation for bein a PUSSY, cos infamous treat his wife to drop a verse
U don't rap sick, straight trash plus ur no savage
Typically it's 40 degrees but today's mid 20's.. faggit ur below average

Blah.. all I cud do

Saint · 02-09-2018, 11:17 PM

U hate pussy & dick down men. that's a retrofit; bitch
Faggot s'like you biting finny, how yo steeze is such an Estrogen Diss
Talk stocks & shares. I broughttt protection out for profit
So 'kaching kaching' on investment sounds of ur bullets bouncin off it
I vacay then return the same day. & never live wit regrets
A Daytripper.....same thing you become when they refuse consensual sex
Weirdo's into fetishes; midgets, animals. KNOW u a freak
Ur porn searches have a more 'XXX gimmick' than the roast did this week.

Enbombz · 02-10-2018, 06:29 PM

prof ill be honestywas feeling your verse here. The opener was mechanically sound it us wasnt a great angle. the closer wasn't bad but it wasn't good either. Felt faiir

inf- opener i like the reference idea more than how you executed it. same with the second nice idea but i want more clarity, 3rd i spent fucking ages thinking about this, if its date raper the its almost so bad its good but its just too much of a reach. closer was okay

i got inf here pretty clearly, v/inf

Sovereign · 02-10-2018, 08:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Profit

S' clear w/wack bars u jump on cocks fa chears & daps, par
I mean if u wanted to ride 500 laps.. u shoulda pursued a career in NASCAR

> Good execution on this one, with solid internal multis. I get the concept and it's fairly solid, though it seems a bit outlandish.

They say u do a bunch fa the site, well don't believe the lies peeps made
Cos we wanna to change the culture, by gettin rid of ur wack ass like the IT trade

> This is an Isaiah Thomas / basketball concept, right? I guess I sort of get it but I'm not feeling it. Sports bars usually go right over my head even when they don't.

U bleed this text shit, Type to ignore ur life to talk w/nerds
Gotta reputation for bein a PUSSY, cos infamous treat his wife to drop a verse

> Is this a personal or something? I don't get it.

U don't rap sick, straight trash plus ur no savage
Typically it's 40 degrees but today's mid 20's.. faggit ur below average

> Again, is this a personal? Or did you just look at the thermometer and come up with this?

Overall: A boring and unimpressive verse, except for the fairly humorous and well-written opener. [9/20]

Quote:

Originally Posted by Infiltration

U hate pussy & dick down men. that's a retrofit; bitch
Faggot s'like you biting finny, how yo steeze is such an Estrogen Diss

> Huh?

Talk stocks & shares. I broughttt protection out for profit
So 'kaching kaching' on investment sounds of ur bullets bouncin off it

> Bullets sound like "kaching kaching?" Nah.

I vacay then return the same day. & never live wit regrets
A Daytripper.....same thing you become when they refuse consensual sex

> Day tripper / Date raper. What the fuck kind of accent does that work in? BATS!

Weirdo's into fetishes; midgets, animals. KNOW u a freak
Ur porn searches have a more 'XXX gimmick' than the roast did this week.

> Alright, I'll give you this one. The XXX concept and resulting bar are both fairly obvious, but the result isn't too bad.

Overall: A verse full of bad bars, especially the hilariously horrid "day tripper" "wordplay." [7/20]

MVGT: Profit

Cred · 02-11-2018, 08:46 AM

Profit had the opener that was cool I thought

Vs

Infiltrations opener was also the only thing I liked in his verse

Tbch I thought inf was gonna catch a body here, idk why. But this shit was honestly a let down. Profit seemed rushed but the opener was better than Infs and those were the only stand out lines of the battle. Inf, 8 lines, 3 fag related punches? Yeah I wasn’t feeling much here but profit edged it IMO

Vote / profit

Habitat · 02-11-2018, 09:01 AM

NASCAR

Vs

XXX Gimmick

Didn't really like either verse but I got profit edging this one out barely

v/profit

Alvin Karpis · 02-11-2018, 09:25 AM

This was tough to call
Both were a bit lazy
Profit had the opener
In had the closer
But the other lines just fell a bit flat, idk
Overall I gotta give it to Profit by a hair
Both didn’t bring what they usually do so it just came down to the better misses
V/Profit

2tripple0 · 02-11-2018, 01:34 PM

S' clear w/wack bars u jump on cocks fa chears & daps, par
I mean if u wanted to ride 500 laps.. u shoulda pursued a career in NASCAR
good
They say u do a bunch fa the site, well don't believe the lies peeps made
Cos we wanna to change the culture, by gettin rid of ur wack ass like the IT trade
better
U bleed this text shit, Type to ignore ur life to talk w/nerds
Gotta reputation for bein a PUSSY, cos infamous treat his wife to drop a verse
nah
U don't rap sick, straight trash plus ur no savage
Typically it's 40 degrees but today's mid 20's.. faggit ur below average
ummm nah

vs.

U hate pussy & dick down men. that's a retrofit; bitch
Faggot s'like you biting finny, how yo steeze is such an Estrogen Diss
uhh nah
Talk stocks & shares. I broughttt protection out for profit
So 'kaching kaching' on investment sounds of ur bullets bouncin off it
maybe
I vacay then return the same day. & never live wit regrets
A Daytripper.....same thing you become when they refuse consensual sex
hmm okay
Weirdo's into fetishes; midgets, animals. KNOW u a freak
Ur porn searches have a more 'XXX gimmick' than the roast did this week.
could've been better worded

vote: profit

Nick James · 02-11-2018, 01:56 PM

Talk stocks & shares. I broughttt protection out for profit
So 'kaching kaching' on investment sounds of ur bullets bouncin off it
Weirdo's into fetishes; midgets, animals. KNOW u a freak
Ur porn searches have a more 'XXX gimmick' than the roast did this week.

man when I read that opener the other day it was different lol..

vs

S' clear w/wack bars u jump on cocks fa chears & daps, par
I mean if u wanted to ride 500 laps.. u shoulda pursued a career in NASCAR

Inf had sum fresher shit here.. took it pretty easy imo

Vote - inf

Barcotic · 02-12-2018, 01:04 AM

You been in more laps than the Indy 500. - Ludacris

Profit
not feeling a whole lot from u this time around, & im sure u didnt get ur opening concept from luda but it doesnt make it any less played

vs

Inf
date ripper was cool i thought

closer could have hit w better wording

v/infiltration

bleak · 02-12-2018, 04:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Infiltration

U hate pussy & dick down men. that's a retrofit; bitch
Faggot s'like you biting finny, how yo steeze is such an Estrogen Diss
-Didn't get this at all
Talk stocks & shares. I broughttt protection out for profit
So 'kaching kaching' on investment sounds of ur bullets bouncin off it
-At first I read this wrong but I see what you did it's decent

The other stuff want misses but not great

Quote:

Originally Posted by Profit

S' clear w/wack bars u jump on cocks fa chears & daps, par
I mean if u wanted to ride 500 laps.. u shoulda pursued a career in NASCAR
- pretty good
U bleed this text shit, Type to ignore ur life to talk w/nerds
Gotta reputation for bein a PUSSY, cos infamous treat his wife to drop a verse
- don't see how ppl didn't connect this it was pretty good but the infamous connection could have been better

Blah.. all I cud do

Decent stuff here I've seen better from both esp. Inf but i gotta lean the other way on this one. Wanted to see maybe a few more lines to match

Profit

Pinot Grij · 02-12-2018, 01:59 PM

Profit

"daps, par" is a shit set-up, the punch is cool, but you could tell a Nascar line was coming by the way you reached on the rhyme
Culture line is the best play on the Cavs trades that I've seen here yet.
I don't follow the Infamous wp
Closer is a little soft too.

Inf

Opener is too much information.
Kaching is ok.
Daytripper setup was a reach for a confusing punchline
Closer is cool

Inf was pretty light -- Profit started strong and tapered off, but those opening bars stand out as the highlight of this match up for me.

Vote -- Profit

02-05-2018, 02:14 PM	#1
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633912	Profit (4-3) vs. Infiltration (4-4) - PROFIT WINS Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday Feb 8th and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC @Profit @Infiltration

02-09-2018, 11:17 PM	#5
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,187 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535865	U hate pussy & dick down men. that's a retrofit; bitch Faggot s'like you biting finny, how yo steeze is such an Estrogen Diss Talk stocks & shares. I broughttt protection out for profit So 'kaching kaching' on investment sounds of ur bullets bouncin off it I vacay then return the same day. & never live wit regrets A Daytripper.....same thing you become when they refuse consensual sex Weirdo's into fetishes; midgets, animals. KNOW u a freak Ur porn searches have a more 'XXX gimmick' than the roast did this week. Last edited by Saint; 02-10-2018 at 02:31 PM.

02-11-2018, 09:01 AM	#9
Habitat Make my day Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 742 Battle Record: 8-6 Champed - 1-2 LR Tournament Rep Power: 7519558	NASCAR Vs XXX Gimmick Didn't really like either verse but I got profit edging this one out barely v/profit __________________

02-11-2018, 01:34 PM	#11
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	S' clear w/wack bars u jump on cocks fa chears & daps, par I mean if u wanted to ride 500 laps.. u shoulda pursued a career in NASCAR good They say u do a bunch fa the site, well don't believe the lies peeps made Cos we wanna to change the culture, by gettin rid of ur wack ass like the IT trade better U bleed this text shit, Type to ignore ur life to talk w/nerds Gotta reputation for bein a PUSSY, cos infamous treat his wife to drop a verse nah U don't rap sick, straight trash plus ur no savage Typically it's 40 degrees but today's mid 20's.. faggit ur below average ummm nah vs. U hate pussy & dick down men. that's a retrofit; bitch Faggot s'like you biting finny, how yo steeze is such an Estrogen Diss uhh nah Talk stocks & shares. I broughttt protection out for profit So 'kaching kaching' on investment sounds of ur bullets bouncin off it maybe I vacay then return the same day. & never live wit regrets A Daytripper.....same thing you become when they refuse consensual sex hmm okay Weirdo's into fetishes; midgets, animals. KNOW u a freak Ur porn searches have a more 'XXX gimmick' than the roast did this week. could've been better worded vote: profit __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

02-12-2018, 01:59 PM	#15
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195060	Profit "daps, par" is a shit set-up, the punch is cool, but you could tell a Nascar line was coming by the way you reached on the rhyme Culture line is the best play on the Cavs trades that I've seen here yet. I don't follow the Infamous wp Closer is a little soft too. Inf Opener is too much information. Kaching is ok. Daytripper setup was a reach for a confusing punchline Closer is cool Inf was pretty light -- Profit started strong and tapered off, but those opening bars stand out as the highlight of this match up for me. Vote -- Profit __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

02-08-2018, 12:32 AM	#2
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,187 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535865	8-10

02-08-2018, 08:17 AM	#3
Profit Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2017 Posts: 106 Battle Record: 10-8 Rep Power: 53065	8 is good right now but can I get the ext cos I won't be able to write till tomorrow night

02-09-2018, 11:09 PM	#4
Profit Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2017 Posts: 106 Battle Record: 10-8 Rep Power: 53065	S' clear w/wack bars u jump on cocks fa chears & daps, par I mean if u wanted to ride 500 laps.. u shoulda pursued a career in NASCAR They say u do a bunch fa the site, well don't believe the lies peeps made Cos we wanna to change the culture, by gettin rid of ur wack ass like the IT trade U bleed this text shit, Type to ignore ur life to talk w/nerds Gotta reputation for bein a PUSSY, cos infamous treat his wife to drop a verse U don't rap sick, straight trash plus ur no savage Typically it's 40 degrees but today's mid 20's.. faggit ur below average Blah.. all I cud do

02-10-2018, 06:29 PM	#6
Enbombz Not Joog Join Date: Nov 2016 Posts: 769 Battle Record: 9-5 Rep Power: 5907769	prof ill be honestywas feeling your verse here. The opener was mechanically sound it us wasnt a great angle. the closer wasn't bad but it wasn't good either. Felt faiir inf- opener i like the reference idea more than how you executed it. same with the second nice idea but i want more clarity, 3rd i spent fucking ages thinking about this, if its date raper the its almost so bad its good but its just too much of a reach. closer was okay i got inf here pretty clearly, v/inf

02-11-2018, 08:46 AM	#8
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899380	Profit had the opener that was cool I thought Vs Infiltrations opener was also the only thing I liked in his verse Tbch I thought inf was gonna catch a body here, idk why. But this shit was honestly a let down. Profit seemed rushed but the opener was better than Infs and those were the only stand out lines of the battle. Inf, 8 lines, 3 fag related punches? Yeah I wasn’t feeling much here but profit edged it IMO Vote / profit

02-11-2018, 09:25 AM	#10
Alvin Karpis 2020 Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 647 Battle Record: 34-12 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Summer Classic V - Summer Classic IV - NBL Season 7 - BA Swag and Flow - BA Swag & Flow Tournament II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV Rep Power: 4052844	This was tough to call Both were a bit lazy Profit had the opener In had the closer But the other lines just fell a bit flat, idk Overall I gotta give it to Profit by a hair Both didn’t bring what they usually do so it just came down to the better misses V/Profit

02-11-2018, 01:56 PM	#12
Nick James death to amen Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 1,279 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 7423715	Talk stocks & shares. I broughttt protection out for profit So 'kaching kaching' on investment sounds of ur bullets bouncin off it Weirdo's into fetishes; midgets, animals. KNOW u a freak Ur porn searches have a more 'XXX gimmick' than the roast did this week. man when I read that opener the other day it was different lol.. vs S' clear w/wack bars u jump on cocks fa chears & daps, par I mean if u wanted to ride 500 laps.. u shoulda pursued a career in NASCAR Inf had sum fresher shit here.. took it pretty easy imo Vote - inf

02-12-2018, 01:04 AM	#13
Barcotic Needs no introduction Join Date: Mar 2016 Location: Toronto Posts: 4,493 Battle Record: 29-31 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - Battle Arena Pics - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - BAL Battle Royale - NPL Roast Rep Power: 3061965	You been in more laps than the Indy 500. - Ludacris Profit not feeling a whole lot from u this time around, & im sure u didnt get ur opening concept from luda but it doesnt make it any less played vs Inf date ripper was cool i thought closer could have hit w better wording v/infiltration