MAINESPITZ Vs. Serious- ATOMIC WINS, 4-0

[Spoken]

10 lines

due in 20 min.

drop fire

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@MAINESPITZ

holla

[Atomic]

k, lemme grab my laptop & i'll start writing. g/l

[Atomic]

blast & attack 'em because this cat is the wackest,
but lemme try to get serious <-- & by that i mean act like a fagg0t.
damn ur fucking trash. ok i'll stop it i'm wildin',
but now i'll lay this square down, FLAT.. like the process of tileing.
1 right hook bitch & i'll diminish your face,
& ur text? it's TIME to STOP.. yet u won't even finish the race.
ur wackness is a sin, i think that son should repent,
beat the fucker & get charged for battery till my iphones 100percent.
slice ur legs off now i'll see what u stand fo',
COAST through this battle PLUS none of your punches will 'land, ho'.

gl sir

[Spoken]

Damn i guess i do suck.

The fuck respect do you deserve? ^^here ur admitting ur wack,
Only reason he the MAIN SPITTER cus being versatile is something he lacks.
Ur an atomic Failure why even try to bring up the past,
JOE took you to school, dropped your ass… SONNED YOU and never turned to look back.
The only main thing about you is that you try to accomplish,
getting acknowledge for being the first to RECYCLE YA GARBAGE!
Im done playin' nice cus elevation is the only thing i've defined,
your elevation is no where near recognition<--- just like ur david blaine punchline.

Yeah. I've only ever done longbar & that was from like '05-'09.. I don't really like shortbar apparently haha.

That right there is a bad message should always keep that in your head,
Cus in the end “Lets Beef” but with my “rap-royalty”…
… I just displayed killing you with your home style of TEXT!



blah.......

[Spoken]

@MAINESPITZ nice drop
@SiK @Sharp Nine @Defiant you know im good with voting right!?

[Atomic]

cool votes plz

[Atomic]

I voted on every battle in BA SC n BL. make this open for votes plz :)

[StarFaggot]

Maine

blast & attack 'em because this cat is the wackest,
but lemme try to get serious <-- & by that i mean act like a fagg0t.
Nope, concept needs to be flipped. "I'd get serious but that would mean being a fagg0t." something like that.. you just said you want to act like a fagg0t
damn ur fucking trash. ok i'll stop it i'm wildin',
but now i'll lay this square down, FLAT.. like the process of tileing.
decent...
1 right hook bitch & i'll diminish your face,
& ur text? it's TIME to STOP.. yet u won't even finish the race.
not hitting
ur wackness is a sin, i think that son should repent,
beat the fucker & get charged for battery till my iphones 100percent.
lol this is a bit silly but lulz
slice ur legs off now i'll see what u stand fo',
COAST through this battle PLUS none of your punches will 'land, ho'
ok concept... lacked in effectiveness


Serious

The fuck respect do you deserve? ^^here ur admitting ur wack,
Only reason he the MAIN SPITTER cus being versatile is something he lacks.
This isn't what you wanted.
Ur an atomic Failure why even try to bring up the past,
JOE took you to school, dropped your ass… SONNED YOU and never turned to look back.
lulz at never looked back.. this is kinda ehh though
The only main thing about you is that you try to accomplish,
getting acknowledge for being the first to RECYCLE YA GARBAGE!
no sir
Im done playin' nice cus elevation is the only thing i've defined,
your elevation is no where near recognition<--- just like ur david blaine punchline.
not good bruh
That right there is a bad message should always keep that in your head,
Cus in the end “Lets Beef” but with my “rap-royalty”…
… I just displayed killing you with your home style of TEXT!
no suh

Seems like Serious couldn't really think of punchlines so he kinda labored through this. Maine had an ok verse. Kept it simple but almost didn't have any really horrible misses. MVGT MAINE

[Atomic]

thx. 1-0 upz

[Sharp]

blast & attack 'em because this cat is the wackest,
but lemme try to get serious <-- & by that i mean act like a fagg0t.
kinda worked, 'get serious' might not have been the best wording tho
damn ur fucking trash. ok i'll stop it i'm wildin',
but now i'll lay this square down, FLAT.. like the process of tileing.
alright
1 right hook bitch & i'll diminish your face,
& ur text? it's TIME to STOP.. yet u won't even finish the race.
eh
ur wackness is a sin, i think that son should repent,
beat the fucker & get charged for battery till my iphones 100percent.
battery flip is kinda played
slice ur legs off now i'll see what u stand fo',
COAST through this battle PLUS none of your punches will 'land, ho'.
ok


The fuck respect do you deserve? ^^here ur admitting ur wack,
Only reason he the MAIN SPITTER cus being versatile is something he lacks.
close, wording didnt help it connect
Ur an atomic Failure why even try to bring up the past,
JOE took you to school, dropped your ass… SONNED YOU and never turned to look back.
came out kinda statementish
The only main thing about you is that you try to accomplish,
getting acknowledge for being the first to RECYCLE YA GARBAGE!
flow/rhymes were cool but in general this bar was hella statementish
Im done playin' nice cus elevation is the only thing i've defined,
your elevation is no where near recognition<--- just like ur david blaine punchline.
okay, kind of weak

That right there is a bad message should always keep that in your head,
Cus in the end “Lets Beef” but with my “rap-royalty”…
… I just displayed killing you with your home style of TEXT!
cool idea, done a lot, but still cool. didnt really come out too strong though


Maine had better hits. got it pretty easy. keep up mentlegen

v/mainespitz

[Atomic]

thx fgt

[Spoken]

PROPS ON THIS MATCH @MAINE

[Atomic]

yea for sure. thought we would have more than 2 votes tho lol

[Atomic]

Close this..or more votes..idc

[Atomic]

^^^^^

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bump

[Atomic]

lmao wtf.^

close this shit my god

[Xnub]

I wasn't really feeling any of their lines...This battle came off pretty weak for me. MAINSPITZ def came more direct, and can form a punchline better than serious... so on that alone he gets the win here.

mvgt: mainspitz

[Flow]

process of tileing & phones 100percent.

vs

david blaine punchline (I liked that nice personal)


Vote Maine....